Futuristic (Social) OOC

[QuirkyAngel]

Anyone can message anyone right? Can K message Gay Lord?

JinX couldn't message to Mya Leah.

Anubis couldn't message to unknown man on the roadside.

I don't think non-Codebreakers can pm...

 

[White Masquerade]

Anyone can message anyone right? Can K message Gay Lord?

 

[The One Eyed Bandit]

JinX couldn't message to Mya Leah.

Anubis couldn't message to unknown man on the roadside.

I don't think non-Codebreakers can pm...

...Tch.

 

[White Masquerade]

...Tch.

...Tsk.

JinX couldn't message to Mya Leah.

Anubis couldn't message to unknown man on the roadside.

I don't think non-Codebreakers can pm...

Hm. You've always been a watcher Quirk. That's another reason I enjoy you.

 

[QuirkyAngel]

...Tch.

On the bright side, we now know how to distinguish a CodeBreaker from a Non-CodeBreaker/Murderer. Send them a message^^

 

[The One Eyed Bandit]

...Tsk.


Hm. You've always been a watcher Quirk. That's another reason I enjoy you.

I want to know which dev decided to put in respawn tax, death and loot systems instead of a pm one.

 

[White Masquerade]

I want to know which dev decided to put in respawn tax, death and loot systems instead of a pm one.

Lmao! Maybe you'll get to ask one day.

 

[QuirkyAngel]

I want to know which dev decided to put in respawn tax, death and loot systems instead of a pm one.

I'm thinking pm is function of Code Academy rather than the virtual world the devs created.

 

[The One Eyed Bandit]

Lmao! Maybe you'll get to ask one day.

inb4 it's edge la

I'm thinking pm is function of Code Academy rather than the virtual world the devs created.

Yo but it should be tho >~>

 

[QuirkyAngel]

inb4 it's edge la


Yo but it should be tho >~>

The truth is that CodeBreakers are the last survivors of humanity. Everyone else are just npcs created by the 1st Devs so that the CodeBreakers believe the people outside their home still exists.

 

[The One Eyed Bandit]

The truth is that CodeBreakers are the last survivors of humanity. Everyone else are just npcs created by the 1st Devs so that the CodeBreakers believe the world outside their home still exists.

I see Gas is rubbing off on you.

gooooood

 

[Lucem]

The truth is that CodeBreakers are the last survivors of humanity. Everyone else are just npcs created by the 1st Devs so that the CodeBreakers believe the world outside their home still exists.

The world outside of Little City is also artificial. It's a simulation inside of a simulation.

 

[QuirkyAngel]

I see Gas is rubbing off on you.

gooooood

Mm. I just wanted to try coming up with one. A conspiracy theory that is. Though I don't think I'm any good at it, since I tend to look for holes in my own theories right after coming up with one.

The world outside of Little City is also artificial. It's a simulation inside of a simulation.

The complexity astounds me.

 

[The One Eyed Bandit]

Mm. I just wanted to try coming up with one. A conspiracy theory that is. Though I don't think I'm any good at it, since I tend to look for holes in my own theories right after coming up with one.



The complexity astounds me.

You say that, but now that you've started down this path you'll be posting reaction images and unrelated videos within the month.

 

[QuirkyAngel]

You say that, but now that you've started down this path you'll be posting reaction images and unrelated videos within the month.

Too much work. I think I'll leave the images and videos to someone who's much more skilled at finding them u_u

 

[IG42]

Is safe?

Mmhmmm....I see.

Seriously though, don't sweat it- of course it's always great to get feedback/ a second opinion on your work: I think most folks here can relate to that. So long as you enjoy doing it and that's what floats your boat, it's all good . How long have you been working on this, may I ask?

Actually been at it for nearly a year now, I ain't exactly been on it 24/7 but I get a kick out of it.

I wonder. I wonder. But I'm sure it's swell IG. Or at minimum decent enough. And I say this in a non-braggadocious way -> If you've stuck with us for this long and haven't fallen out, you are certainly not an inconsistent, lazy, or self-centered writer. You are a steady one, a motivated and thoughtful one, who knows at least the basic mechanics of following a story. This is a genuine compliment from me to you and everybody else here. It's not easy. We write a lot (and have written a lot). I have a lot a lot more to say but I'll cut it there.

I already read chapter 1 as you know and it did not suck. I will eventually get around to the rest, but it's definitely not something I have to keep down my vomit to read. You have the ability to write something coherent and entertaining, of that I am sure.

That's sweet, I think.

Well, if you're asking for feedback...

(from the first chapter)
Pros
I like the hook. Your descriptions are well written and your narrative is entertaining. Nothing much happened, but it does leave the reader with a sense of mystery.

Cons
You need commas.

Thank you Quirk, yes the real stuff starts happening after that. And ok commas are good.

 

[White Masquerade]

The world outside of Little City is also artificial. It's a simulation inside of a simulation.

Lol. Go back home Lucem Tenebris.

The One Eyed Bandit
I won't let Quirk turn into Gas. On my honor.

 

[The One Eyed Bandit]

Lol. Go back home Lucem Tenebris.

The One Eyed Bandit
I won't let Quirk turn into Gas. On my honor.

you asked

 

[White Masquerade]

you asked

I did =). Mm. If only my PC were male, he'd be all over Katsura right now. Strongest ship. Most adorable ship. Zero contenders. You see how easy it is though? Cross me and I want to kill your characters, celebrate with me and I will love them. I'm not complicated.

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

see White not lying she has a non-ending rage and extremely vengeful/spiteful when you cross her, kill her character, and interrupting her shipping war. It a tough battle but you can win if you play your cards right ,as i know this from experience.

White Masquerade The One Eyed Bandit

 

[QuirkyAngel]

I did =). Mm. If only my PC were male, he'd be all over Katsura right now. Strongest ship. Most adorable ship. Zero contenders. You see how easy it is though? Cross me and I want to kill your characters, celebrate with me and I will love them. I'm not complicated.

Perhaps in the next part.

see White not lying she has a non-ending rage and extremely vengeful/spiteful when you cross her, kill her character, and interrupting her shipping war. It a tough battle but you can win if you play your cards right ,as i know this from experience.
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White Masquerade The One Eyed Bandit

Are you good with cards?

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

I mean I think I am, as I won my shipping war vs 'er and got my swords.

QuirkyAngel

 

[White Masquerade]

Perhaps in the next part.



Are you good with cards?

I'm not interested in traps.

see White not lying she has a non-ending rage and extremely vengeful/spiteful when you cross her, kill her character, and interrupting her shipping war. It a tough battle but you can win if you play your cards right ,as i know this from experience.
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White Masquerade The One Eyed Bandit

Go ahead and smug it up Kinzu. We're cool, but that's one thing I'll never forgive you for. Every time I think about my time on this site, there's always that one thing. That one regret and it's because of you. You stole from me.

 

[Pequeno Burraidh]

White Masquerade

Potential song for the wonderful fight that is about to go down. If you like electronic and trap music.

Spoiler

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

I'm not interested in traps.


Go ahead and smug it up Kinzu. We're cool, but that's one thing I'll never forgive you for. Every time I think about my time on this site, there's always that one thing. That one regret and it's because of you. You stole from me.

Can't steal something that wasn't your, to begin with .