Cassandra Hesketh-Thorne

[TheOddball]

Cassandra Hesketh-Thorne

Introduction

This is an all-purpose character, a bit Mary Sue as we share our appearance (I wouldn't like to use other people's photos for my characters) and some of our interests. Our histories and personalities have differences! When I am playing this character I am not playing myself, just wanted to put that out there. This character sheet is being made for convenience more than thing, but by all means leave comments. I will be adding and developing this constantly!

Basics

Name: Cassandra Hesketh-Thorne


Age: Ranges from 16-18 depending on RP


Birthday: March 14th


Ethnicity/Nationality: Caucasian/British


Gender: Female


Sexual Orientation: Bisexual


Star Sign: Pisces


Occupation: Student

• Appearance
• Personality
• History

• Appearance
  
  Height: 5 foot 5
  
  
  Weight: 150 lbs
  
  
  Hair: Muddy blonde, straight or wavy, fairly long
  
  
  Eyes: Greyish/blue
  
  
  Body: Curvy with a bit of chub
  
  
  Attire: Jeans with t-shirts or jumpers
  
  
  
• Personality
  
  Cass is an outgoing and friendly individual who does her best to put smiles on other people's faces. She is happy in almost all social situations. When she gets angry, her anger is accompanied by a lot of passion which causes her to cry easily; she feels this makes her appear silly. She is very opinionated and compassionate, and she does her best to understand everyone's situations. She often doesn't talk about her personal feelings as she is more concerned about the people she cares for, which can cause her feelings to bubble over and to have outbursts. Cassie is fiercely loyal to those she deems friends. Despite her privileged background, she never acts spoiled.
  
  
  She is an agnostic atheist. Her schooling had been quite secular compared to her Christian family, and it opened her eyes to other perspectives. Her interest in politics and the readily available sources on the internet have led to her libertarian socialist views.
  
  
  
• History
  
  (depending on RP, but this is the more likely one)
  
  
  
  
  
  Cassie had a privileged upbringing. Her father is a manager of a moderately sized company and her mother stays at home. She has an older brother named Miles, who she is close to that is currently studying medicine at university. They have been close since they were young, despite a ten year gap. He always wanted a younger sibling and looked after her as much as he could. Miles is often the person Cassie will confide in. An example being Cass' increased romantic/sexual attraction to women as well as men; after years of confusion she finally came out. She has only spoken about it to Miles and her closest friends. Having her mother or father find out would be awful.
  
  
  Her father has always been a Conservative type of person, and as she has grown, Cassie has been increasingly disagreeing with her father on many issues. It has caused a rift in the household and vicious arguments between the pair, with Cassie ending up crying in her room. He puts a lot of pressure on Cassie to do well in school and to go to university like her brother, both of which she would like to do, but its the other expectations such as similar morals, public manner and the expectation of being married to man she despises. Despite her poor relationship with her father, she prefers the company of adults, though she is also popular among her friendship circle. Her passion for history has been there since she was little, often reading novels like 'Goodnight Mr Tom', and she is interested in world issues.
  
  
  

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[dwale]

Hi there! I'm Amanda and I found your character interesting enough to critique!


Anyway, you're off to a good start. It's a little bland, with no colors and no interesting fonts, but that is easily fixable. I like that your History isn't just good things. There's definitely some tension there. However, it's a little short and snippity. Maybe add why the fighting is occurring? If she wants to go like he wants her to, then why is there a problem?


Then, maybe explain why she is an Agnostic Atheist. What's her schooling like? What other NPCS does she interact with? How is her relationship with her brother? Her discovery of her sexuality? Little details like that make your character real.


(By the way, you're adorable! Peace, I'm out.)

 

[TheOddball]

Hi there! I'm Amanda and I found your character interesting enough to critique!
Anyway, you're off to a good start. It's a little bland, with no colors and no interesting fonts, but that is easily fixable. I like that your History isn't just good things. There's definitely some tension there. However, it's a little short and snippity. Maybe add why the fighting is occurring? If she wants to go like he wants her to, then why is there a problem?


Then, maybe explain why she is an Agnostic Atheist. What's her schooling like? What other NPCS does she interact with? How is her relationship with her brother? Her discovery of her sexuality? Little details like that make your character real.


(By the way, you're adorable! Peace, I'm out.)

Thank you for your feedback! It's taken a while for me to notice this because I was inactive for ages. I've made a couple of changes you suggested, and I'll get around to the others when I'm able. You've been very helpful ^^;


(and thank you )