Amerikia's Character Dump (Mostly fantasy, I think.)

Amerikia1126 · Sep 19, 2015

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-America

10/25

Hey there Wanderer! This thread is about to become obsolete. It will remain up, but it will no longer be updated. There will be a link to the new, tidy, has-a-theme thread. But that's not up yet! So anyway, update over. Continue your current browsing session of RpN.

-America

10/31

If a character no longer has a photo, that's because the photo is no longer is no longer on my imgur since i decided to organize things.

10/31

The new thread will not be posted until at least one or two characters are fully updated to my new template. This will take a while, ya know. In case anyone actually cares. :/

Rate one, rate all, rate some, rate none at all.
Amerikia

Important Notice: If you're here to give feedback, please note the tab(s) you are giving feedback on. You can do one, all, pick and choose, whatever. Feedback is feedback and it is greatly appreciated.

These are in order of creation, more or less.

click the tabs to see each character, they are completed unless their tab states otherwise.

abandoned section is essentially a junkyard of characters that never got a chance to rp, but i keep anyway.

Also, note: some information is only there due to situational reasons. ie. some rps may require sexuality, some may not.

Notice. As of 10/23 - any new cs's will not have ALL info, they will only have the required info for the rp, and maybe more if they don't require that much. also, they will only be updated if i decide to recycle them. also, one of these days i will make this the hub of operations and give each completed/wip/in revision cs it's own thread so they can be critiqued.

edit 1 - 9/26 : changed Jas to universal template, gave her a theme song. Wrapped up Derik with a bow and moved him to finished. Expanded Neri's bio and brushed up a bit of the general section. Major bio expansion for Amy.

edit 2 - 10/7 : massive thread overhaul. category: organization. also, updated Derik to Derik 2.0: Exorcist

edit 3 - 10/9 : (related note: updated cs template. again....) added Dee to the thread.

edit 4 - 10/9 : changed Jas to Abandoned status. set Dee as In Progress.

edit 5 - 10/10 : made abandoned section and moved Jas there. also gave Andy his on cs and started filling it out. And made Dee's full name flow a bit better. Diana Murcott -> Deanne Murcota. Fixed Angie's border. Then I centerblocked everything. Now I should stop, and close this tab.

edit 6 - 10/11 : realized Derik's fears contradicted with his description. changed him to in revision.

edit 7 - 10/12 : added random on the spot rhyme.

edit 8 - 10/22 : added Dean

edit 9 - 10/22 : changed all media codes to url codes due to limits. (probably should make a new post or a new thread. hmm....)

edit 10 - 10/23 : added unfinished Ava to the abandoned section. added big notice to self. catagorized as fantasy, modern, etc.

edit 11 - 10/25 : fixed a typo in Dean's excuse

edit 12 - 10/27 : put up notice

edit 13 - 10/31 : wow, irony. 13 on halloween. heh, anyway. put up the missing pictures notice. put up notice for posting of new thread. updated to do list.

() Finish up Del

() Finish up Andy

() Clean up cs (aka get rid of useless info)

() FINISH THE UNFINISHED OR GET RID OF THEM
RP List:

Your Literal God Parent

[fantasy-realistic]

General

Name: Angela Peterson

"Y-ello!"

Nickname(s): Angie

"Call me Angie, it's easier."

Age: 15

"Starting to get some freedom, like, Finally!"

Gender: Female

"Umm.... Yeah, kind obvious right?"

Sexuality: Heterosexual

"Boys for me, thank you."

Height: 5'5"

"Not bad if I say so myself."

Weight: 125lbs

"Average enough."

Species: Human

"So are you essentially telling me that mermaids are real or something?"

Nationality: American

"Yep, the U S of A."

Spoken Languages: English

"Don't blame me, my Spanish teacher was boring."

Occupation: Part time at the grocery store

"I like to help out dad with the rent, even though he says I don't have to."

Alignment: Good-neutral

"I'm on my side."

Misc Appearance Details: nope.

"I'm a pretty simple girl. No need for detail."

Personality

Dependable ● Sassy ● Obedient-ish ● Introvert

"That about sums me up."

Likes: anime, helping out, hanging out with her dad

"I don't ask for much in life, just give me anime and I'm happy."

Dislikes: conflict, rules, not being trusted

"Easy enough to stay on my good side, I like to think."

Strengths: Fast reflexes, empathetic, and a good listener.

"That's what they always say."

Weaknesses: Not street smart, or book smart for that matter

"That stuff isn't important anyways."

Quirks: rambles when she gets nervous

"No I don't! Remember that one time when my dad confronted me about the missing ice cream and I totally kept my head?"

Fears: loneliness, the dark, the unknown

"These usually go hand in hand, it seems."

Aspirations: none.

"I don't know, am I supposed to?"

Speaks without thinking, often shy around authority figures, but gets rather childish around friends and family.

She just chills around the house watching anime and helping her dad clean. And works a part time job to help with the rent. However, she is definitely not a morning person and only has a couple close friends.

"Great, you just summed me up right there. Why'd you ask all the other questions?"

Bio

Her mother was an aspiring artist fresh from college with a bright outlook on life. While her father was working part time jobs to see his wife's dream come true, seeing as though he couldn't do much else due to dropping out of high school.

Before she was born, Angie had a twin brother. Her parents were very excited, though unprepared for their children to come. However, her brother died at birth due to "unforeseen complications" that were never really explained or questioned.

She has had her cuts and bruises from the playground, her friends, and loving parents. Then when she was 8, her mom died in a car accident. Angie was devastated, and her friends avoided her as if she had some kind of "traumatized bubble" that no one must enter. While her father grieved, she wasn't really herself, she seemed like a completely different person to most people, but her father knew she was just grieving.

Since then, her father had a few girlfriends, but no one wanted the baggage of a daughter. They wanted their own children. Then came Jessica. While originally her father's manager at the grocery store, he quickly fell for her charm and decided to make the jump and remarry, almost as if he was under some sort of spell.

"No comment, I prefer not to talk about my past. I'll just write it down."
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technically Your Lieral God Parent, but never appeared.

[none yet. intended for fantasy-realistic i guess.]

Andy Peterson

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General

Name: Andrew Peterson

Nickname(s): Andy

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Species: Human

Nationality:

Spoken Languages: English, semi-fluent Spanish

"Unlike Angie, I actually payed attention in class."

Occupation:

Skills:

Alignment:

Appearance

Refer to picture except for information stated here.

Posture: Unsure, he doesn't really know how to present himself, he's usually the backseat driver.

Height: 6' 0"

Weight: 148lbs

Shoe Size: 11 (us)

Style:

[sorry, past-me hits me with that one all the time. so :/ ]

Relationships

Familial Relationships

Parents:

Siblings: technically Angie, in a way

Aunts: unknown?

Uncles: ^

Cousins: some distant cousin. a Lucy or something.

Grandparents: unknown?

Ancestors: xD . Yeah right.

Intrapersonal Relationships

Allies:

Enemies:

Friends:

Rivals: Angie

Headcannon Relationships

Angie: Really good friends, but always trying to outdo each other.

Lucy: He hasn't met her [theyre cousins for some reason]

Amy: Who?

Derik: He's really.... wierd. He disappears for days at a time and shows up on his doorstep exhausted and injured. Then proceeds to live in his house for a week and pranks Andy the whole time.

Neri: Just as clueless as Andy in some subjects. They are good friends because of this.

Combat

Weapon(s):

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Armour:

Specialty: Dodging, tiring his enemy.

Strengths: Fast reflexes, brave, energetic at all times of day or night, relatively strong

Weaknesses:

Abilities: Shares a body with Angie. They switch personalities whenever something traumatic happens, but don't really realize it. They switch front and backseat driving whenever they both agree. This is hard in the beginning due to fights and Angie not realizing Andy's there.

Immunities: Not really.

Futilities: Kinda useless

Restrictions: They act as the others' conscience, but only Andy remembers doing this due to almost always being in the backseat

Abilities: Sees the strategic view in battle. Sorta planning out his opponents' next move a second before it happens.

Immunities: Surprise attacks

Futilities: Really tires him out after about five minutes of using this, so he only uses it in dire situations and towards the end of battles

Restrictions: He has to be fully in control, not driving Angie, he has to be driving himself.

Extra Info

Favorites

Color: Neon green

Drink: Pepsi

Food: Tacos. Just, tacos.

Excuse: "It's not my fault! Blame Angie, she's always in control."

Pastime: Making little origami boxes

Theme:

All my life, I've wanted my own life. Not be dragged around in someone else's lives, seeing things I don't wanna see...
Andy
RP List:

The Colony

["realistic" survival situation, could be considered fantasy]

General

Name: Lucy Simmons

"Yep, that's me."

Nickname(s): n/a

"Sadly enough"

Age: 22

"I should probably get settled soon..."

Gender: Female

"Why would I be male?"

Sexuality: Bisexual

"Shh... don't tell my parents."

Height: 5’ 6”

"Not too tall, not too short."

Weight: 129lbs

"Almost exactly the average for my height."

Species: Human

"What kind of question is this? More than 99% of all animals can't even answer this!"

Nationality: English

"Accent not included."

Spoken Languages: English

"No Ableh Espanole."

Occupation: Secretary

"Wasn't my first choice, I didn't really have one though..."

Alignment: Neutral

"Does this question matter right now? I'm slightly busy trying to survive."

Misc Appearance Details: Long blonde hair, bright blue eyes, and a face that can blend into a crowd.

"Not really a "special snowflake"."

Personality

Pacifist ● Analyzing ● Overemotional ● Loyal

"Now that's just stereotyping, isn't it?"

Likes: purple, pizza, adventure

"The purple thing is kind of obvious though...."

Dislikes: working overtime, cold nights, getting sick

"It's awful when all three happen at the same time."

Strengths: 70 words a minute, accents, comforting people

"Not much to put on my resume."

Weaknesses: easily broken, chocolate, parents' expectations

"I can't help but feel that I still owe them for taking me in..."

Quirks: Stands around at times, just thinking away.

"What can I say, I like to get to know my surroundings.""

Fears: afraid of heights, afraid of the sight of her own blood, arachnophobia

"You're not asking this for evil purposes, are you?"

Aspirations: have a family

"I want to take care of kids as well as my parents took care of me."

High fertility, people person, always knows what to say, naïve, overemotional.

"I feel that I'm just restating what I've already said now."

Bio

Her birth mother was a teenager and her birth father is unknown, so she was put up for adoption, as well as her unknown twin. Her adoptive parents couldn’t conceive on their own, and they adopted Lucy to fill the hole.

They loved her very much and decided to adopt again when Lucy was about 6. This time they adopted a boy who they named Ian. Lucy and Ian were close until Lucy started middle school, where she got bullied for some reason. She smiled her way through it and stuck with her friends to avoid the worst of the bullying.

Her high school years went by fast and before she knew it, she had to get a job. Unsure of what she wanted to do in life, she took the first internship that came her way and stuck with it.

"My life story, in a paragraph. I need to be more interesting."

Misc

Weapon(s): none.

"Why would I need a weapon?"

Armour: none.

"What is this, a video game?"

Abilities: none.

"I'm not one of those psychic people if that's what you mean. I just seem like one."

Skills: Decent cook, a bit of childhood camping experience, knows her way around a first aid kit (more or less).

"I feel like I could do well in those "hunger games" they speak of when they mention pop culture literature."

Extra Info: Driving a car to visit her parents for her mother’s birthday, stopped at a light, and all goes black, until she's in the zone.

"I don't see what I did to be stuck in the zone. Thanks, ZRE"

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The Awakening

["realistic" [fantasy] survival situation]

General

Name: Amelia Roberts

"Yeah, what about?"

Nickname(s): Amy

"That's what they call me."

Age: 16

"Six frickin teen, big whoop."

Gender: Female

"No! Really? Thanks Captain Obvious."

Sexuality: Heterosexual

"Straight. No Questions Asked."

Height: 5'3"

"So what if I'm short?"

Weight: 126lbs

"Stop with all these questions, what are you going to ask next? My life story?"

Species: Awakened

"Don't. Fucking. Remind Me."

Nationality: American

"Yay, 'Murica and all that."

Spoken Languages: English, Pig Latin, and a bit of Spanish (more understanding than actual speaking).

"esyay, Iyay eakspay igpay atinlay"

Occupation: none

"My mom's so demanding, she may as well be the boss of my life."

Alignment: Neutral

"I fend for myself, and maybe friends if I ever make any."

Misc Appearance Details: The picture is Amy, before the Awakening. Nowadays, her face is half flesh and half bone. She wears a cloth around her lower face to counteract this. She is also missing part of her torso.

"Why me? Just, why?"

Personality

Sarcastic ● Shy ● Resentful ● Loudmouthed

"Are you catagorizing me or something?"

Likes: music, singing, cussing in pig latin

"Got any better ideas?"

Dislikes: background noise, cliffhangers, zombies

"Those zombies freak me out. They used to be people..."

Strengths: creative-type person, fast runner

"I'm a mix of a brain-child and a jock. Kinda, not really. okay, next question."

Weaknesses: no people skills, holds grudges easily

"I still don't see how that's a "weakness"."

Quirks: doesn't filter thoughts into words

"It totally doesn't, just get me some icecream or something and I'll be fine."

Fears: mirrors, claustrophobia

"The two worst things: seeing a zombie, and being a zombie."

Aspirations: none.

"What's the point. I'm. a fucking. zombie."

Amy definitely has some issues to work out. Now that she’s an Awakened, she lashes out and speaks her mind when shit hits the fan. Also, she curses easily.

"Of course I do, who wouldn't in a fucking zombie apocalypse?"

Bio

Before her birth, Amy's parents were traveling abroad with the military, her mother being a nurse, and her father being a fighter pilot. Then Amy was born and they dropped their positions to take care of her at home. When she was five, Amy's father re-enrolled in the military, this time as a normal ground soldier. He died in his first battle.

Since then, her mother has cared for Amy with all her effort, shielding her from further horror and being protective, hoping Amy wouldn't remember their military days. They had a close relationship, but then Amy was bullied in middle school for not having a father, and her mother couldn’t do a thing. When Amy asked for homeschooling, her mother denied the request, saying she was a fighter, just like her dad. Amy took this comment to heart and fought off the bullies, and her mother, with sarcasm and insults.

Everyone in school heard about "the crazy girl who beat up the popular kids" and avoided her like the plague, believing her to be a bully. She really wasn't; she was actually musically-talented and kind of quiet, but kids judge at first sight. So she may have lost her friends and was lonely and insecure until the day she died. Until she wasn’t. Dead anymore, that is.

"Whoop-dee-doo, my life story. Told from my death. Life. Half-life?"

Misc

Weapon(s): none.

"I'm screwed..."

Armour: none.

"I don't need it anyway. I. can't... feel."

Enhancement: Her reflexes are enhanced, giving her a faster reaction time.

"The only fucking perk to being a zombie."

Skills: pig latin, singing

"Not particularly useful in a life or death situation."

Extra Info: Amy resents her zombie-like state and wishes she would’ve died instead of being forced to endure all the pain and loneliness.

"Again, who. Wouldn't?"

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(regrettably) Fantasy Highschool

[fantasy. that's all i'm saying]

General

Name: Neriah Jenkins

"Hi! That's me!"

Nickname(s): Neri, Iah

"No one really calls me Iah, though."

Age: unknown, appears to be around 16

"So does that mean I get presents everyday?"

Gender: Female

"Girl, girl, girl! Don't you see the hair!?"

Sexuality: Not interested.

"Umm.. you're asking a lot of questions."

Height: 5'9"

"I'm even taller when I stand on the tips of my toes!"

Weight: 115lbs

"I need to be light to fly, right?"

Species: "Failed Fighting Machine"

"What's a species? Does that mean I'm special?"

Nationality: none

"I wasn't really "born" if that's what you mean."

Spoken Languages: English, Gibberish.

"Bilinguial!"

Occupation: Student

"I go to school with my friends! They go to school too."

Alignment: Good

"Gotta save the world! Who wants to help?"

Misc Appearance Details: Can hide her wings, but cannot use flight or magic in this form.

"Total commando mode."

Personality

Selfless ● Childish ● Good-humored ● Susceptible

"What's "suspect-able" mean?"

Likes: Bright colors, flying, helping people who can’t help themselves.

"Flying like bird, with hair in he wind, and wings on your back."

Dislikes: Selfish people, fighting, cramped spaces.

"Why don't you just share? You have plenty!"

Strengths: Magical abilities, positive outlook

"Magicky magicy magic!"

Weaknesses: Overemotional, and can’t handle her own problems

"What do you mean!!??"

Quirks: Airhead

"Is that like the candy? What's a "quirk"?"

Fears: Master, falling, bad guys.

"Master's scray. He's a bad, bad person."

Aspirations: none.

"What's an aspiration? Is it a kind of ice cream?"

With a smile that can cheer almost anyone up, Neri will be your shoulder to cry on in times of need. She’s almost too trusting of people, and believes in the good in everyone. Also, she’s pretty childish and is nice to everyone.

"Everyone is good, some just choose to be bad for some reason."

Bio

Neri was created by her master as a “fighting machine”. He was a a naturally unappealing person with many enemies who wanted to stop his crazy plan of taking over the world through aforementioned "fighting machines". Unfortunately for him, she was too kind to fulfill his plans for world domination.

So being the selfish person he was, he locked up Neri so his enemies wouldn't get ahold of her, a wise strategic decision. Well his plan failed when Neri was rescued when an expedition came to destroy her Master's headquarters. This expedition was led by her “Aunt”, who actually was her master's sister. Both sides were completely killed off, leaving a "circle of destuction" where the headquarters used to be. With no family and no place to go, Neri wandered the Earth in search of a place where she could belong.

"My life is kind of like a book, it ends in a happily ever after. I think.."

Misc

Weapon(s): Twin swords.

"Master gave me these cool swords before he found out i was a "failure". I call them Ember and Frost."

Armour: none.

"I can just fly out of the way!"

Abilities: Emotional Telepathy, Superhuman Agility, Air Elemental Magic, Healing Magic

"Master was mad a lot.... "Aunt" was heroic though."

Skills: Handy with Onehanded blades, Flight

"Flying is fun! You should try it sometime!"

Extra Info: While delicate like a flower, she has a certain presence and stands out as positive.

"In a dream, there was this guy... he called me his "pretty rose"... He was creepy."

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Ao No Exorcist

[fandom. within the fandom.... fantasy-realistic-combat]

General

Name: Derik Chapman

"Hey.."

Nickname(s): "Reckless Kid"

"I'm not reckless, my superiors all have a stick up their ass."

Age: 17

"Been out of school for a while though, now I just work at a store, among other things..."

Gender: Male

"..."

Sexuality: Heterosexual

"Last I checked."

Height: 5'10"

"Some say I'm short, others think I'm tall. Honestly, I don't know or care."

Weight: 153lbs

"Are you my doctor now?"

Species: Human

"It's better than being a demon. Literally, they're a thing."

Nationality: American

"Live in some city with a nickname of some fruit. I can never remember, but they mention it all the time."

Spoken Languages: English.

"The unofficial language of the internet is English, and so is mine."

Occupation: Exorcist, Grocery Store Clerk

"Exorcists, they get rid of demons. They are not personal trainers, idiot."

Class: Lower Second Class

"Exams were a pain, and I'm still "not trustworthy". What do they mean about that?"

Meister: Knight - Doctor-in-Training

"How should I put this for an outsider? It's like a specialty. Spe-cial-ty."

Hair Color: Dark brown

"Looks black when wet."

Eye Color: Hazel

"Not quite green, not quite brow- wait. Why am I telling you this?"

Birthday: March 13th

"I was literally born on friday the 13th. Just putting that out there."

Blood Type: O

"Why are you asking for my blood type? You didn't ask any of those other people!"

Personality

Quiet ● Down-to-earth ● Moody ● Brutally honest

"That sounds about right."

Derik’s fairly talkative, but he doesn’t have that many friends to talk to, so he's usually pretty quiet. He’s kind of loud, and is said to be "brutally honest". Due to this, people don’t really want to be friends with him, so he just shows up to places he wasn’t really invited to.

Around his (few) friends, he goofs around and says whatever he feels like at the time. He lives with his grandmother and cares for her in her slowly-but-surely process of dying. He's not afraid of death, and acknowledges that it's a part of life. Though he can be emotional after traumatic events.

As an exorcist, he's the kind to go in without much of a backup plan and make things up as he goes along. Therefore his alias as the "Reckless Kid". He works hard when he needs to, but when he doesn't, he usually takes the easy way out.

"Emotional, my ass. I never cry."

Likes: Classic rock, dark colors, cookies

"Bright colors burn your eyes after a while."

Dislikes: Awkward silence, vegetables, loud people

"There's always that one really loud person with an annoying voice."

Strengths: spying, hiding his emotions

"Are those really strengths?"

Weaknesses: sometimes too honest

"It's not my fault that they're an awful person with a horrible personality."

Quirks: talks in his sleep

"No I don't, those recordings are faked."

Fears: Claustrophobia, death

"This unfortunately includes toilet stalls."

Aspirations: None.

"Basically, I'm fucked."

Bio

Derik was pretty well cared for as a kid, until he reached around the age of 4. Then his mom decided she’d had enough of both Derik and his father and ran off with the local bartender. After that, his dad didn’t really want him, so he went to his grandmother. She raised him as her own, but Derik felt some sort of void and started lashing out at school. He got in trouble but around middle school, he just kind of faded into the background, accepting that that’s just how life is.

It was at this point that he was attacked by a demon on his way back from school, and saved by his grandmother. She introduced him into this new world, and is currently helping him study medicine.

"All the coal tars in the air though, geez. Some days they're as thick as fog."

Living Relatives

His only living relative is his grandmother, though she is slowly dying from an old wound caused by a powerful demon king.

Misc

Weapon(s): Derik uses a sword in battle, which is admittedly the only weapon he's good at using. This sword has been passed down to Derik from his grandmother and has been in the family for generations. There used to be a demon in it, but it left a couple generations ago, leaving some residue energy.

"Yeah, yeah. I have a sword. But everyone has some kind of weapon these days, so mine's not that impressive."

Armour: None

"Well... actually, this one's true."

Abilities: None.

"Umm.. I can roll my tongue I'm pathetically bad at rolling my tongue."

Skills: "Invisibility"

"I never asked to be seen, so I guess I'm okay with it."

Extra Info: None.

"You covered it all already, can you go?"

Theme:

Look at those people, innocent.. Until injured by a fucking demon that is. Most go insane, but others, well I'm one of those others.
Derik Chapman
RP List:

None yet, not even done, silly!

[intended for realistic, once completed. [get it together future-me! don't make the same procrastinating choices i did!]]

Dee Murcota

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General

Name: Deanne Murcota

Nickname(s): Dee

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Asexual

Species: Human

Nationality: American

Spoken Languages: English, semi-fluent Spanish, various words and phrases in other languages

Occupation: Student

Skills: A little bit of this, a little bit of that

Alignment: Neutral-good

Appearance

Same as picture unless otherwise stated here.

Hair Style: Up in some sort of bun-ponytail monstrosity-type thing.

Eye Color: Dark brown, seems black at times

Skin Color: Slightly tannish, tan-line around watch

Posture: Slightly slouches, then notices and stands/sits up and slowly goes back to slouching, repating the cycle.

Height: 5' 3"

Weight: 117lbs

Shoe Size: 7.5 (us)

Style:

Personality

trait ● trait ● trait ● trait

In Depth. Anima. Persona.

Likes:

Dislikes:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Quirks:

Habits:

Manias:

Phobias:

Savvies:

Ineptities:

Aspirations:

Motivations:

History

Infant. Childhood. Adolescence. Current.

Relationships

Familial Relationships

Parents:

Siblings:

Children:

Aunts:

Uncles:

Cousins:

Grandparents:

Ancestors:

Intrapersonal Relationships

Allies:

Enemies:

Friends:

Rivals:

Headcannon Relationships

Angie:

Andy:

Lucy:

Amy:

Derik:

Neri:

Jas:

Combat

Weapon(s):

Armour:

Specialty:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Abilities:

Immunities:

Futilities:

Restrictions:

Extra Info

Favorites

Color:

Drink:

Food:

Excuse:

Pastime:

Theme:

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hoping....

[modern]

Dean Cartwright

"Okay, what'd I do wrong this time?"
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General

Name: Michael Dean Cartwright

Nickname: Dean, Carter [prefers Dean]

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Demisexual

Sexually Active: Secret

Relationship Status: Single, and plans on staying that way. [Although, things never quite go according to plan...]

Role: Bad Boy

Appearance

Dean has straight brown hair that sticks up at odd angles. It's short-medium length in terms of guys hair. He has a more squarish jaw, and appears to be verging on tan, but not quite there yet. He has some relatively thick eyebrows, and kind of a big nose. But all's okay at the end of the day because he has "an amazing smile" and gold-speckled hazel eyes. On a related note, he lands at a good ol' 5'8" on the height scale.

Style: Dean typically wears clothes that defy the "bad boy" stereotype he's often put into. He prefers something more along the lines of dark-coloured beanies, hoodies, and a pair of jeans that fits; no skinny jeans, no baggy pants. He's a fan of skate shoes, though he appreciates work boots as well. He typically wears no other accessories beyond his beanie and a pair of black-tinted sunglasses.

Tattoos: None, as of right now. Though he plans to get one someday.

Piercings: He has two in the lobe of his right ear, and one on his left nostril. He typically wears studs of various sizes in all of these places.

Scars: He has several scars on his knees, elbows, and forehead from bad falls over the years; nothing too prominent though.

Personality

Likes:

+ Freedom

+ Running Away

+ Loud Music

+ Avoiding Authority

+ Expressing His Emotions

+ Chocolate

+ Cats

Dislikes:

- Responsibilities

- School

- The "It" Crowd

- His Parents

- His Aunt

- Assholes

- Celebrities

Habits:

~ Judging People

~ Speaking Before Thinking

~ Zoning Out In Conversations

~ Overhearing Conversations

Hobbies:

~ Street Art

~ Selling Gossip

~ Bingewatching Netflix

Fears:

~ His Future

~ Being Alone

On the surface, Dean appears to be your typical "bad boy" with his negative attitude and sarcastic comments. He has quite a temper on him, and can be rather hotheaded at times. He's quick to talk, and usually soon after he's in a fight. Though he doesn't necessarily love fights, he doesn't hate them either. Not to mention, he's involved in "criminal activity" a lot, but Dean doesn't see his work as "a way to defy authority", he worked hard on that, and he is definitely proud of it.

He's pretty selfish about most things, though he does have his soft spots, and dammit if he isn't a human being! Dean's fairly good at concealing emotions like embarrassment and sadness, though the rest- not as well. He's an artistic person with wild ideas about his future, but has no idea how to implement any of them. Afraid of failing and of change, Dean's a relatively good person once you get to know him, though not many people attempt to.

History

Place of Origin: Seattle, WA

Dean's parents were pretty ambitious individuals who never planned on having a family. Then one day, they got lazy and found out Dean was on the way. They figured why not? and kept the baby; also they weren't exactly swimming cash. As a baby, his parents weren't exactly the best at their job, but they didn't abuse him either; They sort of, didn't care- at all. He was largely ignored until he was about 3, which is when his aunt decided to get involved. She said that Dean's parents weren't doing a good job at raising him; always hiring a babysitter and being a bad influence. So, she sued them, things got messy, and 6 months later, Dean was living at his aunt's house all the way over in Beverly Hills.

After that, Dean had a relatively normal childhood until he got to middle school. There, he suddenly stopped caring about school and started acting up. Detentions, suspensions, the whole deal; he didn't care and his aunt was fed up with him. For the remainder of middle school and the first half of high school, Dean continued this act of not caring in the slightest. Then he realized "crap- future, it's a thing" and attempted to give a damn, and failed. So he went back to his ways of not caring, life was easier that way.

Extra Info

Favorites

Color: Dark Green

Drink: Mountain Dew

Food: Spaghetti

Excuse: "No one ever told me."

Theme [aka song that i'm currently addicted to]:

He's a closet-fan of Doctor Who. [though I'm not, I wear my fandoms with pride!]
CS's in here have been abandoned/ given up on/ never completed. They may be resurrected in the future if an RP requires them.

RP List:

None

General

Name: Jasmine Waters

Nickname(s): Jas

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Sexuality:

Height:

Weight:

Species:

Nationality:

Spoken Languages:

Occupation:

Alignment:

Misc Appearance Details:

Personality

Artistic ● Considerate ● Reckless ● Cheerful

Jas always smiles even when she's mad and is always there to lend a helping hand. She's clumsy, and tends to break things often. Also, she can't read very well so she is often found doing physical things such as dancing and cleaning.

Likes: Pasta, flowers, things that smell nice

Dislikes: Potatoes, betrayal, tea

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Quirks:

Habits: Tends to bite her nails when nervous

Fears:

Aspirations:

Other: Never been kissed

Opinion on the Selection: She finds it romantic like those boy-meets-girl stories of long ago.

Bio

The eldest of five children born closely together, Jasmine was never without someone to play with. She would run around with her brothers and play dolls with sisters, all while dancing around the house in those rare moments she was alone. At school she had many friends and always got along well with the teachers, obeying their every rule without question.

Then her father went to work one day and never came back, and all that went away. She was nine years of age.

Being the oldest of the house, she was pulled out of school and was told to work. She worked many odd jobs to help pay the ever-increasing rent. Finally, she found what she was good at; cleaning the rich folk's houses. No one else wanted to do it, and they were cool inside, so why not?

Misc

Weapon(s):

Armour:

Power: Human

Skills:

Extra Info:

Theme: [clickety-click!]

Sometimes I lay awake at night; thinking. Then I get the brilliant idea to go to bed, and I do.
Jasmine Waters

Ava Dessen

NAME: Ava Dessen

AGE: 17

GENDER: Female

OCCUPATION: High school student

APPEARANCE: (Explain the appearance of your character. 1-3 paragraphs.)

Ava has relatively pale skin, not unhealthily pale, but just unable to get a tan. She has naturally blondish-brown, straight hair that she decided to die after [iNSERT TRAUMATIC EVENT HERE] to honor her [iNSERT PARENT HERE]... WIP

CASUAL ATTIRE:

Ava generally wears a dark grey beanie on her head, she attempts to put it on the right way, but she doesn't care too much about how she's wearing the beanie, and it just finds its own place on her head. Other than a beanie, she generally wears a light-colored pullover sweater with a dark shirt underneath, and a long, striped scarf that more or less succeed in covering her neck. Then of course she alternates between worn jeans and slightly newer jeans, and a pair of turquoise all-stars, just to break the dark-colored stereotype.

JEWELRY/MARKINGS/SCARS:

Ava doesn't wear any jewelry, unless you count her precious earbuds, which are either in her ears, or hanging around her neck. She doesn't have any noticeable markings, besides a birth mark or two surrounding her left eye, and as for scars? Well, Ava has a sort of "ridge" on the bridge of her nose from falling off the monkey bars face first when she was around six.

CHARACTER QUOTE HERE

Ava Dessen

STRENGTHS: (List no more than three, detailed strengths of your character.)

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WEAKNESSES: (List no more than three, detailed weaknesses of your character.)

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FEARS: (2+ fears, they don't have to be all big fears. Snakes, spiders, water, fire, death, loneliness. That wonderful stuff.)

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PERSONALITY: (2+ paragraphs detailing your character's personalty. )

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BACKGROUND: (3+ detailing your character's past, including their death.)

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WRITING SAMPLE: (Ao No Exorcist)

"Can you take it down?", she said. Of course he could take it down, didn't he just put it up!? Derik grumbled as he reached up to take the failed prank down. Though perhaps this opportunity was still salvageable, with some people still surrounding the door; though others had gotten through. Apparently the motion sensing part of the device wasn't up and running yet. But the sprinkler certainly was, and it was hooked up to the battery, so what would happen if he turned it on?

Derik unhooked the device from its place on the doorframe, and.. dropped it on the ground. "Shit.." He picked it up and accidentally turned the sprinkler on, not noticing as his ears perked up after hearing a certain question. "Also, since you’re here now Derik… Why don’t you stay for a period?" Gee, he didn't know, do you have to stay if the teacher asks you to? Of course you did, they were a teacher! Denying a teacher was essentially suicide. Or at least they were in Derik's mi- wait, was that the sound of water? He looked down at the device, it was releasing a light mist. This was a fatal flaw in the design; was his plan destined to fail the whole time?

He held the device up to his face to inspect it and the sprinkler started spraying full blast. The water was freezing, as it had been in the freezer for about an hour towards the end of his shift. "Cold, cold cold!" Derik hit the switch again to turn the device off, and the strong current subsided to the mist, and then stopped once more. His hair was drenched, and the water had soaked the top half of his shirt too.

This day was not going well for Derik; failed prank, soaking wet (not to mention COLD), and embarrassing himself in front of the new recruits. He sighed. "May as well stay, I guess. There's no need to get Grams worried, again." He went over to the back row, shoving the device in his backpack and bringing out a dirty shirt, beginning to dry his hair.

Civetta · Sep 26, 2015

Amerikia1126 said:
Power: Human

I call upon the power of Human!!!!

Sorry, I couldn't help myself.

Start Critique..

First of all, I'd like to say how I really like the system you've used for the sheets of information. They're almost like flyers that I could pass out to my friends during a life action roleplay. They're well made, condensed and easy to understand. Well done.

Moving on to the actual content of the first one...

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Angie

I'm completely in love with the way the characters sort of quote the information about them. it really adds a personal vibe like the character is actually being described in a more verbal sense. It really sorta establishes how they are as a person and what you can expect them to say. B-Boy's for me, thank you. My god. That's gold though, a tad unnecessary.

I'll go ahead and say this once to apply to the rest of them. The sexuality of the character does not really need to be established unless it is directly connected to an underlying motive or profession of the character. However, for all I know, a character is secretly a transgender which would make for great story but that's beside the point. Overall, the sexuality is unnecessary my opinion, even though it can establish a characters 'open mindedness' , Otherwise.

"So are you essentially telling me that mermaids are real or something?" So far, I'm in love with this character. I'm smiling while reading this and It's so lively to me. Considering she was one of the first characters you created, it is understandable that they would be so well developed.

So far, it's pretty damn good.

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Lucy

I'm feeling like I can relate to this character a lot since they seem to be so much like me... Heh... Heh... Um... Anyway. This is wonderful. The system you use for the format is still great. That Misc detail is pretty strong. I like characters that aren't completely Yu-Gi-Oh Hairstyle and Very distinct physical characteristics. Sometimes it's the little things that make a huge character.

"My life story, in a paragraph. I need to be more interesting."

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Amy

Damn she is feisty... Being this is the first time I've heard of the Species 'Awakened' I'm interested in her character for that reason.

"Misc Appearance Details: The picture is Amy, before the Awakening. Nowadays, her face is half flesh and half bone. She wears a cloth around her lower face to counteract this. She is also missing part of her torso."

This is pretty crazy. Now that I've read this part, I completely understand the emotions that her character gives off and it's completely justified. This makes her so much more interesting as a character on her own.

Her backstory could use a bit more touching up, though it is very very relateable, i feel that there could be a bit more added to it or maybe even expounded upon. Sometimes people bully for no reason, but maybe there was a reason? What was it? Who was it? Why? Such things like that. This in no way undermines her character however. Even with what it is now, her character is still completely justified.

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Neri, Iah

"No one really calls me Iah, though.", I accidentally snorted at this. I don't know what I was expecting. Again, another smile on my face when reading such a creative form of character sheet. However, I do spot a bit of an inconstancy with Iah. While she appears to be somewhat of a celestial being perhaps... this " Sexuality: Heterosexual

"What does that mean?""

Sort of undermines a bit of her character for me, but it is more than possible that she may be lying to the reader, which is a bit of a double-edged sword. I like what I've seen so far and it's more of a minor thing.

Obviously Neri could be explored a bit more. If you've ever read "Orianna Revek". This girl was essentially re-created as a clockwork monster as a weapon. A killing machine. She fulfilled that and so on and so forth. It's great to see the other spectrum of how... it doesn't always go as planned. Though, perhaps we could have more detail about why he needed a fighting machine. Who captured her and what charge was the rescue apart of? This can use a bit of touching up but overall, I like her character. Just feel the need to add a bit more to make the way she is more justified, more than she already is.

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Derik

Again, another chuckle at the response to the 'Nickname' segment.

Gender: Male

"..."

Oooo. Perhaps there is more underneath the sea? He could be male 100% but this makes for a good interest factor that I'm completely for. Many open doors for this and It makes me a bit excited to know more! Holy **** He is tall..."

I simply love that his motivation of going to school is to sell gossip for money. That's priceless.

Honestly, this kid just has a shit life. I don't blame him for the way he does things. Even though his background/biography was short, it's condensed in such a way that it's actually a fair amount of info.

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(To be honest, the last one kinda hurts my eyes cause of the format.)

Forgive me Jasmine Waters...

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Final Critic

8.2/10

The only thing stopping me from giving this a completely flawless score is only that I'd be giving ALL of these characters a 10/10 score. However, since they will be scored as a more 'overall' type deal. This is what we will be left with.

Admirable. Every single time I read something about one of these characters, I really got that feeling that a reader should get when trying to understand a character. There are so many factors about this that are done right and the format is completely appealing to the eye. The color pallet for the boarders complimenting the characters is always a nice touch. The arts are all pretty well picked and the sections are all well-condensed into an easy to navigate system. These characters are all unique and special and I've even began to feel a bit of a connection without reading too much into them and that is something that most struggle to accomplish. Each character as a well established Biography that, I really can't complain about in a lot of ways. I also am not taking points off for some characters being slightly (And I mean a small small fraction) less developed than others since it was established that 'A' was created earlier than 'B' and so forth. Though, at the end of the day, I had a fun and engaging read. If anything, I'd say that maybe there could be a hint at how these characters interact if they do. Maybe a 'Friend or Foe' sort of section. The way it is right now, it can only improve from this point. Well done.

- Civetta

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