MrReaves
Steamlord
Blackrose7
I like her concept! I do have a few issues with her backstory, though, and I apologize because I can see you put a lot of effort into it. Mainly, this RP is set 27 years after the Totality Wars (that's probably on me for not making it very clear outside of naming the date). So it wouldn't make sense for Zaria to have fought in those wars. You can pretty easily adjust it, though!
Try something like, "The kingdom of the Serrano family was one of the last holdouts after the Wars, going into hiding and trying to hold onto power by striking at the Assembly's forces from the shadows. The king, desperate for loyal and effective soldiers, pushed his own daughter into the fight after she turned out to have potent poisonous magic. She has since been rescued from this fate and is taken care of at Ivermore, though her trauma persists."
It'd be really interesting to see how she deals with fighting again, especially using a similar weapon! It may open old wounds, but it may also end up helping her cope, because this time she's doing good!
Shotgunpenguin Sounds good! Look forward to it. ^^
Try something like, "The kingdom of the Serrano family was one of the last holdouts after the Wars, going into hiding and trying to hold onto power by striking at the Assembly's forces from the shadows. The king, desperate for loyal and effective soldiers, pushed his own daughter into the fight after she turned out to have potent poisonous magic. She has since been rescued from this fate and is taken care of at Ivermore, though her trauma persists."
It'd be really interesting to see how she deals with fighting again, especially using a similar weapon! It may open old wounds, but it may also end up helping her cope, because this time she's doing good!
Shotgunpenguin Sounds good! Look forward to it. ^^