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  • Darklord95
    Hi I couldn’t help but notice that you’re checking out my interest check, I’d just like to ask, is there anything at all that I could change or add on that would help really sell it, so to speak? I’m new to starting RPs so the feedback would help immensely.
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    Crayons
    Crayons
    Welp first off it seems you're doing fine in terms of getting interest, so what you are doing must be working! I'd advise you to check your spelling and grammar - even though you are writing in character in a cowboy accent (which is really fun and I enjoyed reading it!) you should still check for things like where you need an apostrophe or capital letter - it just makes things neater and encourages people to think you know what you're doing.

    If I was writing an interest check I'd probably have a bit more OOC info like post length/frequency requirements, whether this is a GMed story or freeform (seems like it could be either) and that kind of thing.

    With Interest Checks it also really depends on what kind of RP you want to attract. With yours I get the impression you want fast-paced RP with a low word count - like 1 paragraph max. So that being the case you're fine doing it as you are. If you want to get the "advanced lit" crowd or the code addicts in its a whole other ball game, but it seems to me that you have interest from lots of people who like your post so all you have to do now is keep them interested with your RP! Good luck. 🙂
    Darklord95
    Darklord95
    Thanks a ton! I really appreciate it!
    Crayons
    Crayons
    NP!
    Tamriel
    Love your profile picture. She's so pretty.
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    Crayons
    Crayons
    That's not a bad thing! being able to describe stuff is hella useful. Also you can save up and commission one of the artists on here. :) Or use a Picrew which I highly recommend as being a fun way to make character pics.
    Tamriel
    Tamriel
    He is a weird boi. He.......I'll tell you about him in PM, if that's fine. I don't want everyone to know about him until I'm done with him.
    Crayons
    Crayons
    Sure!
    Kazu
    rando here but amazing taste with okita pfp!! i love that man dearly
    Crayons
    Crayons
    Are you me? My sn on Discord is Kazu. XD
    Simon_Hawk
    *invades profile* *jumps out the window*
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    Ayama
    Ayama
    -smiles- Please ^^ ​
    Simon_Hawk
    Simon_Hawk
    *Waits till the opportune moment and squashes the crumpet in Ayama' face* hehehehe,. *jazz hands, runs away*
    Ayama
    Ayama
    -pauses, slowly brushes crumbs off in a dignified way, puts down cup, inclines head to Crayons-
    If you'll excuse me... -pushes off from table, turns around, runs after Si- Come back here you no good- -further insults lost in the dust cloud-     ​
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