He was probably going to regret this, but his mama would be ashamed of him if he didn't help the screaming girl. Hell, Jack would be ashamed of himself.
Swallowing a sigh, the man stepped out of the shadows and approached Emily from behind, wrapping a hand around her mouth and hissing in her...
First things first—the character sheet threw me off a bit. Maybe it's my eyes, but I feel like the cursive font is a little hard on the eyes. Plus it all looks the same, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but you typically want your character sheet to reflect your character. I would maybe...
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"Yellow" Jack Lynch had had stunningly realistic flashbacks before, but this one sure as hell took the motherfuckin' cake, coz he could've sworn he was right back in BUD/S. The feeling of the freezing winds against his face and bare chest was that convincing. Once he'd...
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NAME "YELLOW" JACK LYNCH
AGE THIRTY-TWO YEARS
LOCATION ATLANTA, GEORGIA
OCCUPATION UNEMPLOYED, EX-NAVY SEAL
APPEARANCE
6'4" TATTOOED CAUCASIAN MALE, HEAVILY DECORATED WITH TATTOOS AND OFTEN APPARELED IN HAT PLUS COMMON CIVVIES [DENIM JEANS AND PLAIN T-SHIRT]. HAS DARK...
name dorian page
age nineteen years
crush no one - yet
[likes] + suits, leather, solitude, sharp objects,
the colors black and red, competition, boys
[dislikes] - girls, children, ignorance,
crowds, bright colors, loud noises
Okay, that's fine
:) I'll use Dorian.
Question, though. What's supposed to happen? What part of the plotline are we starting at? Sorry, that's two questions.