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[The Suspicious Eye]

Avatar CS


Name: Surma Darmain

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Birthplace (approximate): She lived and grew up along the western part of the Kolau Mountains.

Skills: Playing the lute (or lute-like instrument), earth & metal bending, dancing and fighting. She has a high endurance rate and is very agile.

Personality: Surma is a kind, fun loving girl with a lot riding on her. She loves to enjoy life to there fullest, not wanting to miss out on anything. She's always willing to try something new and experience the world around her. She's sometimes very stubborn and hates having leave something unfinished. Although she is a playful and young there are times in which she seems very wise. She rely's on her intuition and tries to keep a level head during dangerous situations. She practices a great deal of patience and understanding. She is spiritually aware and very creative, always thinking outside the box. She tries to give 120% in everything she does when she puts her mind to it.

Biography: Surma grew up with her family in the Kolau Mountains. Her family is in charge of the trade between the Kolau Mountains and there rest of the world. They are well known for their export of fine metals and gems. Surma spent a lot of her time adventuring in the western forest and eastern mountains. She loves exploring and adventuring, finding out new things and places is her passion. She uses her earth bending to move easily around the area and find new places to find. She was born with her earth bending powers, and had a natural affinity to spirits and nature. Surma has a older brother named Ranef that she looks up to greatly. He is currently the vice president of Darmain Exports, the CEO being their father. Ranef is a skilled negotiator and has built national ties with many companies around the world, putting their family company in very good standing. Surma has always aspired to be as kind caring and generous as he is. She always wanted to do more with her life. Learning that she is the avatar is a great opportunity for her to do just that.

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Stuffing in the last set of clothes she could in her pack Surma smiled a little sadly as she finished. She slowly stood up and noticed the lush forest that was framed in her window. Looking out at the vast forest from her window Surma let out a long sigh. Leaning over the windowpane she looked at the place she called home, her hear filled with worry. "What am I going to do?" Surma felt a gentle hand on her shoulder she turned to see who it was. Surma's elder brother Ranef smiled down back at her. "What's wrong Surma?" Ranef asked, he was worried about her, it wasn't like her to be so down. "It's nothing brother.." Surma lied. Ranef looked at her intently, he wasn't buying such a obvious lie. Surma squirmed under the pressure of his eyes, she didn't want to say what was on her mind, but her brother always had a way of getting the truth out of her. Surma sighed "I'm afraid, I'm afraid to be the avatar." Ranef looked at his sister worriedly, as she continued. "Being the next avatar is such a great responsibility. Everyone keeps saying how great I'll be as the avatar " She paused gripping her hands tightly, "but what if I mess something up! What if I fail at something or worse get people killed." She turned to her brother worry in her eyes, "I don't know if I can handle that kind of pressure." She dropped her head, her hair hiding her face. In a trembling voice she continued "I don't know if I can do this... maybe I should just stay here." Ranef put his hands on Surma's tiny shoulders, they were so small and fragile, but Ranef knew that they were strong. He gripped

Surma's shoulders tightly and smiled "Surma, lift your head." She slowly rose her head and looked at her brother, it looked as if she was about to cry. "It's true you are the Avatar, but more importantly you a human. We all make mistakes. It's if you have the will to keep getting up from those mistakes. And the guts to keep making mistakes, your wisdom, and intelligence will leap forward. Because if you are making mistakes, then you are making new things, trying new things, learning, living , pushing yourself, changing yourself, changing the world. Your doing something you've never done before, and more importantly, your doing something." He smiled at her warmly "You have the will and the guts to stand up. I know you Surma. You'll change the world." Surma smiled at her brother. She stood up straight, her shoulders stiffened as were strong and firm. Wiping her eyes, she looked up at her brother with newfound resolve. "Thanks Ranef." She picked up her bag and walked out the door.


Ranef watched as she left, when she was gone he looked at the door for a while. He sighed, he was going to miss his sister. Suddenly a loud rush of running footsteps could be heard coming closer and Surma stood in the door way. "Wait a minute! You're saying that I am gonna mess up!" Ranef laughed and shrugged "well yeah your not the brightest in the bunch. I mean, how long did it take you to figure that out, 4 maybe 5 minutes? There's no way your not gonna mess something up." Surma angrily threw her bad at her brother "you are so mean!!" Her brother caught the bag and smiled "this is mine now." He ran past his sister and down the hall laughing cheerfully. "Huh?! Hey wait! I need that! Ranef!!!!!" Surma ran out of the room and down the hall after her brother. Smiling she shouted "I'm gonna get you!"

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(I'll obviously add more with more context, specifically in the Bio section. But that's it Avatar Surma)

 

[Moon Rabbit]

x-x i feel bad because ive been waiting to see yours to put mine up. but now i see they are pretty similar in looks and talents and that sort of detail stuff and want to change mine. ohno D:


 
I'm just going to bow out like I originally planned. x-x It's too much work to start over now and I don't want to make anyone wait up on me or anything.

 

[Deadkool]

If you'd like to make one of the instructors or an "other" character I would encourage you to. Otherwise, whatever you'd like to do.

 

[Moon Rabbit]

no thanks. it takes me quite a bit of time to form a character and I was picking up the avatar mainly because inspiration hit me a bit. I haven't got the muse or energy to think up a whole new character at this time, so yah. I'm sure there'll be other similar ideas that I can use my character for. o-o have fun with the roleplay, peoples. buh bye.

 

[The Suspicious Eye]

I can always make another CS for an other. I don't mind(^.^)


Sorry for taking forever I was doing HW and my phone still had me signed in


 
@Moon Rabbit I'm serious take the Avatar role I wanted to make a other anyway.

 

[Moon Rabbit]

no, no, no. i dont want to take a part from you. besides, i already did away with my work and whatnot. i dont mind at all, honestly. i'm already in a few rps atm so it isn't as though i absolutely need to pick up another one

 

[The Suspicious Eye]

Well dang I'm sorry, I really wouldn't have minded if you were the avatar. I just like competition a lot. I would have loved to have seen your work (:'() I'm sorry for making it all awkward and whatnot with the competition and all.

Please forgive me!!

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[Moon Rabbit]

No worries. i'm sure we'll roleplay together somewhere else or something. o-o i just take to take a part someone else wants, especially a big one like an avatar character is x-x especially if mine would be mediocre in comparison ha ha.


Don't worry about it at all, like I said I have got other roleplays I'm in to keep me busy.

 

[The Suspicious Eye]

You are so nice! I do hope we can do a RP sometime. I would greatly love to do something with you when I have the chance.

 

[Moon Rabbit]

We totally should sometime. Maybe we can come up with a plot together or something. But for now imma scootaloo before this post gets any further hijacked!

 

[The Suspicious Eye]

Lol yeah! PM me anytime I would love to RP with you and get to know you, too!

 

[Tercesasti]

I could make an other if it's cool.

 

[Natevess]

The Grand Council Interview Room


You've just been escorted into a small enclosed room fit with a wooden table and two chairs. A large man in formal attire sits across from you.


"As you may know the surviving council have located the next Avatar. You've been selected to potentially ensure (his/her) safe passage.


"What an honor!! I feel sooo grateful to be able to potentially accompany such an important figure!" Kurisu said, with the slightest hint of sarcasm. It was an honor, but Kurisu simply thought nothing of it.


"I need your name, age, and skills (miss/sir)"


"My name is Kurisu Shimura, I am 25, and I am very knowledgeable about most types of weaponry. I can use weapons like knives, swords, spears, axes, and other weapons of those types proficiently, however, admittedly, I have no skill with hammers. I can forge weapons and other tools, if given the correct materials. I also have knowledge of chemistry, specifically, explosives. I can make an explosive out of most types of materials, given that it is possible, of course. I am also skilled in hand-to-hand combat/fist fighting."


(if you bend) "What exactly are you able to bend?"


"I can't even remember how many times I've tried, but I can tell you, without a doubt, that I can't bend."


"Tell me about yourself...for security purposes of course."


"I was born and raised in the Fire Nation. This area was relatively removed from most of the rest of civilization. Both of my parents were smiths, making tools and such. I was educated there, out of my home. I received similar vocational training to my parents, and thus learned how to forge tools. I lived this life until I was 18, a whole year after the warlords had arrived in the Fire Nation. Around this time, my now elderly parents, in the upper end of their 50's, decided to hire somebody to teach me how to use weapons. He was a live-in trainer of sorts. They hired him to teach me to defend myself against any hostiles, as these warlords turned out to be.. I also learned how to create small explosives from this teacher. At the age of 25 I decided to leave, and after a bit of just wandering, I ended up here. Anything else you need to know?"


"And finally, how would you describe yourself best?"


"I am tall, standing at 6 feet 3 inches, relatively fit, build of somebody who stays in shape, nothing too insane. I tend to dress in blue, which is a stark contrast to normal Fire Nation garb, which tends to be red and black, and colors relating to such. I also wear loose robes most of the time, so as to not restrict my movement. I like to believe that I am smart and charismatic, however, I have been told I can come off as obnoxious. I am very open about my opinion, which tends to lead to the aforementioned obnoxiousness. I'm also a bit sarcastic sometimes.."


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