ANNOUNCEMENT: Preparations for Episode 5

[The J]

Because in text over the internet, we genuinely cannot tell if you truly don't understand the explanation, or if you were against some detail of the power.

Well it was essentially the former, but I wouldn't think either was something to actually get angry about.

 

[Zahzi]

BRAHN, JORDAN

• Stats
• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Skills and Flaws
• Tools & Weapons
• Gallery

• Heroism Meter
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Courage	▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱	04
  Altruism	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	05
  Order	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Kindness	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱	07
  Proaction	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Diplomacy	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	05
  Composure	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	03

  Ability Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Health	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01
  Strength	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01
  Defense	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01
  Agility	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01
  Intelligence	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Willpower	▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱	04
  Energy	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01

• Full Name
  Jordan Ortega Brahn
  
  Nicknames
  Shorty; Shortstack; Nubs; Dexter; Geeksquad; Mini-me; Bubble-Boy; Chemo; Mama's Boy; Saltine.
  
  Codename
  N/A
  
  Gender
  Male
  
  Age
  15
  
  Rank
  C Rank
  
  Limiter
  Inactive, Level 1
  
  Role
  Student
  
  
• Race
  Caucasian
  
  Hair
  White
  
  Eyes
  Yellow
  
  Height
  4' 0"
  
  Figure
  Short, slim, and vulnerable to a rogue leaf.
  
  Notes
  We're pretty sure he's broken a leg after an unfortunate clothespin incident.
  
  
• Creative
  He isn't a fan of presenting anything in a boring manner. He tends to place a 'spin' on projects and assignments. Most of the time its harmless. Other times though....Well...This includes instances where such 'boring' scenarios are around for public safety. He felt a baking soda volcano was boring so he had one that sprayed the entire auditorium with liquid nitrogen. You can blame his father for this trait.
  
  Observant
  Jordan is known for picking up on any detail he sees in something that has his attention. Subtle movement, expression, color, it doesn't matter. Jordan seems to have a knack for keying into every little detail in front of him to an almost obsessive level....Probably a trait from his mother.
  
  Blunt
  Jordan has made it a habit to 'dumb down' his words for most people so they can actually follow along in what he's saying. Unfortunately, it never starts this way. It BEGINS with his technobabble, then when he catches on the others around him are lost, he will speak slowly, deliberately, and make sure everyone is on board in the most painful of ways. His mother didn't help at all with not making this habitual....
  
  Disrespectful
  He tends to follow in his mother's footsteps and to not exactly know how to listen to authority because he does not really see them as WORTH his time. Not that it only affects authority figures, but anyone he doesn't really see necessary of his patience. Blame his mother. Even though she tries to blame his father. She lies. LIES.
  
  
  History​
  There are many theories behind Jordan's complications at birth. One, that in the womb, June received the majority of the proper nutrients for a fully functioning human. Another, that a foreign chemical in the father's bloodstream found its way into the child affected his development. Hell, maybe it was some weird conspiracy for why vaccinations cause autism like all the sheeple seem to think nowadays.
  
  Diagnosed with a syndrome that left his bones brittle, a poor immune system, stunted growth, and problems with his lungs, his mother decided that Jordan was, and technically still is, 'her baby' and was coddled to the point of smothering. It didn't help for the longest time doctors actually DID believe he was Autistic. You know, until he started working on his own to deal with his physical issues. Doctors changed their tune right-quick when he found a way to deal with Vrolik Syndrome at the age of ten after locking himself in his mother's old lab for a week. And from there, it became easy to accept why they suspected he was a Super.
  
  Between then and now, Jordan has done a few things of note; Helped his mother find a way to keep their father from having his organs fail due to complications caused nearly twenty years ago being the pinnacle of his success.
  
  And now he finds himself at Aegis Facility 108. Not exactly sure what they'd want him to do...
• Morgan Brahn
  Jordan's older brother; the two seem to always be stuck in the same grade, most times in the same class just so that the teachers could keep both in check with one another.
  
  Fortunately, that isn't the case in Facility 108..
  
  Side Note; It was Jordan who first brought alarm to the house about Morgan's issues with his powers at night....He's still working through that trauma.
  
  June Brahn
  His twin sister. Unlike Jordan and Morgan, June has no powers to speak of. Which she hates with great intensity. Joke's on her because she's mean and deserves to GET FAT. She is the athletic one in the family outside of their father.
  
  Mr. & Mrs. Brahn
  The loving parents of the Brahn household. His father is ex-military that protects the family with near religious tendencies, while his mother is a scientist-turned baker that coddled him because of his physical shortcomings constantly.
  
  Hunter Ward
  Related to the family on his mother's side, Hunter Ward is his great uncle who had been frozen before even Morgan was born. All he was told about him is that he was a badass that took shit from no one and that is AWESOME.
  
• Hyper-Intelligence
  Jordan possesses a level of intelligence that mimics state-of-the-art computer systems with their capabilities to go through algorithms and data in nanoseconds. While most would just brush this off as him just being very smart, one also has to take into account, that this goes beyond computation, and heads into the realm of science-fictional mad scientists creating bio-weapons and machinery capable of trampling continents with SCIENCE.
  
  Eidetic
  Jordan exhibits the traits of a heightened photographic memory. Eidetic memory is the ability to recall visual information, such as pages from books, magazines, and license plate numbers, in great detail after only brief exposure to it. There is no 'studying' in Jordan's life. All is learned immediately upon the information first being introduced.
  
  Suffice it to day, a lot of people hated him on test day.
  
  Consensus
  Jordan's brain functions similar to our own, but runs at a capacity that would leave ours utterly destroyed. The brain itself seems to be capable of multitasking itself. In short, five separate functions are firing off at once where there should only be one. Five distinct, fully functional minds working in succession.
  
  ​
  Limitations​

  ​
  Focus
  Jordan's mind, while operating at a level comparable to super-computers, has several flaws. First and foremost, the concept of focusing all of his attention onto one thing can leave him vulnerable to everything around him. Whatever has his attention is all he sees, all he hears, and all that matters. The outside world is gone until his mind snaps back to reality. As for how long that takes, it depends on the target of such focus.
  
  Mental Overload
  Using every bit of his mental power allows him great strides with his creations, going for too long will do to him what letting a piece of machinery go far beyond manufacturer regulations; While it wouldn't be anywhere near as visually exceptional as an exploding transformer, Jordan reaching this state has been noted to bleed from various areas of the head, (Nose. eyes. ears, and mouth) before collapsing into a comatose heap. Depending on the strain on his mind, his return to consciousness may take hours, days or weeks.
  
  
• 
  SCIENCE: This one came naturally, even without the use of his powers. His mother's propensity for all things scientific made it all the more easier for him to pick up the practice. He seems to be most focused on the fields pertaining to the human body. Medical practices, DNA, RNA, Chemistry, and a good deal in the theories and practices of mechanical prosthesis.
  
  Tinkering: Even without his powers, the probability of his knack for robotics and engineering would probably still be prevelant due to outside sources. Though to be fair, his powers DO help with the degree in which such things are made. His Apparatus, Tablet, and various other creations in his mother's basement, and, even a few, slightly classified things through Commonwealth are concequences of Jordan's boredom paired with his inquisitive nature.
  --------------------
  Fragile: Alright kiddies, time to go into your living room and look for that health dictionary that's even older than you and probably has cup rings from when you didn't have a TV tray that one time EVERYONE was at the house watching something.
  
  Jordan's hindrances come not from his powers, but from the unfortunate circumstances of his birth. They are, and as follows, complimented with some sappy tune:
  
  Albinism.
  
  Stunted Growth.
  
  Vrolik Syndrome (Treated, not cured.)
  
  Severe Asthma.
  
  Limited Immune System.
  
  As his medical report shows, there is a plethora of issues that have renedered him physically vulnerable to even rogue leaves. His bones, while nowhere near as hollow as they once were, are still remarkably weak. His immune system is tempermental, his muscle mass could pass for a negative intiger, and lastly, strenuous excercise without his apparatus is ill-advised.
  
  Temperment: Jordan can be...Volitile at times. To be fair, he tries to keep his composure. Unfortunately, it's not a very great attempt. His patience for most things is...Understandably lacking. It is extremely easy to antagonise Jordan into a frenzy of what could be referred to as 'nerd rage', although such things usually comes with an overabundance of Jordan's creations being used in.....Interesting ways. The most recent addition to this was the football punt towards a deranged super's groin who took over the local zoo....
  
• 
  Apparatus: [Tool/Weapon] Jordan's most prevelant creation is the spider-like mechanical harness that Jordan carries on him at all times. Even without its deployment, the contraption is reinforcing Jordan's stature, and acts as a thin veil of armor under his attire. When deployed, it uncoils from his limbs to form their own, carrying him in the center as it raises him off the ground and away from danger, should that be the purpose of its deployment. The Apparatus is controlled directly from his brain via reciver implanted in his cranium. It wasn't as if it was hard to get there...
  
  Tablet: [Tool] This one was the result of a bet with his sister, who was convinced nothing could get this shitty thing to ever work again. Joke's on her, as Jordan ripped out everything barring the frame and screen, which, have had their own upgrades. Jordan has personalized the sucker to only respond to his commands, and has been modded to be far more than just a giant smartphone...
  
  Backpack: [Tool] ...It's a backpack. You know, the thing every kid is supposed to have that would slowly warp their spine in horrendus ways with the sheer weight of textbook knowledge that can be found on the internet for eighty less pounds. Since Jordan weighs even less than that without the Apparatus, he's hardly about to start carrying those books anytime soon. Beides. Internet. Tablet. WAVE OF THE FUTURE, BABY. The backpack's job is to serve as a god damn backpack. It carries things. A Tablet. Pens. Pencils. New projects he works on while teachers give lectures he will always ignore.
• September Sun
  

 

[Lemon Boy]

Zahzi
Majority of the character sheet seems good. Personality and Backstory are solid.
Only major problem I have is that..well...none of his superpower weaknesses are superpower weaknesses.
All of them are physical weaknesses that should be placed in the Flaw section rather than the Superpower section and don't do much to balance out his powers at all.
I'd definitely say he needs some form of Superpower weaknesses just like everyone else to get any acceptance from me.

Not exactly full of weakness ideas, but perhaps things such as effecting his social capabilities significantly so as to make space for all his sudden mad scientist knowledge, frequent headaches & migraines and perhaps his Eidetic memory makes it much more easier for him to get traumatised or start hating people because he can't really forget what's happened. It's always there, in the back of his mind. Gus had a good weakness for his Anthony I believe, him needing more sleep because of using so much brain power and would suffer from things such as seizures and etc if he didn't get the appropriate amount of sleep, which was greater than the usual amount of sleep the average human needs if I recall. Other than that, can't really think of anything else personally.

Basically, solid character but in dire need of some actual superpower weaknesses to counteract his actual power.
I'd suggest taking all of his current weaknesses and simply putting them into flaws whilst explaining what they do very basically and how it effects his day-to-day life.

 

[Zahzi]

Lemon Boy
Oh, fuck I knew I forgot to edit something! XD

 

[Zahzi]

There we go. Limitations changed, and the list has been put with the 'Fragile' flaw.

 

[Lioness075]

Just wanted to announce that I added a new flaw to Scarlet's CS. It's a recent idea I had that just sounds like tons of fun to implement (god forbid I can remember to do it properly on top of managing all of my characters).

Habits: Every time Scarlet returns to her human form, she carries over a habit from the animal form she was in last. For example, after being a corgi, she will be easily excitable until she takes on another animal form. Or after being a raven, she would excel at solving puzzles and riddles...or maybe feel a strong urge to steal anything shiny.

 

[Nidelia]

I FINALLY(FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY) updated Thomasina!!!!! Please let me know if I can start posting. X3

 

[Necessity4Fun]

I FINALLY(FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY, FINALLY) updated Thomasina!!!!! Please let me know if I can start posting. X3

You're supposed to post the CS in here too XD

 

[Nidelia]

Johnston, T.

• Stats
• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Skills and Flaws

• Heroism Meter
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Courage	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	05
  Altruism	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	08
  Order	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱	07
  Kindness	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Proaction	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	08
  Diplomacy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Composure	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	05

  Ability Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Health	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Strength	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Defense	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Agility	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Intelligence	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	03
  Willpower	▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱	04
  Energy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	06

  
  
• Thomasina Annabelle Johnston
  
  Nicknames
  Anna, Belle, or Sina
  
  Codename
  Black Cure
  
  Gender
  Female
  
  Age
  20
  
  Rank
  B
  
  Limiter
  Active level 2
  
  Role
  Student
• Race
  American
  
  Hair
  Hair color
  
  Eyes
  Grey
  
  Height
  5'7
  
  Figure
  Slender
  
  Notes
  None
• Kind
  Thomasina loves everyone and treats them all equally, not raised to do so though. By love everyone, it means everyone, she doesn't care if they've done something wrong or not.
  
  Average
  Isn't completely courageous or cowardice. She won't throw herself into battle if she thinks she's going to come out worse afterwards, but she's not going to stand down and watch someone else get hurt because of her lack of action either.
  
  Timid
  Very soft spoken. She enjoys being around people and hanging out, but she doesn't entirely know how to assert herself when in a group of friends.
  
  Headstrong
  She has a tendency to try to do things on her on independently, despite it not being a good idea for her. This can cause her to try to go off and do things on her own, if she thinks she can, even if other's tell her she can't.
  
  History
  Thomasina grew up in a rich family, her father working as a technical engineer in a big company, and her mother being a successful business woman, owning her own computer store. She was born with her twin brother Thomas as well, though the only thing similar between them is that they both have black hair. Of course both their parents were happy to have two children, even though they only wanted one, but of course since they only wanted one, they had a tendency to focus on one, specifically her brother.
  
  This left Thomasina to her own devices most of the time when she became old enough to do things for herself, around seven years old. Thomas of course didn't like how it was going, he tried to stand up for Thomasina a lot, but it didn't work, either his parents made excuses, saying that it would cost too much money to send them both to elite schools and such.
  
  Both her and Thomas knew these were just excuses, their parents had plenty of money. When she was thirteen she was alone with her brother, they were playing outside, their parents were on a business vacation together on a cruise, they were supposed to be being watched by a babysitter, but the babysitter was off in the house doing something with their boyfriend. Thomas was playing a balancing act on their play set in the back yard, as many stupid young boys do, and he slipped and fell, snapping his arm. He was screaming and crying in pain, but the babysitter was nowhere to be found to hear him. Thomasina, without thinking, ran over, grabbed a hold of his arm, and held on tightly, his arm slowly beginning to reconstruct around the break. Right after she passed out.
  
  Thomas told the babysitter that she had curled up and fell asleep for a nap, and of course, with his arm miraculously healed, the babysitter was none the wiser.
  
  When Thomasina woke up Thomas told her she couldn't tell anyone what happened and that she needed to keep it secret, or else they would be separated and never see each other again because she would be taken away to a special school where he couldn't go with her.
  
  Finally, when she was twenty, she was in town, having moved out and was going to college, when there was a bombing at her school, there were three people hurt from the bombing, she quickly went to them, healing them from the blast, this of course, made her ability public, and thus the Commonwealth stepped in, and she is now to start attending Facility 108.
• Other Character's Name
  Description of relationship with said character
• Primary Power
  Empathic Healing
  
  Her main power is the ability to heal others. Depending on the severity of their wounds is the limitation of her powers. If it's a fatal wound that requires extensive healing she usually ends up having to recover from it for a whole twenty-four hours, minor cuts and bruises are healed easily, usually leaving her to recuperate anywhere from half an hour to three hours, depending on how many people/supers she healed.
  
  The ability utilizes her inner energy and natural kindness that she extends to others, this combined with the super gene in her system, leads to her having a natural want to help keep others alive, instead of intending harm to others.
  
  
  • Supporting Power: Energy Surge: Once every week Thomasina can make herself gain an extra surge of energy to replenish any she's lost to previous healing of other people. This allows her to remain healing longer, but after it runs out she's out of energy for two days.
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Limit: She can't heal herself.
    
  • Limit: She has to touch the person she's healing, has to be skin on skin contact.
    
  • Limit: She can only heal physical wounds, nothing like viruses, or cancer, or sickness.
• Skills
  
  • CPR: Able to perform chest compressions and breath air into a victims lungs to resuscitate from the brink of death.
    
  • Wound stitching: Able to sew open sounds shut with a needle and thread.
    
  • Singing: The ability to perform songs with the voice, with talent.
  Flaws
  
  • Flaw: Know It All - tends to come off as a know it all in the way she approaches things and will argue about something she belives she knows is correct, and even when she's proven wrong she won't admit it.
    
  • Flaw: Controlling - She's feels like she has to be in control of everything around her, just not people. She has taught herself not to control people, but if she's not in control of the situation or everything in her life she starts to freak out.

lKSj;lkjasdl;kjfl;asdkfsaf, you didn't specify that Nessy. x.x THERE!

 

[Lioness075]

Johnston, T.

• Stats
• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Skills and Flaws
• Tools & Weapons
• Gallery

• Heroism Meter
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Courage	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	05
  Altruism	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	08
  Order	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱	07
  Kindness	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Proaction	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	08
  Diplomacy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Composure	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	0?

  Ability Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Health	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Strength	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Defense	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Agility	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Intelligence	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	03
  Willpower	▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱	04
  Energy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	06

  
  
• Thomasina Annabelle Johnston
  
  Nicknames
  Anna, Belle, or Sina
  
  Codename
  Black Cure
  
  Gender
  Female
  
  Age
  20
  
  Rank
  B
  
  Limiter
  Active level 2
  
  Role
  Student
• Race
  American
  
  Hair
  Hair color
  
  Eyes
  Grey
  
  Height
  5'7
  
  Figure
  Slender
  
  Notes
  None
• Kind
  Thomasina loves everyone and treats them all equally, not raised to do so though. By love everyone, it means everyone, she doesn't care if they've done something wrong or not.
  
  Average
  Isn't completely courageous or cowardice. She won't throw herself into battle if she thinks she's going to come out worse afterwards, but she's not going to stand down and watch someone else get hurt because of her lack of action either.
  
  Timid
  Very soft spoken. She enjoys being around people and hanging out, but she doesn't entirely know how to assert herself when in a group of friends.
  
  Headstrong
  She has a tendency to try to do things on her on independently, despite it not being a good idea for her. This can cause her to try to go off and do things on her own, if she thinks she can, even if other's tell her she can't.
  
  History
  Thomasina grew up in a rich family, her father working as a technical engineer in a big company, and her mother being a successful business woman, owning her own computer store. She was born with her twin brother Thomas as well, though the only thing similar between them is that they both have black hair. Of course both their parents were happy to have two children, even though they only wanted one, but of course since they only wanted one, they had a tendency to focus on one, specifically her brother.
  
  This left Thomasina to her own devices most of the time when she became old enough to do things for herself, around seven years old. Thomas of course didn't like how it was going, he tried to stand up for Thomasina a lot, but it didn't work, either his parents made excuses, saying that it would cost too much money to send them both to elite schools and such.
  
  Both her and Thomas knew these were just excuses, their parents had plenty of money. When she was thirteen she was alone with her brother, they were playing outside, their parents were on a business vacation together on a cruise, they were supposed to be being watched by a babysitter, but the babysitter was off in the house doing something with their boyfriend. Thomas was playing a balancing act on their play set in the back yard, as many stupid young boys do, and he slipped and fell, snapping his arm. He was screaming and crying in pain, but the babysitter was nowhere to be found to hear him. Thomasina, without thinking, ran over, grabbed a hold of his arm, and held on tightly, his arm slowly beginning to reconstruct around the break. Right after she passed out.
  
  Thomas told the babysitter that she had curled up and fell asleep for a nap, and of course, with his arm miraculously healed, the babysitter was none the wiser.
  
  When Thomasina woke up Thomas told her she couldn't tell anyone what happened and that she needed to keep it secret, or else they would be separated and never see each other again because she would be taken away to a special school where he couldn't go with her.
  
  Finally, when she was twenty, she was in town, having moved out and was going to college, when there was a bombing at her school, there were three people hurt from the bombing, she quickly went to them, healing them from the blast, this of course, made her ability public, and thus the Commonwealth stepped in, and she is now to start attending Facility 108.
• Other Character's Name
  Description of relationship with said character
• Primary Power
  Empathic Healing
  
  Her main power is the ability to heal others. Depending on the severity of their wounds is the limitation of her powers. If it's a fatal wound that requires extensive healing she usually ends up having to recover from it for a whole twenty-four hours, minor cuts and bruises are healed easily, usually leaving her to recuperate anywhere from half an hour to three hours, depending on how many people/supers she healed.
  
  The ability utilizes her inner energy and natural kindness that she extends to others, this combined with the super gene in her system, leads to her having a natural want to help keep others alive, instead of intending harm to others.
  
  
  • Supporting Power: Energy Surge: Once every week Thomasina can make herself gain an extra surge of energy to replenish any she's lost to previous healing of other people. This allows her to remain healing longer, but after it runs out she's out of energy for two days.
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Limit: She can't heal herself.
    
  • Limit: She has to touch the person she's healing, has to be skin on skin contact.
    
  • Limit: She can only heal physical wounds, nothing like viruses, or cancer, or sickness.
• Skills
  
  • CPR: Able to perform chest compressions and breath air into a victims lungs to resuscitate from the brink of death.
    
  • Wound stitching: Able to sew open sounds shut with a needle and thread.
    
  • Singing: The ability to perform songs with the voice, with talent.
  Flaws
  
  • Flaw: Know It All - tends to come off as a know it all in the way she approaches things and will argue about something she belives she knows is correct, and even when she's proven wrong she won't admit it.
    
  • Flaw: Controlling - She's feels like she has to be in control of everything around her, just not people. She has taught herself not to control people, but if she's not in control of the situation or everything in her life she starts to freak out.
• Item: [Augmentation/Tool/Weapon] Description
  
  Item: [Augmentation/Tool/Weapon] Description
  
  Item: [Augmentation/Tool/Weapon] Description
• Although there is now a spot for a character image (since most of you have one), the Gallery tab remains as an area for you to post additional images, theme songs, and so on.

lKSj;lkjasdl;kjfl;asdkfsaf, you didn't specify that Nessy. x.x THERE!

Profile pic isn't loading for me. >.<

 

[Necessity4Fun]

Profile pic isn't loading for me. >.<

It's not just you, it's the Photobucket 'update' that disables 3rd party hosting unless you get an expensive account upgrade. Muse had the same issue...

Nidelia

 

[Gus]

PRIOR, M

• Stats
• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Skills and Flaws
• Gallery

• Heroism Meter
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Courage	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱	07
  Altruism	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	06
  Order	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	03
  Kindness	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	06
  Proaction	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	05
  Diplomacy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	03
  Composure	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	08

  
  

  Ability Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Health	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Strength	▰▰▱▱	02
  Defense	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Agility	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	03
  Intelligence	▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	04
  Willpower	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	03
  Energy	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02

  
  
• Full Name
  Miles Adam Prior
  
  Nicknames
  Baby
  
  Codename
  Joyride
  
  Gender
  Male
  
  Age
  17
  
  Rank
  C Rank
  
  Limiter
  None
  
  Role
  Criminal
  
• 
  Heritage
  American (Dutch descent)
  
  Hair
  Blond
  
  Eyes
  Blue
  
  Height
  5' 9”
  
  Figure
  Average build
  
  Notes
  
• 
  Fun-loving
 Miles favorite thing is cruising down the road blasting music in something with a high horsepower to weight ratio. His second favorite thing is buzzing the road blasting music in a small plane. He hasn't tried it yet with a large plane.
  
  Compulsive When not at the controls of his latest ride, Miles needs things to be just so. He can't go out if its raining. He has to walk on the left side of the street. On a sidewalk. If he steps on a crack he has to go back and start again. If he listens to music, he can step on cracks, but only if the rhythm of the dance step requires it. He can't listen to music and not dance. Only when he is in a vehicle, can he relax and go with the flow.
  
  Taciturn People aren't generally worth talking to. Only Alexa can get more than two words out of him at a time.
  
  Improvisational Morality
 Having spent the last nine years—more than half his life—working with criminal gangs, Miles has morals that are beyond merely flexible. They are more or less entirely negotiable. It is not that he has no moral compass so much as that the compass points wherever he wants to go. It usually points to survival, freedom, and fun, in that order. He has no respect for property in general, and vehicles in particular he sees as being enslaved and free to go with him if they choose. He is not above hurting people, but doesn't enjoy it and won't go out of his way for it unless they give him reason to seek vengance.
  
  History
  Miles powers manifested early, at the age of eight. What started out as a happy upgrade from playing with matchbox cars quickly turned serious when he lead state police on a long distance multiple vehicle chase which resulted in several deaths when an officer lost control of his vehicle trying to match Miles' incredible maneuvers on the highway. After that, afraid to go home to his family, he fell in with a bad crowd, boosting cars for parts, and driving getaway for bank robberies. When he was 16, he met Alexa, fell in love, drove away with zer and never looked back. That he drove away in the middle of a job is a point of contention with his former employers.
  
  
  
  
• 
  
  
  
  Alexa DelRay
  Alexa and Miles are taking a break right now, and not by his choice. Ze wants a blue card for reasons he cannot understand. He dropped zer off at facility 109 and has been keeping his distance for almost 6 months now while ze trains. He hopes against hope that they can pick up where they left off after the finals are over.
  
  Bradley Padmore Alexa has been staying at his house since joining 109. Miles is crazy jealous but does a good job of hiding it.
  
  Stephen Nemo A fence for stolen cars. Miles likes dealing him because he finds good homes for them.
  
  
• 
  Vehicular Tele-empathic connection
  Any non-sentient vehicle within ten feet of Miles responds to him as if it were sentient and desired to please him like a smart, well trained dog. They will start if they are able, and unlock for him if locked. Sentient vehicles can communicate with him telepathically, even if they do not normally interface in that way. They are not subject to his control, though they are usually well disposed towards him.
  
  • Vehicular Proprioception: Merely by touching the controls of any vehicle, Miles' brain can receive and interpret the totality of the physical inputs and outputs of the machine as if it were an extension of his own body. This allows him to move the vehicle with almost supernatural grace and fluidity limited only by the laws of physics.
    
    
  • Intuitive vehicular physics: By 'feeling' what his chosen ride feels, Miles can push engines to their limits, and make the best possible use of any physical interaction with the environment, avoiding obstacles or making maneuvers that would be all but impossible for the most highly trained drivers or pilots.
  Limitations
  
  • Empathy means feeling the pain too: When a vehicle Miles is connected to is hurt, he feels it. If the shocks take a bad hit, he gets a charlie horse. If it gets riddled with bullets, he is racked with pain, and can bruise or even bleed. He takes good care of vehicles he drives, not only as a matter of personal morals, but out of self preservation
    
    
  • Serial Monogamy: Miles can bond with anything that moves when commanded to do so, but only one at a time.
    
    
  • Misanthropy: Miles has spent a lot of time bonding with cars that were not well taken care of. Feeling all their aches and pains and tiny little grievances, he has come to a point where he has trouble not feeling utter disdain for 'masters' in general, and those who take their rides for granted in particular
    
    
  • Out of gas: Another aspect of Miles' empathy is a need to eat and rest after a long session. Even if the fuel is topped up, staying connected takes it out of him. He can't keep it up for more than eight hours at a stretch and need about twice that long a nap to recover, plus several heavy meals.
    
    
  • Oh the poor thing!: As with druids who have animal companions, sometimes you direct them, sometimes they direct you. While almost any vehicle will perform almost any miraculous stunt for him, Miles, for his part will not stand by while his friends are abused. When they cry out for aid, he will drop what he is doing, and help them.
• 
  
  Skills
  
  • Car-fu Fightin: Miles' mastery over vehicular motion allowed him to develop an entirely unique martial art
    
    
  • Mechanic: While his power doesn't directly help with fixing cars, it did motivate him to get really really good at it.
  
  Flaws
  
  • Cold Fish: Miles leaves a lot of people with the impression that he could care less if they live or die as long as they don't bother him. They're not wrong
  • Acquisitive: Some cars just need to be driven. Like, right now. Eventually the fever will break and he'll be back on task, but sometimes “I'll be back in a while” just doesn't cut it. Like in the middle of a bank job for instance.
    
  
  
• Theme song:

 

[ManicMuse]

Interesting power. Sorry, I am on the way out to my next job. Cool idea from what I read!

 

[The Fuzzy Pixel]

WARRAIN, L.

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• Heroism Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Courage	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	9
  Altruism	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	6
  Order	▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱▱	5
  Kindness	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	6
  Proaction	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	8
  Diplomacy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	6
  Composure	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	8

  Ability Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Health	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	3
  Strength	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	2
  Defense	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	2
  Agility	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	2
  Intelligence	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	2
  Willpower	▰▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱	3
  Energy	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	1

• Full Name
  Logan Warrain
  
  Nicknames
  N/A (Someone make something up!)
  
  Codename
  Swindle
  
  Gender
  Male
  
  Age
  55
  
  Rank
  D Rank
  
  Limiter
  Active
  
  Role
  Courier
• Race
  Predominantly of Swedish descent, but an American nationalist.
  
  Hair
  White
  
  Eyes
  Blue
  
  Height
  6'
  
  Figure
  Lean muscular physique with an emphasis on tone and definition over bulk muscle mass.
  
  Notes
  Two parallel facial scars. Various other scars line and dot his body from decades of violence. Has a small tattoo on the inside of his right wrist reading: 'Be Human', but normally keeps that covered.
• A Hand Up
  It's not uncommon for Logan to directly or indirectly interfere in the lives of others. That was even part of his job as a Rapture infiltration agent. With this new gig he's doing this habit tends to show itself as quiet displays of mentorship or support if he sees allies or innocents in distress. As silently as he can suddenly appear he can just as abruptly leave afterwards. He doesn't expect gratitude nor does he want it. Whatever the recipients of his kindness choose to take away from these interactions are completely up to them.
  
  Pragmatic To The Core
  Logical, rational, realistic. Hopes and dreams are admittedly nice things to have, but Logan is a very jaded and wary man. Facts weighted in reality, assumptions erring on the side of caution, using past experiences to assess new ones, etc. He won't deny that optimism is healthy, but prayer and hope haven't gotten him out of as many close calls as simple pragmatism has.
  
  A People Watcher, Not A People Person
  There's a lot to be gained from thoughtful observation. Body language, personality quirks, nervous cues, excitement triggers, etc. It's a habit that's as much a boon as it is a detriment. Logan is naturally distrustful of strangers and skeptical of allies, so people watching from afar is his comfortable way of getting to know others.
  
  Lethal Paranoia
  Be polite, be efficient. Have a plan to kill everyone you meet. Logan hasn't survived this long by openly trusting everyone he comes across. It's hardly anything personal unless you've deliberately offended him. However, in his experience it's always best to have a backup plan if things go south with anyone. Just in case, of course.
  
  History
  'Destined for great things,' as his father Conrad Warrain would always say, '..even if he's a little hardheaded!'
  
  Of course, from any father who loves their son who would say differently? Conrad always believed in leading by example, and what better way to do that by saving the lives of others? While some might turn their noses up at his choice in joining the United States Air Force, he did a lot of good as a para-rescue trooper. It was a hard life with a lot of hazards, but it was an honest life. At the end of the day he could stare proudly at the man in the mirror, too. He hoped one day his son would follow his footsteps and serve not only his country, but his fellow countrymen as well in this manner. However, a young Logan still seemed unsure of what direction his life was going in during his teenage years. He was proud of what his father did, there was no hiding that. The military slowly began to look better and better as time went on, though; his above average grades weren't anything special to warrant any prestigious college scholarships.
  
  After graduating from high school with the weight of indecision still looming overhead Logan pulled the trigger and joined the United States Navy. All he had to believe in at the time was the faith his father had in him, and the nobility of putting others before yourself. He spent four years as a rescue diver, and nearly drowned himself a dozen times over pulling people from all kinds of messes. Not all of his rescues were successful. Sometimes they would arrive too late, or the waves would be too rough to hold onto people. Pulling dead bodies from the water made him realize something: his father had never told him how to cope with failures like this. Logan didn't take them well, at least not openly.
  
  After his fourth year as a rescue diver he opted to change his job within the Navy, moving instead to explosive ordnance disposal. Like before he was willing to accept that the price of failure could include an early grave. Logan reasoned that he was still helping people this way, and that he had more control over the situation. No waiting and searching in a helicopter, no turbulent ocean to combat. There could be no other excuses for failure aside from himself, and he could accept those terms. His was a grim determination. Maybe there was even a small part of him that was slowly cracking under the pressure and self deprecation, a part of himself that wanted to fail. He couldn't just throw everything away, though; no, he would always try his best. Skill and a heavy dose of luck saw him through two years of bomb disposal work. He still saw dead bodies from time to time, but they were never from any mistakes of his own. That didn't make him feel any better about the macabre sights, though.
  
  Six years into the navy he decided to transfer again, this time volunteering for SEALs training. Again he found it impossible to simply throw himself away, so he shot for the top. Logan was determined to push himself to the extremes to see just how far he could go, and what would end him, while still contributing to the overall cause. His resolve was what saw him through the training, and soon after that he was doing operations in foreign countries. The nature of his missions forced him to make a lot of choices, choices he had to live with. Four years later he finally cracked. He disappeared during a job in South America, and was written off as missing in action.
  
  There's a lot of speculation as to what he was doing after that, and he's remained tight lipped about that. Officially, he pops back into history in 2016 when the organization The Commonwealth was attacked by a terrorist group called Rapture. Fighting on the terrorists' side as a spy and infiltration specialist his own contributed damage was far more covert than the ensuing smoke and rubble. A high body count had never been his goal; merely unerring precision as if he were trying to prove something, perhaps to himself. It certainly didn't help that his father was part of the Commonwealth's security team. The chaos in the DC area would eventually calm down, though; as would the turmoil within the man's own mind. Once more Logan would become a ghost, vanishing without a trace. Those who still believed that he was alive would keep careful note of high level espionage acts fulfilled with eerie expertise throughout this period.
  
  In the year 2040 he's returned to find that these times are just as chaotic as before. Finding sponsored employment under Director Chernov of the Commonwealth he's wary of stepping into somebody else's fight, but wanting a relatively normal life for his daughter has spurred him on. His files have a bunch of red tape and classified stamps on them which he pretends to know nothing about. All he tells people is that he's Chernov's courier, running back and forth between the school and town doing, well.. courier things. Delivering information, picking up and dealing with inconspicuous packages, and generally letting Chernov know what's happening in the city.
  
  Seeing people from twenty-four years ago has put him on edge, but he's taking things in stride. Thankfully, no one has seen fit to confront him about the truth of the matter concerning his altercation with a Mr. Claus from over two decades ago, either.
  
• Maple Warrain
  Logan's twenty-one year old daughter. (If anyone would like to play her feel free to ask; the position is fairly openended)
  
  Commonwealth Handler
  A position open for anyone if they're interested, otherwise this role will probably fall to an NPC. This is someone trusted by Chernov to keep an eye on Logan since he's a new and relatively unknown variable, and to help him integrate smoothly into his new role and setting. They would be privy to his past, and to the fact that he's not a super. Message me if interested.
  
  Hunter Ward (Red)
  Logan's gritty, but respectable commander back in his Rapture days. He would be surprised that Red was thawed out, but given the circumstances of his own presence here in Baltimore, he's not.
  
  Director Chernov
  His current employer. Needless to say they have a symbiotic relationship, although who needs who more isn't clear at this point. Logan plays by her rules, so if you have a problem with how he operates talk to her.
  
  Mr. and Mrs. Brahn
  More old acquaintances from a long time ago. Logan is particularly cautious around them not out of fear, but out of guilt. He's glad to see that they've found a place to settle down and have a family, though.
  
  Matron
  A contact Logan can turn to when he needs help. She's one of the few people who helps him not feel so old, too.
  
• Logan is not a super, although he pretends to be one to help blend in at the school. His enhanced physique and physical attributes are the product of many injections and therapies that may or may not be considered illegal. If asked what his power is, he'll simply smile politely before trying to change the subject or flat out ignore the question entirely.
  
  In comparison to a normal human Logan is physically superior, especially given his age. He is generally stronger, faster, and healthier than what would be normal. He even heals faster than normal, although he can still bleed out from grievous injuries. Compared to supers he can still fall short of going toe-to-toe with them, but he's never been one to fight fairly.
  
  Limitations
  
  • Juice Me Up, Doc: Since Logan's physical prowess is artificially induced he requires regular check ups to make sure he's in peak condition. Ignoring this routine could drastically impair his combat readiness.
    
  • No Tricks Up This Sleeve: He has no fancy powers to rely on, just his own physical conditioning and heightened healing. The latter of which while advanced for a non-super, a super specializing in that field would probably be far from impressed.
    
  • Love The Needle: Supers with powers that can purify or detox another being could potentially weaken him considerably pending the strength of the effect.
• This Is My Rifle, This Is My Gun: Having served a full decade in service to the United States Navy, as well as performing mercenary work in the many years after that, Logan is a trained soldier. He's performed rescue operations, bomb disposal, and special operations. His fields of expertise however cover espionage, sabotage, and guerrilla warfare.
  
  First Response Worker: Logan is familiar with basic first aid techniques learned throughout his militant lifestyle. If it can be done out in the field then he can probably do it too.
  
  I'm Driving: When you get shot at for a living you learn fast how to drive fast without flipping over. Consequently he does get irked when stuck in traffic. Also any passengers better put their seat belts on because he will not apologize if your nose ends up bleeding against the dashboard or windshield. Think safety, people!
  
  Lone Wolf: He's old, and while he's trying to keep an open mind there are just some habits he has a hard time breaking. The man doesn't particularly love or hate solitude, he's just indifferent to it. Logan also tends to assume that others don't want to get involved with him, especially if they know about his past. It's not something he judges others for, but it's not like he's actively trying to make friends either.
  
  Words Are Hard: He's always been bad at expressing himself. Things have improved for him since his daughter was born, but there are still times where he prefers silent company over talking. Others may not pick up on this obviously, and he tries to meet people halfway. Opening up just really takes a lot of trust from him, and that takes a while to earn.
  
  I Saw Nothing: Finding things out is his job. It's what he's good at. Naturally this lends itself to a prying curiosity. He doesn't mean to spy on people, but if something catches his attention he will investigate it with an appropriate level of discretion and sneakiness.
• 
  Swatter: [Weapon] A collapsible stun baton developed by a national security firm. It's handle has a button that electrocutes the extending club to assist its user in encouraging an antagonist to cease and desist.
  
  'Killjoy' Threat Negation Device: [Weapon] A handheld device intended to deal non-lethal force to a target in order to neutralize them. Aesthetically it's basic shape resembles a blocky handgun, but it's loaded with cartridges on the end of the 'barrel.' Upon pulling the trigger these cartridges launch a pair of needles out to 15ft, able to penetrate thick clothing and deliver high voltage shocks.
  
  Komodo Knife: [Weapon] A kukri knife with a blackened blade to prevent the reflection of light off its surface. Its inner curve is also serrated.
  
  S-5 Phalanx: [Weapon] A 9mm pistol gaining popularity among paramilitary companies due to its handling and generous magazine size. Logan typically carries a suppressor to reduce noise if he's carrying a gun, but he will often keep the two disconnected to better conceal the weapon.
  
  Comm Implant: [Augmentation] An augment inside Logan's head that more or less acts as a phone allowing him to have silent conversations. Like a normal phone it still requires areas with good reception to function.
  
  Courier Uniform: [Tool] An outfit loosely designed around similar models used by Commonwealth field engineers. It allows Logan to scan things in front of himself for identification and study, and can project a holographic screen that he can interact with. It can remotely connect to computers, but this feature is locked by Chernov unless she deems it necessary for Logan to have access to it.
• A new beginning, a new war.
  
  
  

 

[JustNicole]

Scotts, J

• Stats
• General
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• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Skills
• Tools & Weapons
• Gallery
• Julie's Journey

• Heroism Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Courage	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Altruism	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Order	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Kindness	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱	08
  Proaction	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09
  Diplomacy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱	07
  Composure	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰	09

  Ability Statistics
  Aspect	Scale	Total
  Health	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Strength	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01
  Defense	▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	01
  Agility	▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱	07
  Intelligence	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Willpower	▰▰▱▱▱▱▱▱▱	02
  Energy	▰▰▰▰▰▰▱▱▱	06

• Full Name
  Julie Tessa Scotts
  
  Nicknames
  Jules
  
  Codename
  Fairy
  
  Gender
  Female
  
  Age
  20
  
  Rank
  B
  
  Limiter
  Inactive
  
  Role
  Student
• Race
  Caucasian
  
  Hair
  Black
  
  Eyes
  Blue
  
  Height
  5'6"
  
  Figure
  Petite; Hourglass
  
  Notes
  N/A
• Sureness
  There's a confidence that Julie holds. It's an assurance that even though she may be about to walk into the fire, no matter what she will emerge from the other side victorious. It sparks her optimism, her confidence, her adventurous attitude, all of her positive stems from her quiet sureness in herself that she will succeed.
  
  Moralistic
  To Julie, she considers there to be such things as a moral right and a moral wrong in the world. Yes, there is grayness, and many things depends on context, but there are things that are still morally wrong. When others choose to make decisions that are morally wrong, she won't shove it down their throat, but she will express her displeasure to the person at their actions, and may feel compelled to act against them.
  
  Proud
  In spite of her status and place in life, Julie's a proud person. That's not to say that she thinks she's important right now because that's far from the case. However, she is not one to ask for a free handout or help. When Julie gets out of her financial straits and makes something of herself, she wants it to be because she did it herself, not starting with a small loan of a million dollars.
  
  Impatient
  While still certain of her success into the future, it feels to Julie like she's been waiting all her life for her life to actually start. Now that she has the freedom and autonomy to be the person she has wanted to be, she doesn't want to wait years for things to fall into place. In general, she has a tough time sitting around and doing absolutely nothing. That's probably the close to torture for her. She wants do what she wants to do right then and not have to wait.
  
  
  History
  Growing up in Podunk, Texas outside of Big City, Texas, Julie was the youngest daughter of a relatively normal American family, with two siblings, Angela and Kyle, ten and three years older than her, respectively. As the youngest and last child, as her mother would always say, Julie had the benefit from a young age of being the one doted after by the rest of the family, perhaps even smothered by them. Even then, her mother and sister were plotting for the next Queen Bee of Podunk Texas High with its oh so large average graduating class of twenty-five as both of them had been in their day.
  
  Fate, though, had other plans. You see, Julie's family was like not an ordinary family. For in their family bred a rabid, radical, perhaps even borderline fanatic hate of anything super-related. Chief at the head of the family of hate was Julie's mother followed by Julie's sister. Her father, for his part, would go along with whatever profanity-raced rant his wife would spout on about how supers were destroying America from the inside out, but rarely did he ever chime in himself, content to let his wife finish her tirades once she started them. In fact, one of Julie's first memories is listening to her mother ranting about the news on TV, ranting about how even the SILPA didn't go far enough.
  
  By the age of five, Julie had already attended her first anti-super rally in Big City, Texas, a huge marching demonstration of people protesting against supers. In hindsight, it seems stupid, and to this day, Julie still doesn't know exactly what they were protesting about supers, but boy did she love to feel the energy and thrill of the crowd when she was little. It made her feel alive. Though she didn't realize it at the time, Julie was slowly being indoctrinated from a young age to be superphobic.
  
  Time, the invariable constant of the universe, continued to advance. Angela left for private, conservative, anti-super college to study some fancy sounding degree that Julie had never heard of. In her school, Julie excelled, proving herself a trusted friend and budding socialite. By the time high school was on the horizon, there was no doubt that Julie had secured her position as the Queen Bee of the class. Though everything and everyone was superphobic, Julie simply thought that everyone in the world was anti-super. As far as life was going for Julie, things couldn't have been going better.
  
  In the Winter of 2033, at the age of thirteen of her eighth grade year, the unthinkable happened. Julie's previously unknown super gene activated, causing her to shrink to a tiny size as she walking through the woods by her home coming back from school. At first, Julie panicked, as any normal person would do if their height went from 5"6" to 1/2". Unfortunately, her clothes also did not shrink with her, leaving her trapped inside the suddenly enormous textile prison of her dress. Once she made her escape from its cloth-y confines, Julie was able to take stock of her situation. She hadn't even realized it, but she had flown right out of the dress, using wings she didn't even know she had.
  
  Seeing the wings was the second shock. They looked like the wings from a bee or wasp. It was enough to cause Julie to close her eyes and wish more than anything that what she was seeing was simply a dream, some kind of nightmare, and that she would wake up from it. She couldn't be super; she couldn't be. When she opened her eyes, there she was in the woods naked, clothes beside her, but back to normal human size. Looking herself over, she felt her heart skip a beat as she checked for the presence of wings. Thankfully, they were gone.
  
  As much as she wanted to deny it, to play it off as some sort of hallucination or trick, there was no denying that had happened to her. She knew enough from her biology class to understand the basics, she had the super gene, and it had activated. She was now a super, the very thing she had grown to hate.
  
  In the following months and year, that realization weighed heavily on her mind as an inner battle was waged over her self-identity. She began to slack in classes over self-hate and become slightly more reclusive, afraid that someone might find discover the freak that she was. She dared not tell a soul, terrified of the consequences. Yet, she couldn't help but begin to see the cracks in her society. Through technology, she began to reach out and research supers, finding that many of the things she had come to be raised to believe were contrary to what reality was.
  
  Despite her fear over her secret being discovered, Julie couldn't live with herself listening idly to the spew that her own family, teachers, and classmates would say. She began to challenge them, somewhat shaky at first, but as the side-jabs and laughs prodded her, it only served to solidify her beliefs. Supers weren't freaks trying to destroy America. She wasn't a freak trying to destroy America. No one considered the opinion of a young school girl valid. Her once friends became cold as she persisted in her defiance, the class giving her the insult of super-lover. Even her teachers and family, who tolerated her curiosity and outburst, grew tired of it, growing angry whenever she spoke. The worst was at home, as a once peaceful home became a warzone as mother and son was pitted against daughter.
  
  When Angela returned from college to live at home with her new fancy degree, she returned an even more radicalized and ardent hater of anti-supers. In turn, that only fueled Julie's mother more, who became as thick as thieves with Angela once again. Perhaps that was the trigger for Julie's father, but whatever the reason he decided that enough was enough. Within the month of Angela's return, Julie's father filed for divorce and walked out on the family. Julie begged for him to take her, but he refused, leaving with her no recourse but to remain under the reigns of her mother and sister.
  
  During this time period, Julie stopped trying to provoke arguments, taking a more passive approach as she met other supers online. For the first time, she began to really explore her powers. Because of her, what she dubbed, bee form, it was easy enough to setup obstacle courses in the woods behind the house that no one would pay a second glance to. It was also during this time she first found someone, another girl, a super at that, who lived a few towns away. Because both of them had transportation-aiding powers, it made it easy for them to meet up in secret for a few hours at a time. It was through this girl, who had her limiter, that Julie learned exactly what the SILPA meant for supers and that if she ever was detected, there'd be no way she'd be able to hide that limiter from her parents. It was the first real time since she had become a super that she was happy with her life. It wasn't meant to last.
  
  Angela, the bitch of a sister that she was, snooped on Julie's phone one day, curious to as to what her little brat of a sister was up to. Things came crashing down as technology access was removed and travel restricted. She might as well have been living in a prison. Thankfully, Julie had been careful enough not to mention that she was a super anywhere online, so there was no way they knew about that, only that she was talking to supers and dating a girl who was a super. She might have tried to sneak out with her power, but they were so concerned they installed a nanny cam in her room that picked up on any and all movements. There was nothing she could do to escape. By this point, though, she was sixteen, with only two more years until she could escape.
  
  She could remember the exact date it happened: October 12th, 2038. She stepped out her high school doors to find Commonwealth agents there, detectors in hand, doing a sweep of the students as they passed the school. From there, it was all downhill. She was processed and placed with a limiter, a registered super under the SILPA. When she had gotten a ride home from the Commonwealth agents, she found a locked door and a bag with some of her clothes. The Commonwealth contacted her father, and before too long was she was back under her father's roof on the other side of Big City, Texas. Still, he seemed distant, cold even. It was like he couldn't bring himself to look at the limiter on her.
  
  That summer her father said her mother had reached back out to him and wanted to see Julie again. Julie, though skeptical, hoped beyond all hope that this might be the chance for her to mend the broken relationship with her family. As they were driving through the Texas countryside, they suddenly pulled over and stopped. Before she knew it, Julie was on the ground, tied up. There, before her, was more than a dozen people, wearing uniforms and masks she recognized only all too well as belonging to the local radical anti-super hate group. Two of the members lifted their masks as she lay on the dirt, revealing the face of her sister and brother. With all the rest, they spat on her, kicked her, and beat her to within an inch of her life then left her there, stranded on the side of a Texas country road, the hot sun burning her skin as she bled both externally and internally from her wounds. The last thing she remembered before she passed out was thinking she was going to die for sure.
  
  Amazingly, she didn't. She woke up in a hospital broken but alive. An unknown entity had rescued her from the roadside, stabilized her, and put into the hands of the hospital. The only thing she had to go off of was a card that said "AEGIS: Training Facility 108" with an address written down on it, with a small note written to come there sometime after she was healed if she wanted to make something of herself. Already an adult, eighteen, as soon as Julie was discharged she hitched a ride to Baltimore, though there were several detours along the way.
  
  Arriving in Baltimore with the clothes on her back and not a penny to her name, Julie found shelter in a creative way: a sideways glass jar with some dirt and grass for a flat surface with a small dollhouse placed inside, suitable for small shelter for her other form. Placing it up on a neon lamp provided all the extra heat the jar needed to keep her elevated from the street and her bed toasty warm. Before jumping straight into AEGIS, she took the opportunity to explore the city, meeting a few new people and making some new friends, and even a mentor. Despite having nothing to her name, for the first time in her life she had absolute freedom, and to her, that was meant more to her than a rumbling stomach.
  
  With the holidays, though, she couldn't ignore her past life. Reluctantly, she called her father, who was more than apologetic about what happened, claiming he had no idea they had such an attack planned. Julie wasn't sure whether to believe him or not. The biggest shocker came when her father confessed that he was the reason Julie was a super. He was that one that had the dormant super gene, and that out of his hate towards not being a super, he turned it towards other supers. Needless to say, such news was not received well by Julie, who, in anger, disconnected the call, wishing she had never made it in the first place.
  
  As 2040 began, Julie decided that it was finally time to go find this specific AEGIS place, say thanks to the person who saved her, and to get on with the rest of her life. She joined AEGIS, partly as a thank you to the person who saved her and partly figuring that she can not only help those oppressed or less fortunate like she was, but that she can also earn a living, at least enough to get her on her feet. After all, without a high school diploma or even GED, there aren't exactly a lot of career choices knocking at her door.
  
  Since joining AEGIS, Julie has been busy. She found a temporary home to stay at while she works towards her blue card, has battled the Knights of Raguel, love, and even her own inner demons. Now, facing the final exams for her blue card, Julie prepares for the next step of her journey in life: becoming a superhero. Whatever the hell that manes.
• Frank Scott
  Julie's relationship with her father is strained, at best. She holds at lot of blame on him whether it is walking out on their family, giving her the super gene from his genetics, not standing by her in defense of supers, or allowing the assault on her to occur. Out of all of her family though, he's the one she's still willing to talk to, occasionally. There are days where Julie isn't sure if she loves her father or hates him. In time, she'd like to a reestablish a cordial relationship with him, but she knows that right now she needs to give her time to figure out how she can forgive him first.
  
  Lucy Scott
  A bitch of a woman if ever there was, after the assault her own mother is dead to her. As far as she's concerned, the best thing that could happen would be if she dropped dead. At least then the world would be a slightly less hateful place. At a deeper level, there's a strong part of her that wishes they could reunite in a place where there was no such thing as super or normal.
  
  Angela and Kyle Scott
  Julie has no love for her siblings. As far as she's concerned, they're far worse than her parents ever were. Of the two, she by far hates Angela the most. She knows that both of them are involved heavily in anti-super groups, and when she used to use her powers to snoop on her family, she first saw the Knights of Raguel mentioned on some websites and forums that her siblings were browsing. She hopes that given their last known location in Texas, they're not involved in these attacks.
  
  Pastor Smith
  Julie's moralistic views come from her liberal take on Christianity. Though her family was Christian, but never particularly pious, Julie clung to her faith to get her through the worst of times. When Julie arrived in Baltimore she found a friend in Pastor Smith, a stranger on the street like any other who seemed to really pay attention and notice Julie. Julie's now a member of Pastor Smith's congregation, Freedom Church, and frequently visits the church to ask Pastor Smith for wisdom. In many ways, Pastor Smith has quickly become a mentor and a father figure to her in a way no one ever has before.
  
• Aopedia Genetic Cross
  Julie has the ability to shrink to a height of 1/2 inch and gain abilities and powers from the Apoidea superfamily. She has no powers when full size. When in this form, she is stronger than an Apoidea, but is much weaker overall than a normal human. She would be able to lift roughly 200 grams, provided she can get underneath it.
  
  
  • Flight: While in her shrunken state, a pair of wings appear or grow on Julie's back. These wings are seemingly a hybrid of butterfly, wasp and bee wings, having similar translucent appearance as wasp or bee wings that makes them practically invisible from afar, but also having four wings, two larger forewings and two smaller hindwings with one fore and hind on each side akin to a butterfly, all of which are much larger than they would be on a normal wasp or bee. With her wings, she can reach and sustain speeds of 40 mph, making her an extremely agile small fighter.
    
  • Stinger Blast: Julie can project the field that causes her own atoms to shrink in short bursts which stings living tissue painfully. The 'sting' shrinks every atom it encounters for a microsecond before popping back to normal size. This burst appears like a small ripple through the air and makes a soft popping sound originating from Julie's hands when it is formed. It can travel some distance, but loses power as it goes, wasting energy shrinking the air. The sting does no actual damage, but the perceived pain for any creature with a nervous system is about a 7 at point blank range, halving in intensity about every 25 feet to a max range of about 100 feet. Each sting leaves the nervous system vulnerable for the next few hours to subsequent stings, ramping up the pain intensity with each new hit. This works better at point blank range, requiring as few as 3 hits to cause unconsciousness in a normal human. At stand off distances the maximum pain levels off at about a 6, requiring her to get in close to for the final blow. Due to the exotic physics, armor won't stop the sting, but a high defense, high will, or high health score allows a target to withstand the pain for longer than normals. Beings with nonstandard nervous systems may be immune
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • One Size Only: Julie cannot manipulate her size to any other levels other than her 1/2 inch form and her normal human form.
    
  • I'm Only Human: Julie cannot use any of her abilities while in normal human form. She must shrink down to use her any of her powers.
    
  • Dodge, Dodge, Dodge: Because of her decreased size, Julie is extremely vulnerable to serious damage while in her bee form. Put quite simply, everything is more deadly when you're little, especially crushing. No one likes to be crushed.
    
  • These Clothes Are HUGE: Skin-tight or form fitting clothes will shrink with Julie's form (For example, yoga pants, sports bras, latex, leather, spandex, etc.) However, loose clothes, shoes, or any other accessories do not shrink with Julie.
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  Baltimore Survivor: Living on the streets of Baltimore, Julie's learned the bad and good places to be. She knows how to get around and navigate the city.
  
  Forger: Often having no food to cook herself, Julie's become skilled at finding and locating "garbage" food that is thrown away or dumped in the trash.
  
  Trouble Detection: As someone who considers it their mission to help other people, Julie's developed a keen sense for when someone is actually in need of help vs say someone who is going to spend anything you give them on booze and drugs.
  
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  What Julie's super form roughly looks like
  
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  Julie first appears in Episode 4: The Jailbreak of Dawn
  

 

[Necessity4Fun]

Okay, here's one thing that I noticed, you seem to have kept the old version of the skills Tab.
It has been renamed to 'Skills and Flaws' and should have two of each of those. The later are either: A character flaw, bad habits they have or even something they're simply terrible at.

That's all I saw that needed tweaking >w<
JustNicole