Fantasy [OOC] Riftwalkers 2033

[Agent23]

Merk: (Activities Buzz lightyear helmet.)

 

[AI10100]

Omg yes. I've always imagined that Elki sneaks a real smoke every once in a while - she'd chide her and give her the infiCig and be like "This is what I use. It doesn't rot your lung tissue," but then shares a real cigarette with her in secret sometimes.

That's what we like to heaaarrr sometimes you just gotta get a huff of that nicotine

 

[eimpress]

First off, I absolutely adore each and every one of the characters so far! I am very thankful for everyone's efforts and dedication in reading and incorporating the lore. I'll just be jotting down some comments, questions, and suggestions to ensure that everything will seamlessly fit into the plot.

1. Marielle "Ari" McCoy ( AI10100 ) - I love your attention the lore! I think it's interesting how she originated from a lost timeline. Her magic is also very unique! I think this is the first time I've encountered Typhokinesis as a magic in an RP. Although, question: for her spell "Hallucinogen", you specifically wrote "people" so I take it that this has no effect on anomalies with the right organs for inhalation? And will the people be cured of their hallucination once they step out of the smoke?
2. Rex Gideon ( Tyranasaurus Rex ) - The big guy sounds like an interesting addition to the cast. I love the Jurassic theme! His abilities sound pretty straightforward too. I'm not sure if your CS is already finish, but you might have missed giving him an age and a weakness write-up. Additionally, a quick description of what each spell does will help us envision the range of his powers.
3. Elki Viren ( DirtyBirdyAK ) - First off, thank you for putting all the effort to make your sheet look so pretty! I'm having fun clicking all the fun stuff! I also like how she came from a defunct timeline. Although a quick revision might be needed regarding her birth. A rift would have opened the moment she was born and an anomaly would've attacked. She could've somehow survived that and escaped the Infinity, but strange events would be following her throughout her life. It could be seeing "ghosts" every now and then, or minor mishaps like light bulbs exploding when Elki have an "aha!" moment. The rest works fine! Love your creativity!
4. Karin Nakamura ( Topless ) - Aww, I adore her. I don't really have much to say since her ability is pretty straightforward and everything else checks out! You're accepted!
5. Mercurius “Merk” Cyphus ( Agent23 ) - Oooh, interesting concept, love how he came from a post-apocalyptic timeline and is our local mutated cowboy. I might need a little clarification on the "Can double or triple charge spells by using additional hands" phrase though. Can you help me understand more thoroughly what you mean by that, and maybe give an example?

As requested, I skipped Dan for now Colorless Spectrum . Let me know when you want me to review her!

 

[AI10100]

Marielle "Ari" McCoy ( AI10100 ) - I love your attention the lore! I think it's interesting how she originated from a lost timeline. Her magic is also very unique! I think this is the first time I've encountered Typhokinesis as a magic in an RP. Although, question: for her spell "Hallucinogen", you specifically wrote "people" so I take it that this has no effect on anomalies with the right organs for inhalation? And will the people be cured of their hallucination once they step out of the smoke?

Hmm, yeah I didn't think about the wording properly. Would it be okay for Anomalies to be affected by it as well? I could word it where being in the vicinity of the smoke / the smoke itself having that effect instead of the inhalation being the activation. And yeah, once they're out of the smoke, the hallucination is worn off. So honestly, unless Ari continuously moves the smoked out area, just running straight ahead to get out is a prime solution LOL

 

[eimpress]

Hmm, yeah I didn't think about the wording properly. Would it be okay for Anomalies to be affected by it as well? I could word it where being in the vicinity of the smoke / the smoke itself having that effect instead of the inhalation being the activation. And yeah, once they're out of the smoke, the hallucination is worn off. So honestly, unless Ari continuously moves the smoked out area, just running straight ahead to get out is a prime solution LOL

Yes, that would work! I imagine a strong gust of wind would also counter her smoke abilities, so it's well-balanced to me.

 

[Agent23]

1. Mercurius “Merk” Cyphus ( Agent23 ) - Oooh, interesting concept, love how he came from a post-apocalyptic timeline and is our local mutated cowboy. I might need a little clarification on the "Can double or triple charge spells by using additional hands" phrase though. Can you help me understand more thoroughly what you mean by that, and maybe give an example?

absolutely.

Lets take Force Multiplier as our example.

Once per day at the start of his morning he will Make his 3 charges for the spell Putting one charge on each Hand he has.

He can Use these charges To Multiply the Force of a Punch, Blade Swing, or Bullet impact by 3x per charge.

Normally he will use One charge at a time to shoot 3x more powerful bullets or stab 3x harder allowing him to handle larger threats. But obviously thats not always enough.

Thus by Putting Two hands it applies both charges simultaneously. Equalling a 6x multiplier, twice as strong as the normal use of the spell, but twice as costly. Likewise he can drop all three charges on a single shot for a 9x multiplier to the force of the Shot/Blow/Slash.

(this same “Hand=Charge” rule applies for the “Null Tag” which Reduces oncoming energy from One Hit per charge to 0. Meaning that window wont break when it takes a bullet with one charge, two bullets with two charges, and three bullets with 3 charges.)

((Mass driver Cannot Multiply its effect. All it does is transfer momentum and speed. So if you are running forwards and he shoots mass driver at you, instead if the bullet penetrating the target or “hitting” them. It stops instantly on impact, and the person it hits much like a pool ball is now flying the same direction that the bullet was and at the same speed.))

Each of his spells Have 3 charges. So he can cast 9 spells per day max (3FM,3NT,3MD), 5 per day minimum (1x3Fm,1x3NT,3MD)

 

[eimpress]

absolutely.

Lets take Force Multiplier as our example.

Once per day at the start of his morning he will Make his 3 charges for the spell Putting one charge on each Hand he has.

He can Use these charges To Multiply the Force of a Punch, Blade Swing, or Bullet impact by 3x per charge.

Normally he will use One charge at a time to shoot 3x more powerful bullets or stab 3x harder allowing him to handle larger threats. But obviously thats not always enough.

Thus by Putting Two hands it applies both charges simultaneously. Equalling a 6x multiplier, twice as strong as the normal use of the spell, but twice as costly. Likewise he can drop all three charges on a single shot for a 9x multiplier to the force of the Shot/Blow/Slash.

(this same “Hand=Charge” rule applies for the “Null Tag” which Reduces oncoming energy from One Hit per charge to 0. Meaning that window wont break when it takes a bullet with one charge, two bullets with two charges, and three bullets with 3 charges.)

((Mass driver Cannot Multiply its effect. All it does is transfer momentum and speed. So if you are running forwards and he shoots mass driver at you, instead if the bullet penetrating the target or “hitting” them. It stops instantly on impact, and the person it hits much like a pool ball is now flying the same direction that the bullet was and at the same speed.))

Each of his spells Have 3 charges. So he can cast 9 spells per day max (3FM,3NT,3MD), 5 per day minimum (1x3Fm,1x3NT,3MD)

Thank you for the clarification. I understand it more clearly now! With that, our cowboy is officially accepted!

 

[Agent23]

Thank you for the clarification. I understand it more clearly now! With that, our cowboy is officially accepted!

Ehem…YEEHAAAWW!!!

 

[Agent23]

If its alright with yall im going to update his relationships to reflect his past with Elki DirtyBirdyAK eimpress

 

[AI10100]

Yes, that would work! I imagine a strong gust of wind would also counter her smoke abilities, so it's well-balanced to me.

Yup yup!

I was planning that there was one funny incident during a mission where it was storming heavily with heavy winds and she kind of just sat there limited to just using either her teleportation or her creation abilities. Oh, also! Would like to clarify that she mainly makes barriers / platforms for creation abilities but her barriers are weak enough to be dispersed in one solid hit.

 

[DirtyBirdyAK]

First off, I absolutely adore each and every one of the characters so far! I am very thankful for everyone's efforts and dedication in reading and incorporating the lore. I'll just be jotting down some comments, questions, and suggestions to ensure that everything will seamlessly fit into the plot.

1. Marielle "Ari" McCoy ( AI10100 ) - I love your attention the lore! I think it's interesting how she originated from a lost timeline. Her magic is also very unique! I think this is the first time I've encountered Typhokinesis as a magic in an RP. Although, question: for her spell "Hallucinogen", you specifically wrote "people" so I take it that this has no effect on anomalies with the right organs for inhalation? And will the people be cured of their hallucination once they step out of the smoke?
2. Rex Gideon ( Tyranasaurus Rex ) - The big guy sounds like an interesting addition to the cast. I love the Jurassic theme! His abilities sound pretty straightforward too. I'm not sure if your CS is already finish, but you might have missed giving him an age and a weakness write-up. Additionally, a quick description of what each spell does will help us envision the range of his powers.
3. Elki Viren ( DirtyBirdyAK ) - First off, thank you for putting all the effort to make your sheet look so pretty! I'm having fun clicking all the fun stuff! I also like how she came from a defunct timeline. Although a quick revision might be needed regarding her birth. A rift would have opened the moment she was born and an anomaly would've attacked. She could've somehow survived that and escaped the Infinity, but strange events would be following her throughout her life. It could be seeing "ghosts" every now and then, or minor mishaps like light bulbs exploding when Elki have an "aha!" moment. The rest works fine! Love your creativity!
4. Karin Nakamura ( Topless ) - Aww, I adore her. I don't really have much to say since her ability is pretty straightforward and everything else checks out! You're accepted!
5. Mercurius “Merk” Cyphus ( Agent23 ) - Oooh, interesting concept, love how he came from a post-apocalyptic timeline and is our local mutated cowboy. I might need a little clarification on the "Can double or triple charge spells by using additional hands" phrase though. Can you help me understand more thoroughly what you mean by that, and maybe give an example?

As requested, I skipped Dan for now Colorless Spectrum . Let me know when you want me to review her!

I've adjusted her story to make it more crazy that she escaped them that long and gave context - I can always make her an Infinity baby if you'd prefer! Let me know what you think~

If its alright with yall im going to update his relationships to reflect his past with Elki DirtyBirdyAK eimpress

Yes please! And feel free to DM if you want a plot more!!!

 

[DirtyBirdyAK]

If its alright with yall im going to update his relationships to reflect his past with Elki DirtyBirdyAK eimpress

Omg I just read it - my heeeeart

 

[Agent23]

Yup yup!

I was planning that there was one funny incident during a mission where it was storming heavily with heavy winds and she kind of just sat there limited to just using either her teleportation or her creation abilities. Oh, also! Would like to clarify that she mainly makes barriers / platforms for creation abilities but her barriers are weak enough to be dispersed in one solid hit.

I was looking at that construct thing and i have so many ideas. Question. Does she play cards? Spades? Poker? Blackjack? Because im in desperate need of someone to support Merks incredibly enthusiastic loosing streak.

 

[Agent23]

Omg I just read it - my heeeeart

The way i look at it. Imaging having an itch between your shoulder blades for your entire life, then you meet someone who makes it go away

 

[AI10100]

I was looking at that construct thing and i have so many ideas. Question. Does she play cards? Spades? Poker? Blackjack? Because im in desperate need of someone to support Merks incredibly enthusiastic loosing streak.

She does, actually!

Ari sometimes acts like a damn speakeasy owner ;-; she probably just carries around some normal deck of cards... and alcohol. I'm sure Merks' robotic internal organs can handle some alcohol!

 

[Agent23]

She does, actually!

Ari sometimes acts like a damn speakeasy owner ;-; she probably just carries around some normal deck of cards... and alcohol. I'm sure Merks' robotic internal organs can handle some alcohol!

It just means some extra cleaning but thats no fuss.

Now i picture that stormy situation you mentioned earlier but with cigarette smoke, shot glasses, and them chilling behind cover playing a hand while he occasionally takes potshots at something ugly.

 

[DirtyBirdyAK]

The way i look at it. Imaging having an itch between your shoulder blades for your entire life, then you meet someone who makes it go away

Aaaauuuuuughhhhhh it's fine I'm fine.

So she can't rebuild organs or correct mutations - but hear me out. She can very literally take a load off, even if it's only for a few minutes. "Hey, your oxygen levels are struggling. Hold on." And if it's something structural that she can't fix she can at least give him a few minutes of relief by bolstering with her nanites.

 

[DirtyBirdyAK]

Agent23 AI10100 I'm screaming at this imagery.

 

[AI10100]

It just means some extra cleaning but thats no fuss.

Now i picture that stormy situation you mentioned earlier but with cigarette smoke, shot glasses, and them chilling behind cover playing a hand while he occasionally takes potshots at something ugly.

While the rest of the combined platoons go out and fight the anomaly because they can't LMAOOO yes I see the vision and I approve of this vision this 100% happened

Agent23 AI10100 I'm screaming at this imagery.

ME TOO. Also will add Elki to the relationships tab in a bit as well as our boi Merk when I remember how to English properly

 

[Agent23]

Aaaauuuuuughhhhhh it's fine I'm fine.

So she can't rebuild organs or correct mutations - but hear me out. She can very literally take a load off, even if it's only for a few minutes. "Hey, your oxygen levels are struggling. Hold on." And if it's something structural that she can't fix she can at least give him a few minutes of relief by bolstering with her nanites.

That sounds like a great bonding opportunity in rp. Maybe it took time to figure out just how to pull it off an it can come up later

 

[Agent23]

ME TOO. Also will add Elki to the relationships tab in a bit as well as our boi Merk when I remember how to English properly

Likewise but afterwards im tapping out. Its almost 2am here

 

[eimpress]

Yup yup!

I was planning that there was one funny incident during a mission where it was storming heavily with heavy winds and she kind of just sat there limited to just using either her teleportation or her creation abilities. Oh, also! Would like to clarify that she mainly makes barriers / platforms for creation abilities but her barriers are weak enough to be dispersed in one solid hit.

Aha, that works for me. If she was with Edel, she would've just wrapped her in a safety gravitron bubble. With that said, Ari is officially accepted!

I've adjusted her story to make it more crazy that she escaped them that long and gave context - I can always make her an Infinity baby if you'd prefer! Let me know what you think~



Yes please! And feel free to DM if you want a plot more!!!

Thank you for the quick revision! Elki is also now accepted!

I hope everyone have fun discussing and forming relationships with others!

 

[Agent23]

I hope everyone have fun discussing and forming relationships with others!

That actually reminds me, id kinda like it if our characters have met a few times in passing, but really only know each other through their own interpretations of their respective “legends” that way we have a kind of mutual respect, that could breed slight contention and drama down the line as they warm up to one another. I can see both being fairly professional, But With Merk being more Bendy on rules and protocols i could see that grating on her, especially since he definitely knows better and just goes where his own personal winds blow.

 

[eimpress]

That actually reminds me, id kinda like it if our characters have met a few times in passing, but really only know each other through their own interpretations of their respective “legends” that way we have a kind of mutual respect, that could breed slight contention and drama down the line as they warm up to one another. I can see both being fairly professional, But With Merk being more Bendy on rules and protocols i could see that grating on her, especially since he definitely knows better and just goes where his own personal winds blow.

Exactly what I was thinking while I was reading Merk's sheet! I noticed a lot of similarities between them, especially with how they view the Infinity in such a positive light. I am certain that Edel has a lot of respect for Merk and does not care about his eccentricities at all. As long as he's efficient and loyal then he's good in her books. I can see that she will be disappointed when she learns that Merk is not as goody-two-shoes as she thinks he is.
She is very excited (and somewhat pressured) to lead a legend like him.

 

[eimpress]

DirtyBirdyAK I wanted to discuss Edel and Elki's relationship with you if possible. I was thinking that given Elki's importance to the organization as one of its best (and remaining) Doctors, Edel was told to keep a close eye on her and keep her safety a priority. Needless to say, Edel might become a pain in the bum for Elki especially when she wants to conduct secret projects.

Also can you tell me more about Project Zeta and the other projects that Elki has been working on? I need to measure how important she is in the eyes of the Council. Feel free to send me a private message instead if you'd like to keep some things confidential.