otter_fall
New Member
hello, everyone !
recently, i’ve decided to step away from roleplaying for a bit in order to write my own story with a few characters of mine. while i have most of the story set in stone and what i want it to include, i’m not entirely sure if it’s the best since there are still some gaps in the plot.
as a result of this, i’ve decided to make this post to see if anyone would be willing to critique the plot i’ve created !
any and all help is appreciated ! feel free to comment or message me directly ! thanks !
recently, i’ve decided to step away from roleplaying for a bit in order to write my own story with a few characters of mine. while i have most of the story set in stone and what i want it to include, i’m not entirely sure if it’s the best since there are still some gaps in the plot.
as a result of this, i’ve decided to make this post to see if anyone would be willing to critique the plot i’ve created !
any and all help is appreciated ! feel free to comment or message me directly ! thanks !
