Junko Natsumizaka
Just a demonic overlord studying Earth firsthand.
My brother...
- invented the 'eel water' trap. I was just going to make both water traps identical to the one that 6 died in.
- chose the routes and deaths for everyone except: the mafia guys (but he did switch 12's and 11's weapons from rapiers to bats), the first ten people that died, the detective, and the policeman (27), and the people that died from poisoned water, and the congresswoman
- switched 4 and 5's spiked bats for swords before they left the starting point since they'd be more comfortable using them
- was against the Russian having a chain sickle, since it would be too difficult for him to handle, but I insisted, because I wanted some ridiculously rare weapons so everyone wasn't just using swords and spears, which my brother insisted were more functional and thus would be the most popular
- wanted to use human-sized mechs, and guns, but I said 'melee weapons only so they don't win too easily'
- put an additional 'half can pass' at the north exit
- made the south exit fake
- had the warlord and general take multiple weapons because they're the smarter ones
- had them NOT have a showdown and just leave together because of a mutual respect, whereas I wanted them to kill each other
- the Yakuza ambush at the end was actually my idea, he said 'have them just leave', but that was before he placed the additional 'half can pass' at the north exit, and when I asked him what to do with the siblings afterwards, he said 'whatever, just have 'em leave'
- wanted to let the bartender go free, but I wanted Nova to have him, so I just put our conversation into the role play almost word for word as Soren and Rosaleya's when they're discussing if it's unfair or not
- told me about army guys digging up land mines, and the conversation about that was also put in, word for word, between Soren and Rosaleya
- changed the bartender's weapon from nothing (I thought he would be too scared) to a spear or halberd, and I chose a spear, so he could poke people at long range instead
- changed one 'slave trader' to a Female Human Rights Activist/Slave Trader, which is even darker than I thought to make it
- insisted on giving them unpoisoned water canteens, at the start, and only poisoning the refills, because "if you're stupid enough to not ration your water, you deserve to die', whereas I wanted to poison all the water because the collars made it so they didn't need water *laughs in sadism*
- helped me design the dragon room (how large they were, how they worked, and how long it would take to die from it/turn to ash from it) (like Dante, he wanted to use real dragons, but I said that the villains might hurt them and that the point was to make a non-magical maze, basically the conversation between Nova, Dante, and Celeste happened between us. He also wanted to use "human-sized, fire-breathing Godzilla mechs" instead of dragons that came from the ceiling, so "they can fight them head on with their swords...as soon as you walk into the room, its gun-arms shoot your legs so you can't run, then they flame-torch you to death while shooting you, and as they're shooting you, they're laughing in the 'saw voice' " (He hasn't watched SAW yet, he's not allowed, but he's seen memes of the SAW laugh)
- described how the non-eel electric water would be designed to shock the victim to death via generators
- added one female policeman, doctor, judge, fbi and cia agent, and congress member, whereas I wanted to make them all males. He pointed out that that's not how it works and how there are evil people of both gender. "Equal rights", he said. I also only wanted to add one doctor, but he said there would be at least two corrupt doctors in the mix
- decided to make 4 and 5 friends instead of two random male rogue spies
- decided to make the Yakuza guys a family instead of just three random members
- pointed out that not everyone would run for the paths as soon as they opened, some staying to strategize and 'form alliances'
- pointed out that more than one person would accidentally end up back at 'start'
- changed more that I cannot recall at the moment
"So basically 80% of this post" - Brother, 2020
I did his chores for two days straight in return for all his help, and did whatever he wanted in our free time for a few days to thank him. We made this list together, so this is whatever both of us could remember.
- invented the 'eel water' trap. I was just going to make both water traps identical to the one that 6 died in.
- chose the routes and deaths for everyone except: the mafia guys (but he did switch 12's and 11's weapons from rapiers to bats), the first ten people that died, the detective, and the policeman (27), and the people that died from poisoned water, and the congresswoman
- switched 4 and 5's spiked bats for swords before they left the starting point since they'd be more comfortable using them
- was against the Russian having a chain sickle, since it would be too difficult for him to handle, but I insisted, because I wanted some ridiculously rare weapons so everyone wasn't just using swords and spears, which my brother insisted were more functional and thus would be the most popular
- wanted to use human-sized mechs, and guns, but I said 'melee weapons only so they don't win too easily'
- put an additional 'half can pass' at the north exit
- made the south exit fake
- had the warlord and general take multiple weapons because they're the smarter ones
- had them NOT have a showdown and just leave together because of a mutual respect, whereas I wanted them to kill each other
- the Yakuza ambush at the end was actually my idea, he said 'have them just leave', but that was before he placed the additional 'half can pass' at the north exit, and when I asked him what to do with the siblings afterwards, he said 'whatever, just have 'em leave'
- wanted to let the bartender go free, but I wanted Nova to have him, so I just put our conversation into the role play almost word for word as Soren and Rosaleya's when they're discussing if it's unfair or not
- told me about army guys digging up land mines, and the conversation about that was also put in, word for word, between Soren and Rosaleya
- changed the bartender's weapon from nothing (I thought he would be too scared) to a spear or halberd, and I chose a spear, so he could poke people at long range instead
- changed one 'slave trader' to a Female Human Rights Activist/Slave Trader, which is even darker than I thought to make it
- insisted on giving them unpoisoned water canteens, at the start, and only poisoning the refills, because "if you're stupid enough to not ration your water, you deserve to die', whereas I wanted to poison all the water because the collars made it so they didn't need water *laughs in sadism*
- helped me design the dragon room (how large they were, how they worked, and how long it would take to die from it/turn to ash from it) (like Dante, he wanted to use real dragons, but I said that the villains might hurt them and that the point was to make a non-magical maze, basically the conversation between Nova, Dante, and Celeste happened between us. He also wanted to use "human-sized, fire-breathing Godzilla mechs" instead of dragons that came from the ceiling, so "they can fight them head on with their swords...as soon as you walk into the room, its gun-arms shoot your legs so you can't run, then they flame-torch you to death while shooting you, and as they're shooting you, they're laughing in the 'saw voice' " (He hasn't watched SAW yet, he's not allowed, but he's seen memes of the SAW laugh)
- described how the non-eel electric water would be designed to shock the victim to death via generators
- added one female policeman, doctor, judge, fbi and cia agent, and congress member, whereas I wanted to make them all males. He pointed out that that's not how it works and how there are evil people of both gender. "Equal rights", he said. I also only wanted to add one doctor, but he said there would be at least two corrupt doctors in the mix
- decided to make 4 and 5 friends instead of two random male rogue spies
- decided to make the Yakuza guys a family instead of just three random members
- pointed out that not everyone would run for the paths as soon as they opened, some staying to strategize and 'form alliances'
- pointed out that more than one person would accidentally end up back at 'start'
- changed more that I cannot recall at the moment
"So basically 80% of this post" - Brother, 2020
I did his chores for two days straight in return for all his help, and did whatever he wanted in our free time for a few days to thank him. We made this list together, so this is whatever both of us could remember.