I just edited it. Is it okay now? (I didn't think of adding her alias, since she only used it once, and from then on she went as 'Eve Blackwood', so thanks for the reminder.)
I'm going to include the information in the parantheses of my past post, since it explains a lot and shouldn't have been in the parentheses to begin with:
(Luna has come to give the D'Arcy's a gift. A bottle of blood, not wine, for them to enjoy. She stole it from Muggles by way of an excuse called "a Blood Donation". Thinking that it will give herself a good introduction into the family, she brings it as a surprise.)
Aislinn blinked twice. She was feeling very flustered about Luna's way of apologizing. Merlin's beard, I never expected this. She does not need to kneel for me... Aislinn went down on her knees so she was in the same eye level as Luna and said: "It is allright dear, you don't need to apologize. And by the way, it is also about your own safety as well. Let's say if I did not find the bottle today but someone else, who should not, find it, then perhaps they would set up a trap to capture you if you deliver another bottle again..."
Now your next post should be the one after mine . I noticed I got three posts, 1 after 1 because you deleted your posts. So I deleted mine and kept this one because this one comes after your last post.
I think we are on the right track now , let's wait like 1 minute before we post so we do not mess up the page even asks me to wait like a number of seconds before I can post lol