Other The Writer's Agora

[Rhajaki]

We can brainstorm. We can ask for and give advise and constructive criticism. We can share pieces of our own. For beginners and writing vets alike, I hope this thread will be a nice place we can use to help each other improve our writing abilities.

But please, if you ask for advise, be open.
If you give advise, give both the good and the bad feedback in a respectful manner.
No haters.
If you feel these guidelines are a given and shouldn't have had to be laid out--more power to you.

 

[Hall Kervean]

Great idea; but this should go on the creativity subforum instead!

 

[Idea]

Just one question, what's an agora?

 

[MarinesThePsychoticReaper]

Idea Agora - Wikipedia

 

[Rhajaki]

Just one question, what's an agora?

ag·o·ra
[ˈaɡərə]
NOUN
agorae (plural noun) · agoras (plural noun)

1. (in ancient Greece) a public open space used for assemblies and markets.

ORIGIN
from Greek.

 

[Idea]

Idea Agora - Wikipedia

ag·o·ra
[ˈaɡərə]
NOUN
agorae (plural noun) · agoras (plural noun)

1. (in ancient Greece) a public open space used for assemblies and markets.

ORIGIN
from Greek.

Thank you both

 

[Rhajaki]

No prob bob. Tis what this thread is for.

 

[Hall Kervean]

A haiku, by Squidanoward.
They tried to bomb us
To torp, to sink, to swarm us
But they missed the oil.

They messed it all up;
They hit our ships and planes, but
what about repair?

Was the luck a stroke?
Our aircraft carriers were gone,
so they hit more planes.

Their submarine too,
it could launch five minisubs, but
why? They could hold 2!

Yamamoto said,
"I'll run wild for 6 months,
but after, we'll lose."

I was bored.
I made Pearl Harbor haikus.