Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
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such faceclaim much intricacy wow (imtryingstuffdonthurtme)
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Another faceclaim, I kinda like this layout better, but idk
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[my journal entry]
Write out a journal/diary entry of your character. make up one day and catalogue it in character. Two paragraphs or more. This serves as an overview of writing quality, as well as a quick and accessible peak into your character's style, which will help with immersing everyone.
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[QUOTE="Yuuki of the Strata]Oh... Oh I like that last one a lot. What did you make the personality and background gifs with?
Overall, I really like it. The color is a nice shade that's not too harsh on the eyes, and the font is easy to read.
However, I do suggest the name part above the larger picture placers be a little bit bigger, so that it catches the eye easier.
Also, the amount of black space on the right side for general info and misc info (the last section) kind of throws off the balance for me. Maybe it would be possible to distribute placement by adding a couple more columns? That though, is on personal preference. Its not anything major.
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Yaai ^o^/
I made them with photoshop. Though, that might be a lot of credit. I edited them in photoshop. xD
That's a good call, actually. I'll make the name larger. I think I'll keep the space though. It is so prone to fucking up the code atm, I'm happy it finally stayed that way. xD
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Full Metal Reboot
The heroic accomplishments of the legendary Full Metal Alchemist have long been put into stone, serving as fairytales for generations to come. But while the mystical conflict between humanity, led by the the Eldric brothers, and the Homunculi is sure to strike fear and amazement into the hearts of children and adults alike for decades to come, a far more frightening danger boils within its own realm. Less understood, but much more powerful.
In a time where the military is avoiding to repeat the cruel deeds of the Ishvalan war at all cost, will the prosperous nation be able to defend itsels - and possibly the world - from the malice that awaits?
@The Creator Prime @SaphireTsuki
Does that sound remotely intriguing?
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<span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';">Hi, hallo, hola, salut. konichiwa, and welcome to the moshbit, shaka brah. I'm Sunbather (or Sunny) and in this thread I dabble around with BBCode, graphics and ideas for roleplays as well as their layouts. I am generally pretty protective of my anonimity but to make it a little more personal, I am 22 years old as of this writing, I reside in Germany and if you'd rather use proper names you can call me Alex. Feel free to use whatever pronouns you want (on the internet, nobody knows you are a dog) as I don't mind either. If you have any questions in regards to coding or other stuff, feel free to ask. You are also invited to just drop a comment on whatever I post in here. Rawk on. </span></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';">Hey, you! Wanna roleplay with me? Here's a list of what I totally crave playing: </span>
Realistic/Modern: ○ Zombie Apocolypse
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Fandom: ○ One Piece ○ Assassination Classroom ○ Tokyo Ghoul ○ Kabaneri of the Iron Fortress ○ Game of Thrones
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Feel free to make use of it. </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>A:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Arvo;">Arvo</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>B:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Bad Script';">Bad Script</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Buda;">Buda</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>C:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Cabin Sketch';">Cabin Sketch</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Codystar;">Codystar</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Courgette;">Courgette</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Cuprum;">Cuprum</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>D:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> - </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>E:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'EB Garamond';">EB Garamond</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Economical;">Economica</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>F:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> - </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>G:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Glegoo;">Glegoo</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>H:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> - </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>I:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Italiana;">Italiana</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>J:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> - </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>K:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Kurale;">Kurale</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>L:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'La Belle Aurore';">La Belle Aurore</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>M:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Mate;">Mate</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Maven Pro';">Maven Pro</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Monoton;">Monoton</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>N:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Nothing You Could Do';">Nothing You Could Do</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Noticia Text';">Noticia Text</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>O:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-familyrbitron;">Orbitron</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-familyregano;">Oregano</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';">Overlock SC</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>P:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Permanent Marker';">Permanent Marker</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Poiret One';">Poiret One</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>Q:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Quintessential;">Quintessential</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>R:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Raleway;">Raleway</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Roboto Condensed';">Roboto Condensed</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Rock Salt';">Rock Salt</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><strong>S:</strong></span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:Scheherazade;">Scheherazade</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Share Tech Mono';">Share Tech Mono</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Six Caps';">Six Caps</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Sorts Mill Goudy';">Sorts Mill Goudy</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"><span style="font-family:'Special Elite';">Special Elite</span></span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock SC';"> </span></span><span style="font-size:14px;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span style="font-family:'Overlock 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Le photographe est mort
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The future is here.
Prepare yourself for things beyond your comprehension.
Attention! - Status: Critical
Probability of survival: Less than 0.02%
The future is here.
Prepare yourself for things beyond your comprehension.
Attention! - Status: Critical
Probability of survival: Less than 0.02%
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Aldur
Memory Dealer
So far stuff's great. Good job and keep going!
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
[QUOTE="Aldur Forgehammer]So far stuff's great. Good job and keep going!
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Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
such faceclaim much intricacy wow (imtryingstuffdonthurtme)
Another faceclaim, I kinda like this layout better, but idk
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
POSSIBLE CHARACTER SHEET FOR A FUTURE TOKYO GHOUL ROLEPLAY:
[character image here - drawings and anime only!]
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"A character quote"
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CHARACTER NAME
T H E B A S I C S
Name:
Nickname:
Age:
Height:
Weight:
Date of Birth:
Place of Birth:
Gender:
Sexuality:
Marks:
W H O A M I ?
Personality: (Three Paragraphs or more)
History: (Three Paragraphs or more)
Goals/Aspirations:
Fears:
Likes:
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Dislikes:
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Quinque: (Describe how it looks and works - You may link weapons for the visual aspect)
Rank:
Partner/Team:
Fighting Style
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Missions Under Their Belt: (This is entirely made up to aid what you're trying to convey. Decide on these cautiously)
Successful:
Failed:
"A character quote"
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[character image here - drawings and anime only!]
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CHARACTER NAME
T H E B A S I C S
Name:
Nickname:
Age:
Height:
Weight:
Date of Birth:
Place of Birth:
Gender:
Sexuality:
Marks:
W H O A M I ?
Personality: (Three Paragraphs or more)
History: (Three Paragraphs or more)
Goals/Aspirations:
Fears:
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Kagune: (Describe how it looks and works - No Kakujas from the start unless the GM allowed it)
Rating: (Everything above S will have to be requested. The GMs will decide whether they allow it or not)
CCG Codename:
Faction: (If any)
Fighting Style
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Eating Habits: (Modest, Binge, Cannibalistic etc.)
Mask: (Describe it or link a picture)
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Dr Nyx
Lord of Space
Absolutely love it. It's neat yet simplistic and kind of gives off the air of being professional~
Good job!
Good job!
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
C H A R A C T E R N A M E H E R E
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[gender]
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[my journal entry]
Write out a journal/diary entry of your character. make up one day and catalogue it in character. Two paragraphs or more. This serves as an overview of writing quality, as well as a quick and accessible peak into your character's style, which will help with immersing everyone.
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[biggest fear]
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Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
Oh yeah, I'll tag @Yuuki of the Strata 'cause you were interested in the Thalassa RP, and you are also an awesome coder, so I'd love to hear your opinion on the sheet.
Wonderful works being done here~
I especially love the character sheets being done. And as a suggestion if you wish to see more from your interested users, perhaps add a writing sample in your CS.
I especially love the character sheets being done. And as a suggestion if you wish to see more from your interested users, perhaps add a writing sample in your CS.
sorrow made you
from the bottom of the dark, dark sea
Oh... Oh I like that last one a lot. What did you make the personality and background gifs with?
Overall, I really like it. The color is a nice shade that's not too harsh on the eyes, and the font is easy to read.
However, I do suggest the name part above the larger picture placers be a little bit bigger, so that it catches the eye easier.
Also, the amount of black space on the right side for general info and misc info (the last section) kind of throws off the balance for me. Maybe it would be possible to distribute placement by adding a couple more columns? That though, is on personal preference. Its not anything major.
Overall, I really like it. The color is a nice shade that's not too harsh on the eyes, and the font is easy to read.
However, I do suggest the name part above the larger picture placers be a little bit bigger, so that it catches the eye easier.
Also, the amount of black space on the right side for general info and misc info (the last section) kind of throws off the balance for me. Maybe it would be possible to distribute placement by adding a couple more columns? That though, is on personal preference. Its not anything major.
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
Thank you! I started doing that. The journal entry on the last sheet is, essentially, a writing sample.LifeNovel said:Wonderful works being done here~
I especially love the character sheets being done. And as a suggestion if you wish to see more from your interested users, perhaps add a writing sample in your CS.
[QUOTE="Yuuki of the Strata]Oh... Oh I like that last one a lot. What did you make the personality and background gifs with?
Overall, I really like it. The color is a nice shade that's not too harsh on the eyes, and the font is easy to read.
However, I do suggest the name part above the larger picture placers be a little bit bigger, so that it catches the eye easier.
Also, the amount of black space on the right side for general info and misc info (the last section) kind of throws off the balance for me. Maybe it would be possible to distribute placement by adding a couple more columns? That though, is on personal preference. Its not anything major.
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Yaai ^o^/
I made them with photoshop. Though, that might be a lot of credit. I edited them in photoshop. xD
That's a good call, actually. I'll make the name larger. I think I'll keep the space though. It is so prone to fucking up the code atm, I'm happy it finally stayed that way. xD
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
SAO Post Template:
Natalie [.pelican] Pavlyuchenko
Descriptive
"Think"
"Talk"
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Level One
Endurance: 6HP / 6HP
(1 x 2 + 4)
Strength: 1
(No modifier)
Durability: 1
(Heavy Armor Rank I = +1)
Accuracy: 0
(No modifier)
Speed: 0
(No modifier)
Endurance: 6HP / 6HP
(1 x 2 + 4)
Strength: 1
(No modifier)
Durability: 1
(Heavy Armor Rank I = +1)
Accuracy: 0
(No modifier)
Speed: 0
(No modifier)
Natalie [.pelican] Pavlyuchenko
Descriptive
"Think"
"Talk"
Code:
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Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
With enemy stat bar:
Natalie [.pelican] Pavlyuchenko
Descriptive
Think
"Talk"
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Level Three
Endurance:
Strength: 2
(2H Straight Sword Rank I = +1)
Durability: 1
(Heavy Armor Rank I = +1)
Accuracy: 1
(Uncommon Necklace of Accuracy +1)
Speed: 0
(No modifier)
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Endurance:
10HP / 10HP (Lvl. 3 x 2 + 4 = 10)
Strength: 2
(2H Straight Sword Rank I = +1)
Durability: 1
(Heavy Armor Rank I = +1)
Accuracy: 1
(Uncommon Necklace of Accuracy +1)
Speed: 0
(No modifier)
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- (helmet) Equipment
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Currently Equipped:
Weapon:
Zweihänder (2H Straight Sword)
Armor:
Beginner's Heavy Armor
Enhancing Equipment:
Uncommon Necklace of Accuracy:
1 Slot / +1 Accuracy
- (d20) Skills
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Non-Combat:
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Combat:
- Heavy Armor Rank I = +1
Weapon:
- Two-Handed Straight Sword | Rank 1; +1 Strength
Natalie [.pelican] Pavlyuchenko
Descriptive
Think
"Talk"
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Enemy:
Endurance:
(Floor Lvl x 2)
Strength: 1
(Floor Lvl / 2, not below 1)
Durability: 0
(No modifier)
Accuracy: 0
(No modifier)
Speed: 0
(No modifier)
Talking and action.Endurance:
?HP / ?HP
(Floor Lvl x 2)
Strength: 1
(Floor Lvl / 2, not below 1)
Durability: 0
(No modifier)
Accuracy: 0
(No modifier)
Speed: 0
(No modifier)
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Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
RP I'm working on:
"Hey! You! Do you hear me? I need your help! This... man. He can control the network. Th-th-the access. And he makes everyone run. Forever! You have to believe me, I'm not crazy, I SWEAR it! I-"
"You have - no - messages."
"So you got that message too, huh? Mhhh... I can't say for sure, but I'm guessing it was a prank. I know, I know, the numbers were mostly non-tracable, but maybe it was just dumb luck. Afterall, it's just digits. Likely? Hell no. Sure. But what else could it realistically be?"
What's Strayfire City?
Strayfire City is a major melting pot in a not so distant future. What's special about it is, that is serves as an experimental town, to further progess in the field of energy conservation. The entire city is hidden behind a large - in lack of a better term - bubble. This apparatus can utilize the sunlight in ways never imagined, effectively powering the million strong city, with all its advertisement, all the electricity dependent households, and everything else through sunlight alone. The downside to this is, that it breaks the light rays in a way that makes exposure considerably more dangerous to most living organisms. This means that, during the day, the streets are essentially empty. A few desperate people try and simply shield themself through clothing and other makeshift tools, but, essentially, every aspect of life in Strayfire City happens at night. A few emergency tunnels have been built for hospitals and other response professionals, but otherwise... you're not gonna go far during the day.
Plot Summary
All across Strayfire City, odd suicides have occured. People went insane... slowly. Friends, families and coworkers have, in unison, testified that their spouses, children, siblings, friends and colleagues seemed exhausted. The small pieces of information that has trickled down to the public suggests that the 'victims' have not slept for several weeks before they ended their own life. Of course, insomnia does not necesarily cause self-harming behavior, so the lead is spongy at best.
Shortly after another report on a related incident, you receive a strange phone call. A panicked man, telling you about a mysterious male that keeps others... "running". It seems odd, doesn't it? Why would he reach out to you? And doesn't it just sound a little too likely to somehow be connected to the strange deaths, to be a coincidence?
Genres: Crime, Horror, Futurism
• Support / Covering allies in combat
• Brute force rushes
• Bait enemies into targeting them
• Broad knowledge when it comes to mechanical means of transport
Weaknesses:
• No knowledge of other weaponry beyond standard level
• Usually not physically trained
• High risk strategies make it harder for mechas to escape
• Powerful technology provides good chances at laying low
• Versatile
• Can escape rather easily if they manage to keep eyes of them.
Weaknesses:
• Are often the first to enter enemy territory and will be left behind, should they be caught.
• Require physical strength, but can't be extensively bulky due to the nature of their work.
• May become sitting ducks.
• Improved physical abilities by default.
• Can surprise enemies through integrated weapons.
• Can provide technical support more often than not.
• May be proficent with every task.
Weaknesses:
• At risk all the time.
• Can be shut down by hackers, which makes them almost entirely useless.
• Often exiled from the generally public upon revealing their upgrades.
• Has no specialities, will never outperform an expert on whatever field.
• Ability to to remain cool during heated combats.
• Expert with all kinds of explosives.
• Can use said knowledge offensively, as well as defensively.
• Usually trained with a good amount of firearms to be capable of defending their work, if necessary.
Weaknesses:
• Arguably in the riskiest of positions.
• May become less efficent once their task is fullfilled.
• If they fail, the whole mission can, potentially, be jeopardized.
• Experts in utilizing computers for military purposes
• Proficent in all kinds of coding.
• Extensive knowledge of all kinds of digital protection.
• Skillful with pistols for self-defense
Weaknesses:
• As they are never trained for physical combat, most hackers have a weak physique.
• Not skillfull when it comes to weapons, despite potentially being proficent at using a gun.
• Useless if the enemy can keep them out of their network..
• Physically imposing.
• Martial Arts knowledge.
• Expert with all firearms.
• Powerful armor often provides great protection.
Weaknesses:
• Prone to spies who may pick them up with a skillfull shot.
• Less knowledgable on more technical and delicate matters.
• May not be able to withstand constant approaches by opposing armies.
I Can't Shut My Eyes!
"You have - 01 - messages."
"Hey! You! Do you hear me? I need your help! This... man. He can control the network. Th-th-the access. And he makes everyone run. Forever! You have to believe me, I'm not crazy, I SWEAR it! I-"
"You have - no - messages."
"So you got that message too, huh? Mhhh... I can't say for sure, but I'm guessing it was a prank. I know, I know, the numbers were mostly non-tracable, but maybe it was just dumb luck. Afterall, it's just digits. Likely? Hell no. Sure. But what else could it realistically be?"
Strayfire City is a place where dreams go to die. Or worse, become corrupt.
What's Strayfire City?
Strayfire City is a major melting pot in a not so distant future. What's special about it is, that is serves as an experimental town, to further progess in the field of energy conservation. The entire city is hidden behind a large - in lack of a better term - bubble. This apparatus can utilize the sunlight in ways never imagined, effectively powering the million strong city, with all its advertisement, all the electricity dependent households, and everything else through sunlight alone. The downside to this is, that it breaks the light rays in a way that makes exposure considerably more dangerous to most living organisms. This means that, during the day, the streets are essentially empty. A few desperate people try and simply shield themself through clothing and other makeshift tools, but, essentially, every aspect of life in Strayfire City happens at night. A few emergency tunnels have been built for hospitals and other response professionals, but otherwise... you're not gonna go far during the day.
Plot Summary
All across Strayfire City, odd suicides have occured. People went insane... slowly. Friends, families and coworkers have, in unison, testified that their spouses, children, siblings, friends and colleagues seemed exhausted. The small pieces of information that has trickled down to the public suggests that the 'victims' have not slept for several weeks before they ended their own life. Of course, insomnia does not necesarily cause self-harming behavior, so the lead is spongy at best.
Shortly after another report on a related incident, you receive a strange phone call. A panicked man, telling you about a mysterious male that keeps others... "running". It seems odd, doesn't it? Why would he reach out to you? And doesn't it just sound a little too likely to somehow be connected to the strange deaths, to be a coincidence?
Genres: Crime, Horror, Futurism
Roles:
The Mecha Pilot
An expert at handling a variety of military transport technologies. Primarily skilled with using instruments of war, they can utilize a variety of non-hostile vehicles and aircrafts as well.
They are no marksmen in the traditional sense of the word, and will not be above a talented but otherwise untrained civilian when it comes to firearms or technology that does not relate to machinery.
An expert at handling a variety of military transport technologies. Primarily skilled with using instruments of war, they can utilize a variety of non-hostile vehicles and aircrafts as well.
They are no marksmen in the traditional sense of the word, and will not be above a talented but otherwise untrained civilian when it comes to firearms or technology that does not relate to machinery.
Strengths:
• Support / Covering allies in combat
• Brute force rushes
• Bait enemies into targeting them
• Broad knowledge when it comes to mechanical means of transport
Weaknesses:
• No knowledge of other weaponry beyond standard level
• Usually not physically trained
• High risk strategies make it harder for mechas to escape
The Spy
A master at crossing enemy lines without ticking off any radars or guards. Extensively trained in the art of sneaking, deception and has received intense guidance in terms of silence firearms and long range sniper rifles.
Often small in frame and highly athletic, these essential agents can't be seen, or they will be left behind. Caution is your best friend and your worst enemy simultanously.
A master at crossing enemy lines without ticking off any radars or guards. Extensively trained in the art of sneaking, deception and has received intense guidance in terms of silence firearms and long range sniper rifles.
Often small in frame and highly athletic, these essential agents can't be seen, or they will be left behind. Caution is your best friend and your worst enemy simultanously.
Strengths:
• Powerful technology provides good chances at laying low
• Versatile
• Can escape rather easily if they manage to keep eyes of them.
Weaknesses:
• Are often the first to enter enemy territory and will be left behind, should they be caught.
• Require physical strength, but can't be extensively bulky due to the nature of their work.
• May become sitting ducks.
The Trumpcard
As the lucky (or not lucky) receiver of a cybernetic enhancement, these agents are well-rounded assets to the battlefield. They are often powerful physical fighters with surprising weaponry, integrated into their bodies.
Trumpcards are often first to draw fire, as eliminating them from the enemy sidelines is a considerably advantage. Reckless prosthetic users will die quickly.
As the lucky (or not lucky) receiver of a cybernetic enhancement, these agents are well-rounded assets to the battlefield. They are often powerful physical fighters with surprising weaponry, integrated into their bodies.
Trumpcards are often first to draw fire, as eliminating them from the enemy sidelines is a considerably advantage. Reckless prosthetic users will die quickly.
Strengths:
• Improved physical abilities by default.
• Can surprise enemies through integrated weapons.
• Can provide technical support more often than not.
• May be proficent with every task.
Weaknesses:
• At risk all the time.
• Can be shut down by hackers, which makes them almost entirely useless.
• Often exiled from the generally public upon revealing their upgrades.
• Has no specialities, will never outperform an expert on whatever field.
The Demolition Expert
If you need something to be blown up, these are you men. Or women. Experts in regards to all kinds of explosives - be it grenades, liquid explosives or timed bombs, they are your go-to-agents. A lot of responsibility is put into these brave agents, as they are the ones who have to time it just right, so that their own troops don't suffer. They are also constantly at risk of having a bomb blow up early.
If you need something to be blown up, these are you men. Or women. Experts in regards to all kinds of explosives - be it grenades, liquid explosives or timed bombs, they are your go-to-agents. A lot of responsibility is put into these brave agents, as they are the ones who have to time it just right, so that their own troops don't suffer. They are also constantly at risk of having a bomb blow up early.
Strengths:
• Ability to to remain cool during heated combats.
• Expert with all kinds of explosives.
• Can use said knowledge offensively, as well as defensively.
• Usually trained with a good amount of firearms to be capable of defending their work, if necessary.
Weaknesses:
• Arguably in the riskiest of positions.
• May become less efficent once their task is fullfilled.
• If they fail, the whole mission can, potentially, be jeopardized.
The H4cker
Information is unvaluable. With a skilled hacker in your squad, you can access enemy information, or, sometimes, directly shut down your enemies.
Be it implants, stationary weaponry or transporation - Nothing is safe from the lethal data stream a hacker can unleash. However, breach-secured systems or strategies that work without an active network may present a problem.
Information is unvaluable. With a skilled hacker in your squad, you can access enemy information, or, sometimes, directly shut down your enemies.
Be it implants, stationary weaponry or transporation - Nothing is safe from the lethal data stream a hacker can unleash. However, breach-secured systems or strategies that work without an active network may present a problem.
Strengths:
• Experts in utilizing computers for military purposes
• Proficent in all kinds of coding.
• Extensive knowledge of all kinds of digital protection.
• Skillful with pistols for self-defense
Weaknesses:
• As they are never trained for physical combat, most hackers have a weak physique.
• Not skillfull when it comes to weapons, despite potentially being proficent at using a gun.
• Useless if the enemy can keep them out of their network..
The Supersoldier
There's the common soldier, the fighter that makes a war dangerous due to their numbers, and then there's these guys. Often ranked as Generals and Commander in the official armies, Supersoldiers have impressive physical abilities and are experts with all common firearms.
Thinning out the enemy armies through expertise in man-to-man situations, a Supersoldier is an essential part of any well-functioning team.
There's the common soldier, the fighter that makes a war dangerous due to their numbers, and then there's these guys. Often ranked as Generals and Commander in the official armies, Supersoldiers have impressive physical abilities and are experts with all common firearms.
Thinning out the enemy armies through expertise in man-to-man situations, a Supersoldier is an essential part of any well-functioning team.
Strengths:
• Physically imposing.
• Martial Arts knowledge.
• Expert with all firearms.
• Powerful armor often provides great protection.
Weaknesses:
• Prone to spies who may pick them up with a skillfull shot.
• Less knowledgable on more technical and delicate matters.
• May not be able to withstand constant approaches by opposing armies.
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sorrow made you
from the bottom of the dark, dark sea
That last one is sexy
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
Full Reboot Metal Alchemist - A Rogue Truth
Full Metal Reboot
The heroic accomplishments of the legendary Full Metal Alchemist have long been put into stone, serving as fairytales for generations to come. But while the mystical conflict between humanity, led by the the Eldric brothers, and the Homunculi is sure to strike fear and amazement into the hearts of children and adults alike for decades to come, a far more frightening danger boils within its own realm. Less understood, but much more powerful.
In a time where the military is avoiding to repeat the cruel deeds of the Ishvalan war at all cost, will the prosperous nation be able to defend itsels - and possibly the world - from the malice that awaits?
@The Creator Prime @SaphireTsuki
Does that sound remotely intriguing?
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SaphireTsuki
Aspiring Author
It does, yeah. But. You'll need to think carefully about the antagonist
The Creator Prime
Ancient Being
It's very generic and general as an enticement. I mean, you can't really take much of the roleplay into account with such a general and wide-spreading introduction.
So I can't say if it's interesting or enticing, but it's well written.
So I can't say if it's interesting or enticing, but it's well written.
SaphireTsuki
Aspiring Author
Ok.
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
[QUOTE="The Creator Prime]It's very generic and general as an enticement. I mean, you can't really take much of the roleplay into account with such a general and wide-spreading introduction.
So I can't say if it's interesting or enticing, but it's well written.
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Mhhh, I see what you mean. Well, I thought it may come across clearer, but I guess not. The idea is, is that the gate / truth / god / children of the gate will serve as the antagonistic force, and the players would be either academy students or fully trained alchemists. I know that's still broad, but obviously I'd come up with story as we go along.
So I can't say if it's interesting or enticing, but it's well written.
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Mhhh, I see what you mean. Well, I thought it may come across clearer, but I guess not. The idea is, is that the gate / truth / god / children of the gate will serve as the antagonistic force, and the players would be either academy students or fully trained alchemists. I know that's still broad, but obviously I'd come up with story as we go along.
The Creator Prime
Ancient Being
Why did you reply? xD @SaphireTsuki
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I mean, I have nothing against improvisation, but it's never really good for a story much like this one. xD
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I mean, I have nothing against improvisation, but it's never really good for a story much like this one. xD
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SaphireTsuki
Aspiring Author
xD I misread, is all.
Sunbather
Le photographe est mort
Oh no, don't get me wrong, I wouldn't start with this bit of idea. But just the general idea. Of course I'd try and create some nice cornerstones that would carry us through through in advance. ^-^
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