You've seen past tense writing, you've seen present tense writing. But there should be a RP where it's in future tense.
"Ashley is gonna kick Gary's butt and laugh at him mockingly"
"Gary is going to cry and magically overpower her with the power of friendship suddenly."
"Ashley will hecking die"
PSA for newer artists:
For the love of all that is good, be gentle about your colour schemes. Try to use fully saturated colours sparingly, if at all. Dulled colours can convey emotion, too! Don't shy from them!
•There is an oddly shaped package on your doorstep.
•It is distinctly human body-shaped.
•It is covered in a massive red bow, and there seems to be a card on top.