The thing is, being able to go 24 hours without sleep can't be easy, it just can't, but anyone is physically capable of going without sleep for 24 hours. So, in the point in which it is possible, it's not a skill anymore. Hence me asking you to remove it.
I wouldn't say everyone has the will power to do so, it becomes a skill due to him doing it many times in the past.
This sound okay to me then. Just remember that in order to be approved your character sheet should stand as a whole so all info you answer here such as "He takes on physical stress" should be in the CS as well. I'd also like to ask you to note how the stress effects him as time goes on.
-If it's just wording it's fine, However I'd suggest adding a quick note of why'd he want to do this then
-While I did get a very funny image of how it being a hamster ball can backfire very quickly for Ian I'd like you to explain why it'd be hard to be caught then. Is it something that you can predict or see as it's being formed? Also I am unsure about the durability levels as I don't know a great deal of the force that would be needed to break the three of them. For example I would have thought steel would be stronger than bone. For this I'd like to ask that you message Idea about or one of the other Co-GM's (Which can be found in the rules of the OOC)
-Okay I can get behind this then. However I'd still like to ask you lower all of the levels time though I'd say the highest level should be at most 30. Check with Idea about this
-Ah so that makes it roughly big enough to surround the average person's torso?
-Okay sounds good
-I definitely wouldn't have assumed this as an emotion. I'm not sure Idea would let you use tiredness against another character but it should be fine for Ian.
If it takes will power it's not easy, and lack of sleep is not something you can get used to. Yes, you can get used to sleeping less but that causes harm to your body, so it's never easy
You are lacking serious flaws, and your character is very one-dimensional. You need to add more flaws and add different sides to him.
This is boku no hero. Every other quirk alters your appearance. NOBODY is bullied because of how they look.
Wait, so he has to be naked to latch on?
But he can't pick up what's actually being said or seen, right?
How long a break and how long to process?
I have to say, I am not happy with you using this pic, as I do state specifically that the two options are either an anime pic or a description... I need to think about whether I can allow this pic or not, but if you have ANY replacement that is within the aforementioned terms, please use that instead
How?
The backstory seems a little overdramatic. I won't reject your character for it, but it seems to me like it's unecessary, in paritcular because this can easily be fixed by maybe making the mother the one that got killed by villains instead? And if you really want him to have a sister, perhaps one good way to go about it would be to have her be the one sending this character to the PSA for his own good since his father was too paranoid to let him go? Dunno, just suggestions.
This is way too short. make the processing at least a minute, and as for the cooldown/throat thing, at least 5.
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bone is stronger than steel. But I can return to previous reference so that strength increase is clearer. Will add changes to CS.
Arguably easier for him than for others that never have, causi g harm to your body can be easy. I will take off the easy part if you wish, as I said in my previous post.
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. Also his punch without a barrier is the same as an average teenage boy.
And as stated, if you take off the easy part it's not a skill. It am willing to believe he can pull it off and that it may be a littl easier for him, it's just not any particularly extraordinary talent
That's understandable and I'd expect a reason if it wasn't, however my concern is how strong that punch is "with" the barrier. Your special move as it is currently doesn't explain the reason he'd want to use it as it gives a weakness without a measurable benefit.
"I'm half moth, half man, all right!"
Ren Sakura
Name:
Ren Sakura
Nicknames:
Mask-San
Conspiracy-kun
Desired Hero Name:
The Truth Seeking Hero: Mothy
I mean the fist would be as strong as the barrier...since the barrier is around fist. Remember that the arm is exposed and there is is no added speed or strength to "throwing" the punch. Like putting on fisticuffs.
Ah okay that's sounds like it should be an acceptable move then depending on what the final strength of the barrier winds up being. I'd like to also ask that you add in your character's weight as it isn't in the CS and mark the special move as a seperate section from quirk as just naming it isn't enough for some to recognize that is your special move. I do see that progress is being made in fleshing out this quirk but I must remind you to reflect it in the character sheet as it should be able to stand alone once being finished so that everyone can read, if they choose to, after you are accepted.
WIP
"All you gotta do is beat up the baddie, and the day is saved-- its not that complicated."
Name:
Chiru Amada
[Chi-ru] [A-ma-da]
Nicknames:
Ru
Desired Hero Name:
Age:
15
Gender:
Male
Chosen Extra Class:
Mentoring
Appearance:
Chiru similar to his picture has blackish blue hair and turquoise eyes. One of his main features would be the small gab in between his two upper front teeth than can be seen when he smiles widely. At this moment, Chiru does not have a lot of muscles built up . . . Its a work in progress he says, but has yet to be seen doing much to work on his strength.
(soon to be) Hero Costume:
Chiru's soon to be hero costume is a close to what the photo shows but without the cloak, boots, and ammo belts. The neck part of the shirt is more like a collar than a turtle neck. His colors are mostly black with bits of a blackish blue coloring on smaller details.
On his feet he simply wears a blackish blue ankle brace, leaving most of his feet uncovered as an option to create pulses from his feet. He keeps his hands mostly uncovered for the same reason, but does have a particular set of fingerless gloves that have an opening on the front and back of his palm.
One of the noticeable things Chiru's has are long ribbon like belts. These can be stretch out up to 2.5 yards. The ribbon like belts are pretty strong (but can be cut with a strong blade), and are used to wrap around pole like options for Chiru's Merry-Ru-Round ability.
Chiru's overall costume is meant to be lightweight and allow him to move around as freely as possible.
Height:
5'2
Weight:
112lbs
Personality:
Chiru in a nutshell is a feisty ball of energy that gets way to competitive over the smallest of things. He is the type of person you record playing Mario Kart because of how much he flips out over a blue shell. He is constantly trying to bite off more than he can actually chew, and can lose sight of the bigger picture very easily.
Outside of his explosive nature, when Chiru is not flipping out over spilled milk he can actually be a human being that has a functioning communication system. He comes off as a rowdy kid, who struggles to understand complex situations. Chiru tends to simplify things that aren't always so simple such as "if you remove the threat, then there is no threat" and stuff like this is just a matter of fact to him, and when people try to expand on this idea it confuses him . . . And will probably make him frustrated.
Of course, while he does have trouble understanding things, he isn't completely unaware of himself. He knows he loses his temper to easily, and he knows that he isn't understanding the bigger picture of things. The problem is, that he doesn't know how to change. He is aware that his reasons to be a hero aren't really that of a hero, and that his own irrational temper is going to hurt himself and those around him.
Chiru is kind of in a place of avoiding the question of how does he fix his own problems, and deludes himself into believing that it'll be fine. Shifts his failures on him not being physically adapt, rather than having to face the issue of his own personality flaws. Any time it is obvious that he did something wrong, he tries to justify it rather than accepting the fact he was wrong regardless of whatever excuse he comes up with.
Likes:
-Cookies (any but peanut butter seems fine with him)
-Adrenaline inducing experiences
-Training Drills (fights, hero simulations, etc)
-"Sweater season"/Winter
-Energy Drinks
Dislikes:
-Neckties
-Summer Heat
-The Ocean
-Conditioning
-Coffee (the smell is revolting to him)
Fears:
Geese - This is kind of stupid, but a long time ago while having a picnic with his dad, he tried to scare off the "intruders" while his dad was getting the food out . . . Turns out, Geese aren't scared by little kids and ended up chasing him around until his father "rescued" him. Now any bird that resembles a goose makes him uneasy, and if they get too close to him, Chiru is going to run away.
Deep Water - Chiru can swim "good enough", but he still refuses to enter the water anymore than below the stomach. If its the ocean, he refuses to go deep enough for the water to go anywhere past his waist. He theorizes that he has this fear because in the water he isn't as mobile, and while he can swim he isn't that good of one.
Mannerisms: (at least 1)
Chiru tends to fall asleep in class a lot, only really interested in anything combat related.
When angry (or embarrassed), Chiru's ear reddens.
Backstory: {S}
TLDR:
Takashi and Aemi were your classing high school sweethearts, and after graduating from a hero academy they married. The newly wed couple continued their dreams of becoming a hero, and once they got their hero licenses they were an inseparable duo. During an encounter with a villain a bit out of their league, something had changed in Aemi.
The fight was brutal, and there were a lot of casualties . . . Even if it was against hero code, Aemi desperately did what she could to stop the villain, even if that meant putting an end to them. After this encounter, Takashi and Aemi went their separate ways. He would carry on as a lawful hero, and she would form her own group called "The Dawn" to do things in her own way.
Of course, even though it was clear she was behind The Dawn, she surprisingly didn't appear with their heists (she justified it as getting the funding for a better cause). Takashi wouldn't see her until 9 months later, and on this final encounter she would be handing over their son to him.
After that transition, Aemi was captured by the pro heroes that were waiting in hiding nearby the meeting. After capturing her, Takashi hung up his costume and would focus on raising his son to the best of his ability.
Chiru lived a fairly easy life with his father. They lived above the bakery his father owned in a low-crime away that had good schools in the area. The two had their disagreements, but never enough to break their bond. One of the many things Chiru complained about was how his father constantly coddled him. His father's attentions were good, but Chiru saw it as his father saying he wasn't capable of anything.
When Chiru's quirk started to manifest, more problems arose. At school Chiru started to get in a lot of fights, and when he got in trouble for it he always argued he was just putting a "baddie" in their place. Like many kids growing up, Chiru thought being a hero was the coolest thing . . . Not much on the whole "saving people" part of it, more of the fighting bad guys.
His father tried to redirect Chiru's irrational energy into something other than "fighting bad guys", by introducing Chiru in a variety of physical activity to help him blow off some stream . . . This actually made things worse, because now Chiru was getting more confident in his physical abilities and was now starting more fights at school because "they deserved it".
As Chiru started to get older, his disagreements with his father escalated. In Chiru's mind, he believed his father was against him being a hero because his father saw him as a weakling who didn't deserve the title. Chiru's father was actually against it because he knew that being a pro hero had a lot more into the package than what they showed on TV, and he worried that Chiru wouldn't understand the full picture until it reality crushed him. By this point in his life, Chiru already knew some details from his father's past, and it only made him even more pissed off since he felt like that if his dad got to be a hero that he should be able to be one.
Their biggest fight happened when Chiru had made the decision to go to PSA (UA was way out of his reach, quite literally), and his father was not very supportive of it. Things that shouldn't have been brought up, and although Chiru won the fight in the end he did it at the price of hurting his father. Since then, they have kind of been quiet about the subject.
Relationships:
His Father (Takashi Amada) - Chiru has his complaints, but no matter how much shit he gives his old man he still loves him. His father would prefer it if Chiro took interest in something other than being a hero, and found it very hard to let his son go off to PSA. In the end, Chiru had his way but their relationship has taken a pretty hard hit. Chiru doesn't really like talking about it, and refuses to admit how much he misses his father still.
His father's hero name was "Pulsator"
His Mother (Aemi Subatsu) - Chiru has never really known his mother, and he never really thought much about her since she was never in his life. Although now he knows of her more, he still really doesn't care because "she got what she had coming to her."
Her hero name was "The Hyper Hero: Batsu Batsu"
Quirk: Hyper Pulse
Chiru's quirk is a blend of "Get Hyped" (mother) and "Pulse" (father).
This quirk allows Chiru to emit 'strong' pulses from his hands and feet in a quick succession, unlike his father who had to charge it up before releasing the pulse. On the flip side of this, Chiru's pulses are not very strong.
He can only force back 130 lbs and that is only if they are in a 1 foot range of him. His area of effect is 3 feet and is forced outward in a cone, and anything under 130 lbs would only be effected the same way as being pushed. Might catch someone who is off guard, but anyone who is ready for it could easily hold their ground.
Chiru uses his pulses to propel around to boost his mobility, which means his pulses are strong enough to force back the weight of around 112 lbs.
Although it isn't enough to send him flying 5 feet into the air in a second, it is enough to lift him 1 foot off the ground in a second. His quirk allows him to increase his mobility and if used in the right way, empower his strikes.
In regards to the "Hype" part of his quirk, this is merely a mixture of his mother's enhancement quirk. For his mother, as time goes on in a fight she gets more "hyper" and this "hype" increases her strength, speed, and agility. For Chiru, this just allows him to emit pulses quickly, and build up more speed with them. Similar to his mother, the more he fights, the more "hype" he gets, but unlike his mom this "hype" is mostly connected to his pulses and agility.
At this moment, Chiru takes around 15-30 minutes to reach his peak. When he reaches this climax, he can emit pulses in a 0.5 rapid session, getting him to dart around at 23 mph. Of course in order to reach this point, he has to be able to last that long. As Chiru is now, after reaching his peak hype, he is completely burnt out. Chiru is still working on managing when he gets his hype since he can't handle the aftermath of it quite yet.
Special Moves: Merry-Ru-Round
An very conditional move that requires the use of rope like belts Chiru's hero costume includes. In Merry-Ru-Round, Chiru latches the belt around a center point (something like a pole), and propels himself in a circle by emitting a rapid series of pulses to build up momentum. One enough speed has been built up, Chiru will release himself into the direction of his opponent for an empowered strike. This move can only be used once in a fight and afterwards Chiru needs at least two minutes to steady himself.
Items:
Glasses + Sport Goggles - Although Chiru doesn't use them often, he does have a prescription for glasses. He is near-sighted, but its pretty mild so he can get by. Chiru uses his sport goggles more than his glasses since they "look cooler".
A big duck plushy(?) - A parting gift from his dad that Chiru constantly complains about . . .Yet he uses it like a weirdly designed bean bag chair, and on bad days, shares his bed with the big thing. Even to this day, Chiru wonders where the hell his father found this thing.
Skills/talents:
Baking - "One does not simply live in a bakery and does not know how to bake" . . . Or at least that is what his father says.
Chiru's father had him help out with the bakery, and often tried to encourage Chiru to just settle for a simple life.
Gymnastics - A hobby he did as a child that was mostly just to tire him out, or even try to redirect his ambitions.
Theme Song:
Idea
Finished editing
Psy "Ian" Kikian
Personal & Background
EXTRA
Likes: Catfish, music, German cuisine, sheep.
Dislikes: dogs, forks, and upper class society, sleeping.
Fears: Becoming his father, other's perceptions of him.
Item(s): A feather pillow & stuffed, toy sheep
Skills/Talents:
- He is knowledgeable on maintaining hair/fur.
-He has 30 country songs memorized on the fiddle.
-He can sleep on any surface comfortably.
Items:
Hero Costume
Barriers long as long as the person under the influence of the barrier doesn't reach mental limit, so like being unconscious would destroy the barrier.
How are they difficult to put around other people?
I note in the CS that he has to know the powerful emotion that barrier will be powered by or it will shatter. If he doesn't know, he can't make a barrier.
I need to think about this and discuss it with my co-GMs. Your quirk seems way overpowered and the weaknesses you give it are iffy at best. It's not a 100% guarantee, but I'd start thinking of alternatives if I was you
