Fantasy Indisposition [OOC Chat]

[SidTheSkid]

Interest Check: Indisposition [Modern~Fantasy][Always accepting]
IC: Indisposition [Modern~Fantasy][Always accepting]
Character sheet: Indisposition [Character Sheets]

Talk away! Propose suggestions if need-be.​

 

[SidTheSkid]

Hope all of you are managing to get around quite well, I kinda pushed out these threads very quickly!

 

[_Exodus_]

I know the feeling

 

[SidTheSkid]

I know the feeling

Yeaaaah I was kinda running around like a chicken without a head for a moment lol
Kisaki ~ YOU EXPLAIN YOURSELF MISSY!
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!

 

[Daimao]

Wow it has been much too long since I've made a CS. Lots of brain farts.

 

[PressureCooker]

I just realized that almost all of the currently existing CS's are for headsmen

I'm debating whether I should make my character a headsmen as well for the sake of interaction and proximity.

 

[_Exodus_]

Do we need a person to start?

 

[SidTheSkid]

Wow it has been much too long since I've made a CS. Lots of brain farts.

I just realized that almost all of the currently existing CS's are for headsmen

I'm debating whether I should make my character a headsmen as well for the sake of interaction and proximity.

That would probably be a good thing to do to avoid feeling left out! Most of the people that are starting will probably be set up in The Capital area
Which definitely works since it's the most populated nation.

_Exodus_ I'll probably make an introduction post here in a second, i'll try to do it fast for Empress Amai.

 

[SidTheSkid]

Wow it has been much too long since I've made a CS. Lots of brain farts.

By the way how big is your character when in ability? Curious.

 

[Daimao]

By the way how big is your character when in ability? Curious.

Not super huge, only like 15 feet

 

[SidTheSkid]

Not super huge, only like 15 feet

Eh, that's not bad at all for a second I thought he was like some sort of behemoth lol.

 

[_Exodus_]

Okay, I'll probably go before he betrayed the headsman.

 

[Daimao]

Eh, that's not bad at all for a second I thought he was like some sort of behemoth lol.

Nah, I decided that would be a bit much haha

 

[PressureCooker]

CS will be up in an hour or two.

 

[SidTheSkid]

Alright I made an introduction post, so all of you are ready.
So feel free to introduce your characters

 

[Daimao]

Rest in peace farmer haha

 

[Unit A2]

(hey we ready to go?)

 

[SidTheSkid]

We are, I made a short first post but I was kind of rushing.
I didn't want any of you to lose any ideas!
Remember to have it be longer than a one-liner too! Thank ya!

 

[SidTheSkid]

Rest in peace farmer haha

Hey i mean he's not dead!
Yet.

 

[_Exodus_]

That was a rushing post?

 

[SidTheSkid]

That was a rushing post?

Usually I make kind of long posts. I usually strive for 15-18 Lines.
Sometimes i'll do more if I got a lot of ideas.

 

[_Exodus_]

How is mine?

 

[SidTheSkid]

How is mine?

To be honest I think it needs a bit more detail for an introduction post.
I like how you mentioned where they were involving the landscape but there's a lot of questions that aren't answered in the post
like where is the signal coming from? Do they have some sort of a Blight tracker?
Also with something as dramatic as David being shot by his own team you should probably have it work up to it instead of going right off the bat
making it a bit longer with him getting suspicious about the girl, realizing that it was probably not a monster but a person instead.

I'm just wondering what'll happen next to him if he's out in the middle of a Tundra.
Could use a tiny bit more detail but it's fine for now, just make sure you don't rush events
Prolong them a bit to build suspense and then make everything go crazy.
It brings out a lot more feeling.

Next time see if you can do that in your next post or when you're replying to someone.

 

[Unit A2]

is that no?

 

[SidTheSkid]

is that no?

Yeah it's ready to go, make sure you don't post one-liners.
Everyone should read the rules before making a post.
It's Casual but everything needs detail to it, it just doesn't have to be very very long post.