Jarkov Malachai
A simple Traveler, consumed by Wanderlust.
I am afraid I dont know much about what you mean by full hog, but any who I didnt put much detail pertaining to the rp itself because I dont know ANYTHING about the rp setting as of yet whatsoever save the most basic of details. What city the characters are all around or even what country for petes sake. Whats the general publics state of mind? Do they care about the new regimes rise to power? How is said regime affecting the global status quo? How is it changing things?Corrected spelling errors, yet I saw so many issues with this application. Where did the xenophobia come from? Humanity should be united against the paranormals, meaning no room for subtle or overt racism. While child soldiers do happen, they aren't the primary killing force by any means. This RP is meant to be believable and grounded in real life, so the scenarios you presented at at most unlikely to happen. The bio is unclear in the timeline of events to the point I could not make heads or tails out of it. Also, a soldier would not be let go in the first place and the fact that paranormals took over would be known as soon as after they succeeded. Not to mention that South Africa is actually well developed, among the top ten countries in Africa. Humans aren't video game characters; a child's mind would be too fragile in the first place, warping near instantly with the events.
The bottom line is that I'm not accepting this one.
You didn't have to go full hog on this by any means. I didn't see any use of putting up irrelevant information. I saw minimal (if any) details pertaining to the RP. Seems more like an OC that was just thrown in. I personally could not make heads or tails out of this application. Somewhat too bizarre for me to accept.
All I know is that there is a alien or otherworldly power that has risen to control the government through well coordinated coups and under handed methods but not ANYTHING at all of what they are actually doing or changing.
Literally all I have to go on is theres some aliens/otherworlders that took over the planet and humanity decides ten years later its time to fight back...
WHY? You've given me no negative reasons at all to go off of to make a rebel character save they have nefarious plans for humanity and while I know what they are it doesnt say they've done anything yet to put them into motion. Have they started enslaving people yet? Eating them? I need something man.
Hence forth mine character, a semi average joe that wants to be left alone and has little stake in either side as of the moment because throwing my character into the thick of a almost guaranteed cluster fuck with permadeath isnt my idea of a good idea. If its the character himself thats the problem I could fix that should you point out what you feel is the problem with little difficulty for the whole OC was designed so that I could change it and add it into relatively any scenario or situation the rp is taking place but, it is your rp after all.
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