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Fantasy Indisposition [OOC Chat]

Also, take note.
Daimao's response is something that's very acceptable, not too many lines but not too short.
There's an easy-going flow to it that's difficult to follow.
Kind of step by step.

Daimao Daimao ~ Just had to use your response as a reference.
 
Okay, so basically exaggerate every possible thing?
No.. What i'm saying is, it shouldn't be like cut and dry.
It should be casual or detailed, not simple.
It's a casual/detail role-play.

Basically just need to show more, it just throws people out of the loop when they read it.
No offense, i'm just saying there should be more added next time.
Not arguing or anything, the whole point of this role-play is to create a story.
Blossom your character from a seed and into that of a flower.

Make him/her grow and show experiences that they go through, even detail that seems like it would be missed.
Give the viewer visuals and understanding.
 
I didn't realize we were talking full fledged fucking ICBMs. How do those even fit inside her body?
 
Yes, perfect. It's nice being a chubby dog that floats eternally in cyberspace while playing the saxophone fire extinguisher.
 
Hrm unless anyone else makes a post I believe we'll have to wait til tomorrow.
 

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