Redid the power, removed all traces of wind control from it, which honestly does bring it more in line with 'occult', and gave it a hard limit to range.
Honestly, without the telekinetic ability I was worried that it would actually make her far /too/ vulnerable because it requires her to...
@Idea The second ability in occult is a primary basis for the character, and looking it over now I do understand how I made it too powerful, but I was wondering how I could reign it in so that it could still be a part of the character. I agree to all the other changes, though, and am working on...
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!
Sorry, had to let out a primal scream after all that design work. Please, @Idea, let me know if anything is unfit or needs modification! I'm open to criticism, and I won't be sad even if you tell me to scrap the whole idea :P
Quote: "What you think, you become."
Ñame: Misao Izumo
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Magical Girl: Yes
Uses MagiTech: Not Currently, but planned
Appearance:
Personality:
Outwardly noble, kind and generous, but inwardly a thrillseeker who wants nothing more than the next...
I knew this was a thing, but it hadn't registered in my head o3o
Anyways
So, I'm still working on this character, and I wanted to know how drastically magical girl appearance might differ from regular appearance, since it has two slots for description.
For example, if (hypothetically)...
So, I'm still working on this character, and I wanted to know how drastically magical girl appearance might differ from regular appearance, since it has two slots for description.
For example, if (hypothetically) the character has short hair and no tail, could they then transform and have...
Yes, yes, and I had taken notice of the personality traits. Like I said, still lots to work out~ I think I like the first three, though, and with those combined it should make for an interesting magical entity. Efficient, loyal, cooperative. But also possessive, nosy, and blood-thirsty. Sounds...
The spirit guiding her is based on Hachiman, a Kami known commonly in folklore to have carried the Khakkhara. He was basically the guardian of soldiers, and thus would be fairly militaristic, setting at least one genre (if I'm understanding correctly we should have multiples). For other options...
Sorry, I forgot to reply, but I borrowed this from a google image search. The origin is apparently a skilled deviantart artist (my google search led to photobucket), but if you've ever image searched Lamia, this has probably come up.
Alright then! I'll chat you up about the character idea I had! :D
Maybe knowing what other people are thinking up will help you thinking up the ideas too!
My basic concept right now revolves around the Khakkhara, the classic 'Monk Staff' that you might see in anime. Meant as both a symbol...