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The Hollowed

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Hey guys this isn't about a role-play but about a book I'm making I wanted to know what you guys think about before I post it on a fiction website


Prologue:


Inside of a classified conference room there were the top personnel of NERV Gendo Ikari commander of NERV, Deputy Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki. Misato Katsuragi the tactical commander for the EVA pilots. Dr. Akagi the chief scientist and incharge of all the tactical aspects of NERV. And Maya Ibuki, Makoto Hyuga and Shingeru Aoba the three main computer technicians of NERV HQ. All these people were the highest officials in NERV and were waiting for a report from Gendo Ikari that was of the highest priority right now.


While everyone was waiting a tense atmosphere could be felt that had a crushing weight. Everyone in the room seemed restless until Gendo started up saying.


-Gendo


At thus point in time everyone was dumbstruck project Nexus was an Ultimate EVA, Nexus was equipped with a Super Solenoid Engine also called a S2 engine this was the first one equipped with a natural S2 Engine except for Adam and unlike EVA.01 getting its S2 Engine from the Angle Zeruel by physically devouring the organ and assimilating it. Nexus is also equipped with a A.W Mastema with an unlimited supply of ammo that converts any non-living mass into ammo located on the forearm that can detach for a all range weapon and can reattach for close range combat or can stay off and be used as a sword. It also has a built in Super-Electromagnetic Crossbow MM-144 that uses its A.T field as propulsion for giant steel tipped arrows the crossbow was located on the back and can be pulled off to be fired the arrows had to be constructed soNexus only had about 20 or less arrows in stock, it also has a standard Progressive Knife that is like Units-02 Progressive Knife that is in the left shoulder pylon but has an unlimited number of blades that replaces the broken one but needs time to replace it. Nexus itself looks like EVA.01 but is pure black with red parts where the green parts were on EVA.01.



Nexus also has a high regeneration speed so if it's badly injured it would be able to battle in the a 24-48 hour time frame.



The pilot in question is equipped with a pilot suit that can take considerable damage and regents with the Titan and is like a second skin to the pilot. The pilot is also equipped with a standard issued helmet with a hub and outlines comrades as green and enemies with red but the pilot wanted horns that look like a devil the pilot also wanted a tail on the suit that had a spear pointed end that moves with brain emissions. The pilot is lastly equipped with a standard issued jump kit that allows them to run on walls for a short amount of time unless the pilot chains it with other jumps and allows the pilot to perform double jumps. Since the pilot has high compatibility with its EVA the pilot receives the damages the EVA does but just how the EVA regenerates the pilot does along with it but at a faster rate do to the difference between mass, also if there is a change with the EVA the pilot will have a little change in it to this has only been recorded with Nexus and its pilot.



[but sir a unit like that and its pilot cannot disappear just like that they were locked up in a titanium alloy casing and were in stasis locked down and were guarded by two Mark.04 B unit]- Misato



Misato was clearly distressed along with the other people in the room except Gendo who was wearing a emotionless expression like always. Everyone knew that Nexus and its pilot were at a high comparability rate of 250% and is able to decimate all other units if enraged.



[Calm down all scans of the earth has provided no signals of Nexus or its Pilot at all. So we can rule out them coming back in earth's atmosphere but the problem is where are they?]-Gendo



Upon hearing this lead scientist Ritsuko Akagi spoke up.



[May I propose a theory here.]-Ritsuko



As everyone heard his voice they turned their heads from Gendo to Ritsuko.



[You may go on and purpose your theory Mr. Ritsuko]-Gendo



[Thank you Sir. What I propose is that Subject Nexus and its pilot was sucked into the gravitational pull of the comet that appeared last night]-Ritsuko



[but how would it be pulled since it was in earth's gravitational pull enough to keep it near]- Deputy Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki



When Deputy Commander Kozo Fuyutsuki stated this Dr. Ritsuko grinned saying.



[Correct it was in earth's gravitational pull enough to keep it near the earth and not drift away, but we did not count for the comet having enough gravitational pull wit it to be able to pull it away.] -Ritsuko



Everyone froze up because they're last line of defense against the angles was gone lost in space never to be seen again. This silence lasted for a couple of minutes before Misato Katsuragi spoke up in a silent voice.



-Misato


Everyone was silent and gave a short prayer for the lost soul lost in space everyone except for Gendo who was not praying. After the meeting the information that was discussed here was classified and was to never to be talked about again.



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Hundreds of years after that meeting somewhere deep in space a 65 meter box that was shaped like a cross was floating towards a black hole as all systems were down except stasis. Inside the box was a 60 meter high armored humanoid shaped figure it was all black except for red spaces there was a A.W Mastema that was connected to the right arm and a Super-Electromagnetic Crossbow MM-144 that used its A.T field as its energy source, the humanoid figure was Nexus it was strapped down by multiple metallic straps at the waist, the legs, the forearms, and both shoulder pylons that kept the EVA secured.



Inside the cockpit which was inside the neck of the monstrous sized thing was the pilot in a deep stasis sleep. The pilot had white hair that was Down to its neck, it was roughly 5'11 in height and was wearing an all black skin tight suit that had a devil tail, with a black helmet with devil horns that fit perfectly on the pilot's head and had a see through visor right now which would turn red in combat form and could not be seen through. The pilot had they're jump kit on with a standard issue combat knife and they're own Desert Eagle that was painted pitch black with red veins painted on it with 16 magazines of ammo.



Everything was still…. Then all of a sudden the stasis craft was rumbling and violently shaking. It had been caught in the gravitation pull of a worm hole. The stasis craft was still in the gravitational pull of the comet so there was some resistance but the wormhole ended up winning and pulled in the stasis craft. All around were bright lights, opening and closing, like portals to different dimensions before spitting it out into a void of space before spitting it out near a planet.
 

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