NesyCelvestian
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Story - From Absolute Monarchy to Social Democracy. | A story by NesyCelvestian | Uptated 16th september.
Chapter 1: New beginnings, an introduction. In the lands of fairy tales and in the lands of myth, there were four kingdoms that were once divided into 20 countries. Those kingdoms united to form 4 kingdoms for unknown reasons; Saura , Ardogan , Xerota and Lynexia. A world war has broken...
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So, I made a concept of a character that is "Isekai" where it's basically introducing foreign concepts into an alternate medieval world. I also made it a plot and I thought, hey it might be cool and was wondering if I could actually make it feasible with a plot. I think I did, but I want to hear your opinion about this story and what kind of jam I can improve on it.
Thanks.