Jörmungandr OOC

Mykinkaiser said:
@Princess Ami

A couple of things:

  1. Radios and the like don't exist so she can't have that communicator
  2. You are probably going to want to bulk her up a bit. The commander doesn't get to just sit back at a desk, they are involved with guarding.
  3. Also, as Colt said she wouldn't be all that intimidating, especially for this world. She does kinda need to be as the commander is a symbol of the Front's control of the Rear.
  4. Finally, she must be able to authorize acts of extreme cruelty towards the occupants of the Rear, and carry them out herself.
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The last part does not demand changes, she would do so right away. 


The communicator will be removed (later AS i am going to sleep soon)


Also, if i needed to change the outerior, itd destroy my whole plan, so if you say its necessary, Id have to drop out. I Gould unterstand that and wouldnt be mad. But i have a image of my Character and put effort into thinking her up. 


Also, to the second part, she was not meant to stay at a desk. She is not AS dainty AS she looks. 
 
Princess Ami said:
The last part does not demand changes, she would do so right away. 


The communicator will be removed (later AS i am going to sleep soon)


Also, if i needed to change the outerior, itd destroy my whole plan, so if you say its necessary, Id have to drop out. I Gould unterstand that and wouldnt be mad. But i have a image of my Character and put effort into thinking her up. 


Also, to the second part, she was not meant to stay at a desk. She is not AS dainty AS she looks. 
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Unfortunately I can't see her being chosen as the overall commander of the guard as she is, especially since it isn't really up to the previous guard commander. She would have had to have been picked by a group of the more powerful residents of the Front and I can't see them choosing such a dainty, and young, girl to lead their guards.

This doesn't mean that she couldn't hold a position of authority amongst the guards, but unfortunately not as the overall commander.

I do hope you stay, but if not best of luck in your future endeavors.
 
SinningSloth said:
@Colt556 I was just wondering because of my character would likely having some sort of protection and is intrigued with the clockwork dolls
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Well my character is pretty much dependent on having some kinda owner. Given the lore whoever bought her would have to be pretty damn rich though.
 
Mykinkaiser said:
@Fenris@Abberakelaran@Nyctophiliac@Rhodus@Jackaboi@Colt556@Salt Lord@Drakerus@Britt-21@GrottyStatute74@General Deth Glitch@Enkerzed@Princess Ami@Zuka@Quark@Isune@Petroshka@Maki@Sereda@LeSoraAmari@Genon@Cheryl@revior@SinningSloth


The locations tab is up and can be found under "lore" --> "the world". In the locations tab players are allowed to create their own locations, such as shops or the like, and post them there for approval.
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Yeah, sorry. I don't think I have time to add another RP to my list with school coming up. We'll still have Fairy Tail though.
 
@Mykinkaiser


Just a question on character birth and origins, for a character born in the rear car would you accept such an image for appearnce?

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I can't imagine one would be able to afford most of the funky gadgets and portable tools, so I don't know if it would look ok. I can give a more thorough description on the clothing if you want. 
 
Quark said:
@Mykinkaiser


Just a question on character birth and origins, for a character born in the rear car would you accept such an image for appearnce?

IBUKI.(Carol).full.1109567.jpg


 
 



I can't imagine one would be able to afford most of the funky gadgets and portable tools, so I don't know if it would look ok. I can give a more thorough description on the clothing if you want. 
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That'd be fine. Tbh, you don't need a steampunky pic, just can't look too modern/fantasy.
 
Mykinkaiser said:
That'd be fine. Tbh, you don't need a steampunky pic, just can't look too modern/fantasy.
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Thanks! Also, are multiple characters allowed for each user? (I want to try to make a character good for interaction but if not would adding another be allowed?)
 
@Abberakelaran


A couple things on Katarina:

  1. All Dolls without exception are made in Albia and as such that would be her country of origin (even if she was immediately sent to Volstad)
  2. I do need to know her real age alongside her apparent age
 
Mykinkaiser said:
@Abberakelaran


A couple things on Katarina:

  1. All Dolls without exception are made in Albia and as such that would be her country of origin (even if she was immediately sent to Volstad)
  2. I do need to know her real age alongside her apparent age
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  1. Alright :) I did mean for her to be made there still, she was just custom ordered by the Avrogranes to suit their purpose.
  2. That is on the list of things that are still WIP. She is probably a bit younger though, and maybe significantly younger, but not operating on a human aging schedule.
 
Abberakelaran said:
  1. Alright :) I did mean for her to be made there still, she was just custom ordered by the Avrogranes to suit their purpose.
  2. That is on the list of things that are still WIP. She is probably a bit younger though, and maybe significantly younger, but not operating on a human aging schedule.
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She'd be a maximum of 3 years old if she's designed to look human. Also, she's really quite heavy, even for a Doll, so I'd like to know why that is.
 
Mykinkaiser said:
She'd be a maximum of 3 years old if she's designed to look human. Also, she's really quite heavy, even for a Doll, so I'd like to know why that is.
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She is heavy because she is carrying a great deal of internal weaponry and metal. I am going to be making her less heavy though probably more like three hundred pounds. She is, internally, mostly composed of metal. also age, sorry about that my brain was apparently not functioning great when I read the lore. She would probably be two years old then.
 
Abberakelaran said:
She is heavy because she is carrying a great deal of internal weaponry and metal. I am going to be making her less heavy though probably more like three hundred pounds. She is, internally, mostly composed of metal. also age, sorry about that my brain was apparently not functioning great when I read the lore. She would probably be two years old then.
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oh, in that case do note that humanoid Dolls can't really carry all that much in terms of internal weaponry due to space constrictions
 
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Mykinkaiser said:
oh, in that case do note that humanoid Dolls can't really carry all that much in terms of internal weaponry due to space constrictions
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Aight I will alter that. Go for a more mobility based style. As far as internal weaponry she does not have much in the main body trunk, most of it is focused on the limbs particularly the arms. I am currently working out what precisely she has built into them, and how she functions. Tis 130 am tho so I am a little fuzzy and may wind up deleting half the changes I make
 
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