High Moon
Relic of a Bygone Age
Things should remain cordial, I'm inclined to agree.Okay, keep it polite though, OOC should be fun for everyone.
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Things should remain cordial, I'm inclined to agree.Okay, keep it polite though, OOC should be fun for everyone.
Hmm I see.... probably should just leave then... sorry for wasting your time... other times iv attempted to fix up CS, but most people find even my fixes unacceptable..... but I’ll try.. if you could show me some of the issue you have with it that would be much appreciated since I often have a hard time seeing the issues other seem to have wit my workHuntertabbysandshark3 Going by your CS I'm not sure if you're at the level of writing I'm looking for in this RP. If you can fix up your sheet I might accept you, but as it stands now I cannot.
Don't give up so easily. There is always room and time for improvement. I'm not the best writter around either and make common mistakes with this dreaded language but we do this for a communal writing project for the ultimate goal of fun. I'm sure you can improve upon what you have with revisions.Hmm I see.... probably should just leave then... sorry for wasting your time... other times iv attempted to fix up CS, but most people find even my fixes unacceptable..... but I’ll try.. if you could show me some of the issue you have with it that would be much appreciated since I often have a hard time seeing the issues other seem to have wit my work
Aww... thanks for being so nice about it... I’ll be honest I did write the entire CS on mobile....still I’m not sure... had a really bad run in with another DM that was incredibly rude to me about my writing even though they said they don’t use proper grammarDon't give up so easily. There is always room and time for improvement. I'm not the best writter around either and make common mistakes with this dreaded language but we do this for a communal writing project for the ultimate goal of fun. I'm sure you can improve upon what you have with revisions.
I know half the people here and I'd say they are a nice bunch and Jean Otus seems like a nice feller as well, I for one am up to helping you out (Albeit I warn you, My native is Turkish so expect a lot of errors on my part as well) and I'm sure my friends here would agree that it's our job to lead the way in expanding and integrating people into the community.Aww... thanks for being so nice about it... I’ll be honest I did write the entire CS on mobile....still I’m not sure... had a really bad run in with another DM that was incredibly rude to me about my writing even though they said they don’t use proper grammar
Your descriptions all have run-on sentences, incorrect spelling, and grammatical errors, except for the description of your magical powers, which is far too short. On top of that, I have no intention to have magical races like elves, whether or not you meant that from your appearance picture I'm not sure. If you can flesh out your descriptions, clarify your appearance, and correct the errors, I might be able to accept your character.Hmm I see.... probably should just leave then... sorry for wasting your time... other times iv attempted to fix up CS, but most people find even my fixes unacceptable..... but I’ll try.. if you could show me some of the issue you have with it that would be much appreciated since I often have a hard time seeing the issues other seem to have wit my work
Fair fair I couldn’t find any images I like too much and I didn’t intend him to look like a elf, it just so happened he appeared that way I can improve on all of that it however might take me a couple of hours got school and the like. But no blunt is good I asked for itYour descriptions all have run-on sentences, incorrect spelling, and grammatical errors, except for the description of your magical powers, which is far too short. On top of that, I have no intention to have magical races like elves, whether or not you meant that from your appearance picture I'm not sure. If you can flesh out your descriptions, clarify your appearance, and correct the errors, I might be able to accept your character.
I use a free program called Grammarly on my computer which catches most errors for me. It's a huge help on here.Fair fair I couldn’t find any images I like too much and I didn’t intend him to look like a elf, it just so happened he appeared that way I can improve on all of that it however might take me a couple of hours got school and the like. But no blunt is good I asked for it
Actually I have it too like I said I made the CS on mobile soo I don’t have grammarly there However I do have it on my computer once I get home form school I should be able to fix up a lot of the errorsI use a free program called Grammarly on my computer which catches most errors for me. It's a huge help on here.
Good, I'll look forward to it then.Actually I have it too like I said I made the CS on mobile soo I don’t have grammarly there However I do have it on my computer once I get home form school I should be able to fix up a lot of the errors
Same, really wanna play a storyteller well I think the concept of shadow puppet magic is cool XDGood, I'll look forward to it then.
I'm still not sold on it, but if you can describe it well enough I just might take a liking to it.Same, really wanna play a storyteller well I think the concept of shadow puppet magic is cool XD
ok well, I just finished editing it now... any other issues? with the current version?Huntertabbysandshark3 I'm sorry but I'm still not sold on your character sheet. I'm afraid I cannot accept it.
I'm sorry I just have trouble reading it with the run-on sentences. I can't accept it for this roleplay, I'm sorry.ok well, I just finished editing it now... any other issues? with the current version?
Ok then see ya byeI'm sorry I just have trouble reading it with the run-on sentences. I can't accept it for this roleplay, I'm sorry.