MorgathosTheRussian
Follower of Sigmar's Holy Path
When can we expect this here RP to begin?
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Sorry I'm taking so long, I'll try to have them both done by todayMorgathosTheRussian When Lost finishes their characters
CHARACTER CRITIQUES AND APPROVEMENT
(this goes for everyone)
Field Marshall You can do whatever you'd like with your character, just let me know when you finish. And I'll be sure to remove your name from Acolyte. Oh, just a side note, please do make sure that your character ("A New Hope") is not too well-trained in the force. He [your character] was recently discovered by the Solo twins and are taking him to Ahch-To, where they hope to have Luke ( MoonLegend101 , which, by the way, Luke's CS looks amazing. ) train him and the other future Jedi. Other than that, like I said, you can do whatever
jbreezy Your character looks spectacular, but would you mind tuning down her Combat Prowess or Force Power a notch or two? Our characters will be able to grow and improve amidst the events of the RP. Other than that, you'll be ready to go
skulzortheskeletalsamurai I don't think Snoke would be a level 10 on terms of Force Mastery & Power. If you can, could you bring it down to a 9--for both categories.
skulzortheskeletalsamurai I'm not too positive on the Praetorian Guard being force sensitive. if you want, you can have yours be force sensitive, but not too strong to surpass level 5 in terms of power & mastery
@RoxanProoxicus All 3 of your characters are approved!
MoonLegend101 Where do I start? Your CS is beyond the galaxy itself. I love the thought and everything you put into it. Perfect! Accepted!
Reylo Now, your character looks formidable, but I do have a few quirks with it. First, the heritage of the princess. While I don't mind her being royal, it's the fact that she's Jacen's sister. Now, with that being said (or typed?) you can either change the history of her--to something along the lines of Leia and Han giving her up for adoption, but kept close ties with her--or you can just make her a princess, but unrelated to the Solo/Skywalker lineage. Secondly, your character is a little too overpowered for being untrained. You might want to take down the Force Mastery and Combat Prowess a few notches or so. Thirdly, your character is equipped with some heavy weapons, and she's only a force sensitive princess. I'll allow her to carry a blaster (2nd or 3rd picture) and the sword (1st picture). In order for her to have a lightsaber, she'd need to complete some sort of given training (same goes for the practiced forms), so no lightsaber. And lastly, if you want to include Luke in her Bio., you'd have to say that she's going to learn "the Jedi ways" under him, after being discovered by the Solo twins. [After Jacen led the sacking of Jedi Praxeum (Luke's Jedi Temple) Luke went into hiding, becoming a hermit on Ahch-To.] So, if you want your character to have a lightsaber, be well trained in the Force, and have some interaction with Luke, then I'd recommend you modify your Bio. so that it aligns with the story a little more. (Do keep in mind that I'm not upset with your CS, and believe me you didn't make any mistakes, just happy little accidents as Bob Ross would say. I only bring this up because some people become irritated or enraged when someone critiques their work, but it's not meant to be 'harmful' in any manner) Oh! I almost forgot! Are you still making a Padawan and Grand Admiral character?
Lost Whenever you finish Ben Solo's CS and Kellen's CS, we'll begin the RP
MorgathosTheRussian Lead Admiral or General? Admiral commands/directs all of the First Order's Starfleet and General is just in command of an army division. And be sure to change your CS role from "His Majesty's Hand" to whatever position you fill
Scavenger Could you bring down your mastery to 6 or so? Force Stealth is meant for highly skilled users, but I'll allow it if you bring down your mastery
Best Trekkie. Kylo Ren doesn't exist in this RP. Other than that, your character looks good
Aura Of Twilight RELEASE THE PADAWAN [that's a kraken joke]
Rysesaka Still interested in the Chiss Ascendancy?
JW Suzusihi REALEASE THE ELITE [hey, that kinda rhymes! I think?] and His Majesty's Eyes
TheBaconater Obi-Wan's grandson awaits to be in the RP
RIPSaidCone still interested?
Braddington "THE admiral" - "his trap guessing skills" XD I'm dead.....that's the funniest thing I've seen yet! Of course you can be an admiral
Scavenger the ones in The Last Jedi
Still working on him, Personality and Backstory is always the hardest part for me to write.TheBaconater Obi-Wan's grandson awaits to be in the RP
Awsome, I wasn't really sure where all the resistance members were at, lol.TheBaconater
If you wanted to you could definitely have Seth stationed on the vigilant, it seems to be where the lots of the resistance is living?