Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
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Shinohara
Why have abs when you can have kebabs
They are there. That's the problem.
Spazzycat101
GryphonABLaZ(E). Lawful chaotic good
It's magical, isn't it?
And YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY! I'm decent at coming up with ideas! *throws a piñata in the air, accidentally having it land on me and provide me with a heavy candy-stuffed mask*
And YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
I'm decent at coming up with ideas! *throws a piñata in the air, accidentally having it land on me and provide me with a heavy candy-stuffed mask*
Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
@Spazzycat101 the only thing that bothered me slightly is... the Cliché idea and races. Well, sort of cliché ideas. BUT it doesn't mean its bad! It's very well planned out, but if you're hosting this rp on this site (you said it was a rp right?) then maybe try to shorten it a little bit... People aren't all that happy when it comes to long reading and stuff. Unless its a book, then you can write ALL the details. You're really supposed to leave some things to the roleplayers, all while keeping the story under wraps if that's what you want. For example, I added a fair amount of details in this rp for them to understand how Threads work and possibly make their own Threads or find a core part in this rp. Even then, I'm progressing the main story for season 1. I'm going to try out giving people full freedom in season 2 for events and things like that as long as they fit in the rp. See where I'm going with this?
It's just the mechanics you're a little bad on. I shouldn't say bad. You're just not the GREATEST. Not saying I am, either. I honestly suck.
But yeah, I hope this helps you at least a little ^^ I can't find anything else other than a few strange grammatically incorrect pieces.
It's just the mechanics you're a little bad on. I shouldn't say bad. You're just not the GREATEST. Not saying I am, either. I honestly suck.
But yeah, I hope this helps you at least a little ^^ I can't find anything else other than a few strange grammatically incorrect pieces.
Spazzycat101
GryphonABLaZ(E). Lawful chaotic good
Okey! And I did have a not-cliche-idea, I think I'll reinstate that one. And I'll shorten some stuff up and generalize it too. Thanks for your feedback, though! ^-^
Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
It was my pleasure ^^
AlphaSpace
Philanthropist Cannibal
Can i still join this roleplay?
Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
[QUOTE="Ace of Hearts]Can i still join this roleplay?
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absolutely ^^
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absolutely ^^
hudhouse
The Voidwalker
I am interested, but I have no idea what is going on since I haven't been following it...
Plus, how would one noob get into this?
Plus, how would one noob get into this?
Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
You would read the notes tab and overview tab..? And possibly the old overview tab?hudhouse said:
Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
*ahem* also, you're on the wrong thread.
hudhouse
The Voidwalker
[QUOTE="Umbra Regalia]*ahem* also, you're on the wrong thread.
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lord your fast ._.
Apologizes, I didn't see there was a Q&A tab
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lord your fast ._.
Apologizes, I didn't see there was a Q&A tab
Umbra Regalia
There's no place like 127.0.0.1
no.... not... -facedesk- when did I say Q and A?!
Go to the newer Thread, there should be a link somewhere on this one. All the info is there.
Go to the newer Thread, there should be a link somewhere on this one. All the info is there.
