RpNation

Idea
Idea
Benefits of extra detail:
*atmosphere
*better narrative construction
*worldbuilding
*better, more rounded characterization (and less contrived)
*foreshadowing enabler

To name a few of the benefits of "extra" detail.
The Mechanist
The Mechanist
Huge turn off for me
*walls of text that bore me
Idea
Idea
Very well. But that wouldn't make it redundant though. You don't have to like it, but it's not like it's pointless to have it.
The Mechanist
The Mechanist
It’s redundant to me
Idea
Idea
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The Mechanist
Idea
Idea
Redundant isn't something you don't like it's something useless or without a point. Again, you don't have to like it, but it's not redundant if anyone at all is giving it meaning.
Idea
Idea
Sorry, I got carried away. Pardon my rudeness.
The Mechanist
The Mechanist
Fine, it’s subjectively redundant to me
Daisie
Daisie
If I am going to be quite honest with you, from my own personal perspective gained from experience over the years, additional elements and components are always superfluous and unnecessary.

THERE'S redundancy. Purple prose is different from extra detail.
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