Fantasy Astral Knights: A Modern Fantasy/Superhero RP (OOC)

[Truthblade]

Here is the ooc

 

[Shotgunpenguin]

Working on my CS now, lmk if you spot any problems when it goes up

 

[Truthblade]

Working on my CS now, lmk if you spot any problems when it goes up

Yeah. I am working on mine right now

 

[Damafaud]

Truthblade

Hmm what would a normal human's stat be?

I feel like it's a bit too vague now. Is 10 super intelligence? Or is 5 the human limit of magic power?

About the power, how powerful can a power be? Is it on a street level where most it can affect is one combat, or in a building or small city scale? Does the power scale for human and Fragment differ?

 

[Truthblade]

Truthblade

Hmm what would a normal human's stat be?

I feel like it's a bit too vague now. Is 10 super intelligence? Or is 5 the human limit of magic power?

About the power, how powerful can a power be? Is it on a street level where most it can affect is one combat, or in a building or small city scale? Does the power scale for human and Fragment differ?

5 I normal. 10 denotes a max superhuman level.
While it obviously can't be absurdly OP, powers here are pretty high leveled. Yes, the hman and Fragment's power levels are different

 

[Truthblade]

I know that some of them are still WIP, I have noticed a few CSs listing Elements that I have not included in the CS for you to choose from. If you have, please change it, or PM me If you want to negotiate something special for your character.

 

[Truthblade]

So,who has their CSs ready for review so I can check them later today?

 

[Shotgunpenguin]

Working on mine, should have it up by the end of the day

 

[Truthblade]

RyanDiaz
*Assuming the Cs Is done since all the spots are filled*AS far as I can tell, the CS looks fine. Accepted.

Gaius Danius Griinia

Hmmmm...to be perfectly honest I am a little unsure...

While on a technical standpoint, the CS is mostly fine (Though the Fragment's cannon should be toned down in power, I do not approve of OHKO abilities), some factor's of this CS (as well as the previous versions) Is giving me Gary Stu vibes, and for that reason, I do not have much assurance that you won't try to "hog the spotlight" in the RP.

 

[Gaius Danius Griinia]

RyanDiaz
*Assuming the Cs Is done since all the spots are filled*AS far as I can tell, the CS looks fine. Accepted.

Gaius Danius Griinia

Hmmmm...to be perfectly honest I am a little unsure...

While on a technical standpoint, the CS is mostly fine (Though the Fragment's cannon should be toned down in power, I do not approve of OHKO abilities), some factor's of this CS (as well as the previous versions) Is giving me Gary Stu vibes, and for that reason, I do not have much assurance that you won't try to "hog the spotlight" in the RP.

Hog the spotlight?
Spotlights get you killed

 

[RyanDiaz]

I think your CS is pretty ok. Great that mine was eventually. Eager to start.

 

[Truthblade]

Hog the spotlight?
Spotlights get you killed

Here is what I mean. (and keep in mind, I am not trying to accuse you of anything, but I am just skeptical, and hopefully you can understand why.)
The "factors" I am alluding to are things that are commonly associated with the stereotypical Mary Sue, things such as a tragic backstory, and the fact he is incredibly accomplished for his age. Along with this, the previous versions of the CS were extremely powerful to an absurd degree ( I was shaking my head at the ability to summon 10000 dragons) . And while you did tone them down, he is still pretty powerful. With all of this put together, it comes off as you trying to create the single most powerful character in the RP. While I have nothing against powerful characters, it all comes down to how you plan to use the character. Right now, I am not assured that you won't try to bulldoze every problem or obstacle the rp puts down for you or your allies. That is what is making me hesitant to accept the CS.

 

[Gaius Danius Griinia]

Here is what I mean. (and keep in mind, I am not trying to accuse you of anything, but I am just skeptical, and hopefully you can understand why.)
The "factors" I am alluding to are things that are commonly associated with the stereotypical Mary Sue, things such as a tragic backstory, and the fact he is incredibly accomplished for his age. Along with this, the previous versions of the CS were extremely powerful to an absurd degree ( I was shaking my head at the ability to summon 10000 dragons) . And while you did tone them down, he is still pretty powerful. With all of this put together, it comes off as you trying to create the single most powerful character in the RP. While I have nothing against powerful characters, it all comes down to how you plan to use the character. Right now, I am not assured that you won't try to bulldoze every problem or obstacle the rp puts down for you or your allies. That is what is making me hesitant to accept the CS.

I just went with the funnest idea I had

 

[Truthblade]

I just went with the funnest idea I had

That may be, but you also have to be aware that there are other people you are going to rping with soon.
I was told before that "Mary sues" are not character issues, but are player issues entirely. Which is why instead of rejecting the character entirely, I am questioning your plans for your character. If you can give me complete assurance that you can separate your ego from your character, I will accept the CS for now.

 

[Gaius Danius Griinia]

That may be, but you also have to be aware that there are other people you are going to rping with soon.
I was told before that "Mary sues" are not character issues, but are player issues entirely. Which is why instead of rejecting the character entirely, I am questioning your plans for your character. If you can give me complete assurance that you can separate your ego from your character, I will accept the CS for now.

Ego?

 

[Truthblade]

Ego?

Alright, let me put it this way.....

Can you refrain from getting upset if your character fails at something?
Will you be able to accept that not everything will go your way?
Can you accept the possibility of your character not be the center of attention 100% of the time?

If you can do all of this, consider your character accepted.

 

[Gaius Danius Griinia]

Alright, let me put it this way.....

Can you refrain from getting upset if your character fails at something?
Will you be able to accept that not everything will go your way?
Can you accept the possibility of your character not be the center of attention 100% of the time?

If you can do all of this, consider your character accepted.

I mean I can't not be upset at failing, it means I've done something wrong
Not all missions work out
Spies don't WANT to be the center of attention...bad for business

 

[Truthblade]

I mean I can't not be upset at failing, it means I've done something wrong

No, it just means your character is not perfect. No one (realistically) is

 

[Gaius Danius Griinia]

No, it just means your character is not perfect. No one (realistically) is

Perfection is a an unachievable goal

 

[Shotgunpenguin]

Cs is updated, let me know if there's anything wrong

 

[Truthblade]

Cs is updated, let me know if there's anything wrong

Just a nitpick, but I am not sure about a Fragment named Astral given that people who resonate Fragments are called Astral Knights. Other than that, its accepted.

 

[Shotgunpenguin]

Alright, I'll just make a quick change

 

[RyanDiaz]

So when will we start, should we need 2 or 3 more?

 

[Truthblade]

So when will we start, should we need 2 or 3 more?

I say wait for Damafaud and athereal to finish their characters (as well s me now that I think about it). After that, I'll put up the IC.

 

[athereal]

I'm working on him right now.