ANNOUNCEMENT: Preparations for Episode 5

Does that mean it's fine now? I'm confused XD

I'm saying I vote for Juliana and as for Cecilia I think you can maneuver a stat or two from willpower and still make sense if you wanted to. With such high willpower I imagine Cecilia could keep focus in the middle of a bombing exercise! I approve/vote for Cecilia too. =)
 
Cecilia I think you can maneuver a stat or two from willpower and still make sense if you wanted to.
One can do, two makes it too close to defense for my liking and willpower (concentration) needs to overpower the air immunity (which seems to be defense now) first for the current sensing to work >w<
I imagine it functions as some sort of wind-based sonar, picking up wind disturbance rather than sound waves~
 
Natealie Natealie Necessity4Fun Necessity4Fun welian welian
I added rank, limiter, and added stats.

As for the suggestion Nessy made on separating the inanimate objects from things like water for easier damage transferal, that's what I did. No water in the pots, etc.

Also I took out a couple swarm forms as well.
 
3/3, finally! It's 2:30 AM I regret NOTHING!

You know what to expect. Nessy knows no 'simplicity' neither 'brevity' when it comes to writing : P

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Going over characters that I don't think are approved yet. Please be warned this is critique about stats!

@Zahzi - I think Red's stats could be updated to reflect what he is capable of in-game. Right now he is Health- 5, Strength- 4, Defense- 9, Agility- 2, Intelligence- 2, Willpower- 4, Energy- 1. I know most of these stats are because of what the stats used to be (there was no energy and others were not as defined). I'd suggest the following.
  • Health- Reduce from 5 to 2 or 3
  • Strength- Reduce from 4 to 2 or 3
  • Defense- Fine as is or reduce to 7 or 8
  • Agility- ok (I assume he doesn't use magnetism to fly)
  • Intelligence- ok
  • Willpower- Reduce from 4 to 2 or 3
  • Energy- Boost to justify all his magnetism powers. Depending on how you reduce your other stats, you can get 2 or 3 from health, 1 or 2 from strength, 1 or 2 from defense, and 1 or 2 from willpower to boost it up to 9

ViAdvena ViAdvena - For Mary's stats, I am somewhat curious why she has agility, intelligence, willpower, and energy all at 4. I really like her power and think she's pretty damn neat, but I am somewhat confused what statistic she uses to create portals? Assuming it's energy, she doesn't necessarily need extra points in intelligence or willpower. Agility makes sense she can transport herself and things, but the intelligence and willpower stats confuse me! It is my understanding a 4 in a stat means it is outside the realm of normal human possibility, thus it is impacted/raised by the powers of the super.


Malikai Malikai - You know I love JJ! I think everything about him makes sense. You have my vote!


The J The J - Hadrian's stats are, to me, a bit weird. I realize this is fundamentally based on a difference of thought/opinion I have with the prior character committee. The current system rewards creative powers and originality (as much as you can be in a super RP) and while I respect that, some of the characters benefit from a stat elasticity that I think is detrimental to someone who has a more simple power. Right now, the more exotic the power the easier it is to pay a low cost (stat wise) for what will cost someone far more. For example, let's take an air manipulator. They pay energy cost in their stat pool, but if they use it to alter their agility they need to also pay towards agility, right? Yet others sink most of their cost into the most applicable skill (e.g. energy for the air manipulator), leave everything else at 1-3, but can still justify boosting the skills in practical use because of the power. So which is right and what is wrong? Do you pay for ALL the stat potential your power affects, or just the most applicable one and stretch it as much as you can explain? It is my understanding it's the former for a stat is what you are capable of with that statistic, regardless of whether or not you take advantage.

Hadrian sort of falls under this umbrella where I shrug my shoulders at his stats and say... I dunno! I know the prior CC said that the spread as it was made everything make sense, but I personally scratch my head. Right now his power is being used to explain displaying good agility (not lagging too far behind Viola in one scene, and coordinated against Erik in a fight), being very strong (strength), regenerating (health), and being tough/durable as well as having pain nullification (defense). I think this is a very good concept and I sincerely like Hadrian, but the stat spread doesn't fit what he does. If it was my character this is what I would think would make sense:
  • Health: Boost from 3 to 5 (to justify regeneration) since Eden Trammel just heals a bit better at 4
  • Strength: Reduce from 4 to 3 possibly since his strength, while not visible like a weightlifter, is within the realm of human capability?
  • Defense: Makes sense with power nullification, but you might be able to reduce to 4 since he's not impervious (like having metal skin)
  • Agility: A bit weird, Hadrian seems pretty agile? I'd boost to 2 or 3
  • Intelligence: Ok
  • Willpower: Could reduce from 3 to 2 since he doesn't power through pain, he just never feels it
  • Energy: Ok
Again, these are just my thoughts. I know that most of prior CC strongly disagree with my concepts/ideas about stats, so you do you. If you like my suggestions take it, if you don't, don't! I <3 you J-man.


Necessity4Fun Necessity4Fun - I am not sure why Juliana has willpower 4 and energy 5. I'd make it willpower 3 and energy 6 unless she has abnormally high willpower as a byproduct of her power? Otherwise she has my vote.

Cecilia
I am also side-eyeing that willpower stat. I can't find the link to the stat descriptions, but does she use energy or willpower as a stat to manipulate air? I'd wager you can go either way. If you reduced willpower to 3, you could increase her agility to 4 (so she can flyyyyy) and her defense to 3 since she has immunity to air? That's a toughie how I'd do the stats. I don't think you necessarily need both willpower and energy so high, though, as other manipulators don't?


Swoob Swoob - Why is his defense 4? That's beyond normal human capability. Is he super tough? I didn't see a reason for it in his power explanations but it's totally possible I missed it. Otherwise I love him!
Edens health and defense are 4 as a result of his regeneration, and his defense is also 4 slightly because of his insanely high willpower. Does that make enough sense or should I change it?
 
welian welian Ask and you shall receive... It's a table!
I'll keep this updated

CharacterVotesRe-Approved?
Nicholas Chrysanthemum3Yes?
Larry3Yes
Melody Vance3Yes
Lucas Marsolet3Yes
Hunter 'Red' Ward3Pending stats review
Marianne Ross3Yes
Jeremiah Johnson3Yes
Hadrian Alburn3Yes
Juliana Alvarenga3Yes
Cecilia Pellegrini3Yes
Eden Trammel3Yes
Kendrick Haywood3Yes
Chris Kravitz3Yes
Isabella Chase3Yes
Gavin Dabbs3Yes
Aaron Mallory3Yes
Lars Magnusson2Pending Edit
Manami Hamasaki2Pending stats review
Page Morgan3Yes
Kate Barrett3Yes
Mitch Castle2Pending review
Anthony Costanzo3Yes
Maximilian Shulze3Yes
Luther Rousseau3Yes
Eve Knox1Pending Stats review and Edit
Avoyelles Aubin-Mignault3Yes
Tabitha Crane1Pending review
Tomoko Sato1Pending review
Naran Ihbarhasvad2Pending review
Trent Edwards---Pending stats review
Pitchard Knight2Pending review
Jason Swan3Yes
Lazarus (Allen McNabb)---Pending review
Anneliese Van Can---Pending review
William 'Billy' Jason Petrovich1Pending review
Bianca Attilio2Pending Edit
Viola Porter--Pending review

Pending:
  • Review - Needs more critiques and votes/hasn't received critique yet
  • Stats review - Someone requested stats clarification/suggested a change and it hasn't been done/cleared/re-critiqued yet
  • Edit - Something in the profile needs an edit/clarification and it hasn't been done/cleared yet

PS: All pendencies must be cleared before a character is approved, even if with the required number of votes.
New disputes can bring a character already approved back to discussion if made within 3 days.
 
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Edens health and defense are 4 as a result of his regeneration, and his defense is also 4 slightly because of his insanely high willpower. Does that make enough sense or should I change it?

Hmmmm, so does he regenerate or not? In your little blurb you state, "It isn't anything so grand as to call it regeneration, but he can recover just a bit faster." That totally makes sense for a health 4, but if you want straight up regeneration, you could bump it up slightly more to 5 in my opinion? Regarding defense, it is my understanding that is the ability to take a hit without taking damage (like armor, shielding, etc.) or mitigating what the damage would do a normal person in some way. Unless Eden is tougher, I'm not sure it makes sense to have him at defense 4. Health is typically utilized for regeneration/healing/vitality. When I made my boring, simple regenerator she had health 8; this meant she'd get just as damaged from a blow as anyone else, but she'd immediately start regenerating. I also gave her high willpower because I was instructed this was the ability to take a blow and keep on trucking (she doesn't have pain nullification so she feels everything). Obviously Eden has high willpower because that's what stat he uses for the wound transfer super ability which I think is totally fitting, so willpower isn't JUST the ability to persevere through injuries, distractions, etc.

Think of it this way. Someone shoots random super dude:

Health 4: He starts healing from the bullet wound faster than a normal person
Defense 4: He's less damaged from the bullet wound than a normal person
Willpower 4: He's able to power through the pain from the bullet faster than a normal person

Again, these are just my thoughts. I'm not CC or anything, so I am just giving you what I think/understand/feel the stats to be. I'm not trying to come across as a stat authority, just giving ideas on how to make them more linear across characters and what makes sense to me internally. =)
 
Hmmmm, so does he regenerate or not? In your little blurb you state, "It isn't anything so grand as to call it regeneration, but he can recover just a bit faster." That totally makes sense for a health 4, but if you want straight up regeneration, you could bump it up slightly more to 5 in my opinion? Regarding defense, it is my understanding that is the ability to take a hit without taking damage (like armor, shielding, etc.) or mitigating what the damage would do a normal person in some way. Unless Eden is tougher, I'm not sure it makes sense to have him at defense 4. Health is typically utilized for regeneration/healing/vitality. When I made my boring, simple regenerator she had health 8; this meant she'd get just as damaged from a blow as anyone else, but she'd immediately start regenerating. I also gave her high willpower because I was instructed this was the ability to take a blow and keep on trucking (she doesn't have pain nullification so she feels everything). Obviously Eden has high willpower because that's what stat he uses for the wound transfer super ability which I think is totally fitting, so willpower isn't JUST the ability to persevere through injuries, distractions, etc.

Think of it this way. Someone shoots random super dude:

Health 4: He starts healing from the bullet wound faster than a normal person
Defense 4: He's less damaged from the bullet wound than a normal person
Willpower 4: He's able to power through the pain from the bullet faster than a normal person

Again, these are just my thoughts. I'm not CC or anything, so I am just giving you what I think/understand/feel the stats to be. I'm not trying to come across as a stat authority, just giving ideas on how to make them more linear across characters and what makes sense to me internally. =)
yeah that's true - Im gonna change it when I home
 
Everyone should write critiques and reviews like Syrenrei more often.
 
KRAVITZ, C

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Shows how much I pay attention!! Maybe I'll actually succeed in killing him off this episode. Or maybe not. I don't want to start the March of the Knights until
Teh Frixz Teh Frixz has reliable internet, and that might be a while into Episode 5.
 
*Cut to the Knights spending a good twenty minutes dousing themselves in holy water before actually doing anything*
 

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