Zachary James Coolige

[CJ Mason]

Zachary James Coolige

Personality: Zachary is a complete hardass, he doesn't take no for an answer. He is also not the babying type, so don't expect that from him. If you believe you are a savior aka a wolf, then come to him, and he will meet with the elders to see if your a chosen one. Now enough with that bull crap lets talk about him. Zach loves attention especially from the elders, so you do good, it makes him look good, but don't do bad or else, well you don't want to find out. Zach is an asshole with no ability to care if your hurt or starving. This is why he is the trainer, and will never lose his ability.


History: Zachary was born in Atlanta, Georgia. Zachary's mother Jessica perished in child birth, so they never got to meet. Zach grew up with his grandparents on his mother's side of the family. He grew a tight bound with his grandparents over the years, and ever changed his legal last name to Coolige instead of BlackThorn because his father was always in and out of the picture in his life. Zachary soon found out about the City of Light and that was were his father had been over the decades leading the animal pack. Andrew retired, and gave up forming, and now was a person that could never leave the City. Zach was determined to go.


A few years passed with Zachary starting to grow up, and taking shape, he had reached the breaking point and just had to move on, and join his father. Zach believed that animal morphing ability was passed down generation to generation, but he knew it was only a possibility. His grandparents feared him leaving to go there, knowing if he wasn't destined with that great power, they would never see him again.


So the day had finally came for him to leave. He had a farewell party with all of his comrades and departed for the City, in the year 2012 and he hasn't seen his grandparents since. Zach has made some great friends since he has moved to the City, and even is living with his father. Lets see what happens from there.


The Year now is 2015

Personal Details

Last Name: Coolige |First Name: Zachary |Middle Initial: J


Age: 25 |Date of Birth: 05/21/1990


Known Alias: JC, Jimmy, Zach


Born Gender: Male |Classification Gender: Male


Nationality: American


Country From: United States of America


Languages You Speak: English, Mandarin Chinese, and French


Membership Rank: Trainer

Skills

Character Skills:

Major Skill:

Figthing (Martial Arts)



Minor Skill:

1. Cooking
   
2. Following Directions
   

Character Flaws: Zachary is a complete know it all, and no-one can generally stand him more than a few hours.

Animal Form

Animal Type: Wolf


Age first Form: 16


Were You Scared?: No

Other Details

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  2015 Corvette Z06

  
  
  

  
  
  

  

  
  
  
  

  
  
  
  

  
  
  

  
  
  
  Name of Vehicle: Corvette
  
  
  Age: 1 Year
  
  
  Vehicle Nickname: N/A
  
  
  Brand: Chevrolet
  
  
  Year Made: 2015
  
  
  Model: Z06
  
  
  

  
  
  
  
  
  
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  Father: Andrew BlackThorn
  
  
  
  
  Name: Andrew BlackThorn
  
  
  Age: 56
  
  
  Dead/Alive: Alive
  
  
  Relationship: Father was in and out of his life
  
  
  
  
  Mother: Jessica Coolige
  
  
  
  
  Name: Jessica Coolige
  
  
  Age: 49
  
  
  Dead/Alive: Dead
  
  
  Relationship: Never met her, died during child birth.
  
  
  
  
  

 

[shiguma]

Hi~


I don't know if you are okay with people commenting on your character to critique it but since it is here then I'm going to assume it is okay with you.


Zach is a pretty good character but there is something majorly missing in his personality; a flaw. I know that he is a jerk, but from how it explained it seems as though he is proud of it and doesn't care what others think. That kind of ruins the whole 'flaw' concept that would really help make the character more human and relateable. Everyone has something that can upset them or make them mad or is a large vulnerable spot. I think that Zach realy needs one of those to be specified. Use his father's absense for example. He can be really sensitive to people betryaing him or he might have seperation anxiety and cligs to people but because he is so crude they tend to leave, thus he is his own downfall. This will cause him to either evolve or plummet within his own personality. See? Now where did this hardness come from? His mother's death at his birth is a wonderful excuse! I'd definitely use that for his hard exterior He blames himself for her death so he hides his shame behind a rough, jagged shell.


You have a wonderful start, it'll just take a little more work to completely de-layer this character and see what else there is to him that perhaps is still hidden. Good luck!

 

[CJ Mason]

@shiguma I love to take critiques, it help me out a lot, thanks!