Ya'll know the drill, OOC posts go here please and thank you :3
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Hahaha yay~ And yeah it's going to be a bit of work but I'll get there eventually xD And nah you don't have to read it all again if you don't want to, it's not much different from last time since I'm following the same sort of base but just adding more to the night wolf side to make up for removing everything I had which included the king of snakes. That and I also took out all of his snake sage stuff but still kept the two Kinjutsu techniques he knew (And I also nerfed a few of his nature jutsu by removing the more advanced stuff).Mezzaluna said:
Hmm, well that's mainly because his affiliation with Manda wouldn't make sense if he didn't become the snake sage. I don't know but I feel that if the king of snakes was willing to allow someone like Orochimaru to become a Snake sage, a kid which they raised would be a fairly ideal person to make their sage. And I feel that having Tremki possess the Shikotsumyaku technique and being the snake sage is some what of an overkill, idk...I will say though it was useful to make a character backstory from.Mezzaluna said:I did it! I read it all! wow that really was a massive edit. I don't see why we can't re-work your OC's involvement with Manda at a later date?
I feel as though the two kaguya's are going to have an interesting meeting xD I really should've posted her full bio e.e
Haha nah that's fine I'm not here to make you feel like you have to do any better xD That's just how I post, but if you want tips..Just overexplain the situation a bit because it's surprising how much you can fit into something as simple as waking up in your character's room xDMezzaluna said:I think I should be saying sorry xD I thought I'd keep it nice and simple to start but now I see I better up my game