Fantasy Conatus - The Great War (OOC)

[Fred Colon]

And then... There was one.

Everyone send their energy to Enterelysium! They're going to do a spirit bomb and defeat Freeza!

Or. Wait. Wrong medium. This isn't an anime.

 

[KingofAesir]

My post had been edited after talking with Edric if anyone wants to read.

 

[Edric Yuma]

Enolx enterelysium KingofAesir Fred Colon All you beautiful people have posted, hurray!!! I’ll get my post up within the next few days

 

[enterelysium]

yes! I got a post in! DDDD

 

[Edric Yuma]

Does anyone know if quotation marks go before the period or after the period when you're quoting a name or something (not dialogue)? I think I get this wrong every time but I'm not sure.

 

[KingofAesir]

Does anyone know if quotation marks go before the period or after the period when you're quoting a name or something (not dialogue)? I think I get this wrong every time but I'm not sure.

After, I believe.

 

[Enolx]

Quotation Marks: Rules and Examples

Quotation marks are a type of punctuation used to show direct quotes, dialogue, and certain titles or otherwise to set aside words in…

www.grammarly.com

 

[Edric Yuma]

Enolx The fact that it took a few pages of writing to explain how to use quotation marks is precisely why I hate quotation marks. >_< Let's just write like Hebrews and use no quotations!

(Thanks for info tho)

 

[Enolx]

English right. and in response to the Hebrew comment.

“And how would people know we quoted?”
-Probably Jesus

 

[Edric Yuma]

"And then Jesus said, 'Genitals like those of donkeys...' ah shit, wrong paragraph, my bad"

- Early churches

 

[KingofAesir]

How's it going Edric Yuma

 

[Edric Yuma]

How's it going Edric Yuma

I'll probably have it up tomorrow! I wrote another really long post, so I'm trying to make it a little more fun to read than just a slog of dialogue at the moment

 

[KingofAesir]

I'll probably have it up tomorrow! I wrote another really long post, so I'm trying to make it a little more fun to read than just a slog of dialogue at the moment

Awesome! Take your time. Can't wait!

 

[Fred Colon]

 

[Fred Colon]

Don't know how much this applies to RP stuff, but it's an interesting video I watched on world building.

 

[Edric Yuma]

That's really cool! I'm not sure if I lean more towards soft or hard world building, but I definitely have been trying to world build at a much slower pace than I have in the past. You guys probably don't know this, but this RP is actually loosely based off a failed one I tried years back called Percipience. In my opinion, it failed because I world built way too much out of the gate and overwhelmed everyone with information - I had like 50+ pages of planning at the start, which led to large inconsistencies in my plot that I had to keep trying to fix. Hopefully this one goes better!

Also update: I said I would post today, but it'll probably be very late tonight before I actually post! I'm still at "shitty first draft" level and need to make sure typos and whatnot are fixed before I post again. I put it in a word counter and I have 15k words at the moment - hopefully I can cut some of that down!

 

[KingofAesir]

I'm excited! Take your time I'm a night owl I'll probably still be awake by the time you post so you're good.

 

[Fred Colon]

I live in the other side of the world so it'll still be day time here I think! Haha. Take your time. And hey, I have to say from the RP's I've seen that could be true. It happens with my d and d sessions too. It always goes better if you have a basic outline of the world and some plot and government and what have you elements but let the players flesh out the world as it goes.

You defenitly haven't overloaded us so far!

 

[Edric Yuma]

Hey I posted! Let me know if you all have any questions, but basically the way I see it is your characters reacting (or not) to becoming a Titan, getting to know each other through conversations on the aircraft (excluding maybe Rosaria, who could be too cool for government vehicles? Idk, up to Enolx) and through conversations at the Titan Outpost in Dagonpoint. Think of the surrounding area as a super dangerous Amazon rainforest - dense, hot, humid. Don't worry if you have to make short, frequent posts to converse with other characters; that's to be expected in times of dialogue. Sorry if this part seems a little slow, but at least conversation (literally) builds character

 

[Edric Yuma]

Hey I posted! Let me know if you all have any questions, but basically the way I see it is your characters reacting (or not) to becoming a Titan, getting to know each other through conversations on the aircraft (excluding maybe Rosaria, who could be too cool for government vehicles? Idk, up to Enolx) and through conversations at the Titan Outpost in Dagonpoint. Think of the surrounding area as a super dangerous Amazon rainforest - dense, hot, humid. Don't worry if you have to make short, frequent posts to converse with other characters; that's to be expected in times of dialogue. Sorry if this part seems a little slow, but at least conversation (literally) builds character

Enolx Fred Colon KingofAesir enterelysium Just in case notifications aren't working again

 

[Fred Colon]

Posted my response! It's just her reaction to the letter. Feel free to interact with Rena if you want! When someone else moves into the airship I'll move Rena in there as well. Enolx KingofAesir enterelysium Edric Yuma

 

[Fred Colon]

Hey I posted! Let me know if you all have any questions, but basically the way I see it is your characters reacting (or not) to becoming a Titan, getting to know each other through conversations on the aircraft (excluding maybe Rosaria, who could be too cool for government vehicles? Idk, up to Enolx) and through conversations at the Titan Outpost in Dagonpoint. Think of the surrounding area as a super dangerous Amazon rainforest - dense, hot, humid. Don't worry if you have to make short, frequent posts to converse with other characters; that's to be expected in times of dialogue. Sorry if this part seems a little slow, but at least conversation (literally) builds character

Also, I love conversations and character interactions! They're usually super fun!

 

[Enolx]

Rosaria will be on the ship. Maybe with some extras, but he will be there.

 

[Fred Colon]

Ok, cool. I'll make a post about her getting on the ship when you post that.

 

[Enolx]

Sounds good.