Fantasy Girls perfered but if not its ok

[DangerBlueDanny]

for plot I was thinking along the lines of our characters being in a training academy and she's number 1 while hes number 2 in the rankings and as the story progresses her family dies due to them having wilderness tribe heritage which her parents lied about saying they weren't. Eventually she finds out about their death and why they were killed and slowly starts to lose it until finally she is leading her group into a battle and either ends up not caring if they die or she becomes naive thinking that the person who killed her family was in that area so she risked her people by attempting to get revenge. She would probably be the last one standing and my character whos a leader of a different corp. Had to arrest het and she's sentenced to 20 years for leading her people to their dooms. Then 8 years later when a new war arises my character needs her to help him protect the kingdom and win the war. have a time stamp for all those events i was thinking that would be the plot for the long term rp.

I know it seems like i have your character on a clear path but I would really like your input and maybe we can make this story even better. Thanks!!!