Seems like a decent concept. As with anything, could use a little refining. But i find that just comes with time and exploring the character more. I've actually had sab for about a year now, which is why I have so many details about him, a lot I forget about until it comes up in context. Like the fact he can't cook to save his life. (At least he can't really get food poisoning though lmao)
He's got that platinum membership for 10% off all purchases over 1000 yen, plus accumulated credit score.
Now I want candy and a slurpee
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Well I've read it and I can say I quite like your character, certainly an unique personality to have around I especially like what you have written for her motivations! It's seems to me like there aren't any problems with it other than formatting, which seems to have gotten a little messy.
No problem! Hope what little I said helps.
It will. Thanks again
Castello
It looks like your spoilers formatting got a bit goofed.
Nuuuuu anything but goofed
Absollover77
I'll have the teacher take notice of her in my next post, hope you've enjoyed the story thus far though!
I shall await your post good sir or lady
Yes! Please do!
sullen
. I presume Ken and Conry know eachother, or at least of eachother and their quirks? I don't think you get hired and only show up day of, I feel like there'd be some transition with U.A at least.
ManofManyRoles
I was thinking the same! Probably met at some faculty meeting before the start of the school year, but maybe don't know each other personally yet. Would be fun to have some teacher interactions (mostly just lamenting to each other about the students).
NO KERMIT NO!!! PUT THAT DOWN!!!
*flashbacks to point crow's pokemon insurgence lets play where he made a pokemon move called "gun" and taught it to a marowak*
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
