Field Marshall
Eight Thousand Club
Acceptable but there' are things that could be done to improve it. I could provide with the suggestions if you want. They could very well help you beef up the back story and connection to Regina."History: Before meeting Regina Isaac really had nothing going on for him. He'd graduated from high school, was about to take a gap year for job experience, and didn't know what to do with his life. Gaining access to magic was the first major turning point in his life. The next one was what that magic did to him. The third was when he managed to defeat a Sacred Gear-using unknown Devil who'd attacked him and took the gear for his own. He didn't realize taking the Sacred Gear would kill the devil, but didn't lose sleep over it. Right now he's working under Regina. He thinks she's going places."
Better?