Fantasy The Carnival OCC

[LunaticLove]

Oh the two words are interchangeable to me what is the difference between the two? Do we have a big tent and animal shows as the main thing or games and sideshow acts? Like are the carnies the main attraction or are there rides and such?

 

[Fearlesstiger]

LunaticLove So far I think I'm the only one with a permanent animal. Hopefully we don't end up with a petting zoo worth of animals though, there's a reason why Spirit already doesn't like children. Children + cotton candy = sticky fingers

 

[animegirl20]

But isn't this suppose to be like a circus though where people go and actually see different acts?

 

[Kazig]

I was hoping you'd know, the words have different meanings but are used interchangeably. I'm not sure if this is a carnival or a circus.

 

[animegirl20]

Maybe it's a little of both?

 

[PyroMonomania]

raven flame I'm a little confused on who is talking to who in your post

 

[raven flame]

Sorry ill fix it

 

[Kazig]

raven flame You know, you can make your character Japanese if you want to. No offense, the character's fine, but at the moment he seems a little inconsistent.

 

[raven flame]

Is that any better and ok ill go fix that sorry

 

[PyroMonomania]

raven flame Were you talking to your raven or Vasco in "erm y-you needed h-help mr. Vasco?" crow asked his pet raven on his shoulder this line? Also is Vasco the trainer your character is getting whipped by? Or is it some random trainer NPC?

 

[Fearlesstiger]

raven flame Commas can do a world of help breaking up a sentence so it can be read clearly. A few periods might help too.

 

[raven flame]

Npc and sorry i thought i fixed that

 

[raven flame]

Is that any better and sorry im at work so its hard to do punc while im here

 

[raven flame]

Sorry im just not good with punctuation I always have trouble with it

 

[LunaticLove]

The background being a circus or a carnival is up to OP DarkSippy

 

[animegirl20]

Sorry im just not good with punctuation I always have trouble with it

Same!

 

[Fearlesstiger]

raven flame Just noticed you misspelled plague. Are you not using a spellcheck device?

 

[raven flame]

No it off and i cant get it turned back on for some reason and im dyslexic ok leave me be we all have some form of trouble writing ok

 

[Fearlesstiger]

Damn sorry

 

[raven flame]

There is that any better with the way its spaced out?

 

[Fearlesstiger]

I'm not going to bother pointing out anymore flaws since it's readable.

 

[raven flame]

Ok thank you

 

[Fearlesstiger]

I also promise not to cause too many problems for Crow, though that blindfold is a captivating target. May I ask how translucent his blindfold is, can he see through it well?

 

[raven flame]

He can see through it but it dosent let light in. It also depends on how one sees it if they put it on and look through it, it could be completely dark, or like they have nothing on......to put it simply....magic infused blind fold. Sounds weird but i don't care

 

[Fearlesstiger]

Oh, makes a lot of sense since we're technically in a fantasy world.