Fantasy The Order of Seven - Supernatural Victorian thriller - interest check

[ADarkAndStormyNight]

Another fun fact!! Throughout the 19th century (and definitely in the 1850s), it wasn't at all uncommon for men to be wearing corsets, as well.

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This was the fashionable silhouette-- and most men do not naturally have that trim of a nipped waist. So, corsets and chest enhancers were worn under the clothes. This would also help the clothing lie smoother and fit closer.

(Also, open challenge to anyone to guess how many corsets I currently own.)

Corset time, WOOT

 

[Barbas]

I made a replacement character. Hopefully, it will fit the tone of the rp better than the first did.

 

[NINEAM]

Is it too late to submit a CS?

 

[SilverFlight]

Is it too late to submit a CS?

Not technically, but there are more applicants than I have spaces.

 

[SilverFlight]

idalie 100% accepted, you have put so much careful thought into your character I am incredibly impressed, nice conspiring with another player for relations XD I love it.

 

[idalie]

idalie 100% accepted, you have put so much careful thought into your character I am incredibly impressed, nice conspiring with another player for relations XD I love it.

Aw thank you! Xx
Crime fighting cousins aaa

 

[SilverFlight]

Dominaiscna accepted! Maybe you can collude with Cashi for vampire villains inc?

 

[SilverFlight]

Naberius accepted!

 

[Naberius]

Woo! Thank you, this is going to be fantastic!

 

[SilverFlight]

I made a replacement character. Hopefully, it will fit the tone of the rp better than the first did.

The new character is interesting, but I still can't accept it. It's really not detailed enough and I don't think this character would be a good fit for the team we have.

Spoiler: edits

1. Your character needs to have a glamour to blend in to the mundane world. He can't go about looking like the pic you have.
2. I would like at least one weakness beyond what is written in the lore, one specific to your character. Holy water is not a weakness, it has no effect. I explained this to another user earlier up. It will only work if its been infused with purifying herbs.
3. Your character's skill doesn't really work well in a field dynamic, you can have more skills than just the one.
4. The personality really doesn't lend itself well to working in a team dynamic, I've noticed no room for growth.
5. You wrote nothing for character flaws.
6. Your backstory doesn't tell us much about where he comes from/what his motivations are.

 

[Barbas]

The new character is interesting, but I still can't accept it. It's really not detailed enough and I don't think this character would be a good fit for the team we have.

Spoiler: edits

1. Your character needs to have a glamour to blend in to the mundane world. He can't go about looking like the pic you have.
2. I would like at least one weakness beyond what is written in the lore, one specific to your character. Holy water is not a weakness, it has no effect. I explained this to another user earlier up. It will only work if its been infused with purifying herbs.
3. Your character's skill doesn't really work well in a field dynamic, you can have more skills than just the one.
4. The personality really doesn't lend itself well to working in a team dynamic, I've noticed no room for growth.
5. You wrote nothing for character flaws.
6. Your backstory doesn't tell us much about where he comes from/what his motivations are.

Wait, by nothing, do you mean the flaws I put in aren't enough, or do you mean that there's actually nothing? Because I'm fairly certain that I had at least a paragraph there, unless I accidentally deleted it during one of the edits.

 

[SilverFlight]

Wait, by nothing, do you mean the flaws I put in aren't enough, or do you mean that there's actually nothing? Because I'm fairly certain that I had at least a paragraph there, unless I accidentally deleted it during one of the edits.

Ah, you're using night mode, the text was in white. No, those flaws are just him being abraisive. Character flaws are things that could hinder your character in a specific situation. Could be exploited, are detrimental to your character specifically, not (only) to those around him.

 

[SilverFlight]

Vacuum your character is great, but unfortunately we hit capacity. If you like, I can put your name on the wait list.
MJ ._. Same thing, and here is your old character sheet: Fantasy - The Order of Seven - Characters

 

[Vacuum]

SilverFlight
Ah, I didn't realize. Wait list sounds good to me though!

 

[Cashi]

Oh

 

[Cashi]

What's

 

[Cashi]

This?

 

[Cashi]

You

 

[Cashi]

Wanted

 

[SilverFlight]

lmao, beat the system Cashi!

 

[Cashi]

Spam?

 

[Cashi]

I'll

 

[Cashi]

Give

 

[Cashi]

You

 

[Cashi]

Spam.