So, I enjoy music while writing, which I don't think is an uncommon thing. I also like finding music that can match a scene, be a piece of it, or just match character mood. This was it for the first (delayed) reply.
How long would it take for Willow to ALMOST not expect to see him again? Like, on the border of not recognizing him if he wore his hair down, or wore a different outfit? Something that, at a glance, she might not register it's him, but ofc, give her a minute or less and she'd know?
I mean, working in retail even people who make an impression are going to melt into other faces since you see so many. I'd say he'd probably be a good deal faded quickly enough but also think that maybe Diane would bring him up for the first few weeks to pester her? Two months tops
Alrighty, a month and a half then. In that time Diana would probably tease Willow, and also lament her missed the opportunity to have back and forth banter herself-- and never jump down a ladder again!--and also Layla would have given her two weeks notice to move with Kevin to NY. Diana's in highschool, so she'd be back to school in September, which would leave Willow without Layla or Diana during school-year, working in the shop.
Sounds good. If they're meeting at the pub and she's looking for a job, I'll probably either have it so she needs a second job or that she quit since retail sucks.
I thought it fit better to tie this scene up first before the 2 month time skip, so if you have anything Willow may respond to this last one, that'd be greeat. If not, I can cut right to the skip.