TripTripleTimes
Tripping Time
So, there are things that bothers me when I am writing. This is to say about RPing and English in general.
1) When I respond to a person's rp, is it better to write my character reacting to the other or should I write the character's verbal responce first? Or does it not matter how I write my post for someone?
2) This is for English in general. When my character is talking, I usually write like
" -character talks-" Character says, or Describes an action that may take couple of sentences.
and
" -character talks-" Character says, or Describes an action that may take couple of sentences. "-lets character says something, udually final thought."
But is it ok to have a dialoge, description, and then dialoge with a short action cutting between the dialoge? Like for an example,
"I already told you," Kris says to the figure in white. The man walks up to the shadow, each steps trailing closer to misery. He stands in front of the person. "We are not," a hand lifts to the person's shoulder, "friends." He shoves his friend out of the window.
Random example, I know, but the dialoge. Can I do that? Of course the talking can be a little more longer, but oh man, writing is hard sometimes.
I tried using novels as examples, but they're not really much help sometimes, especially for rping. So yeah
3) Oh, and how do I handle a responce where their character talks about one subject and couple of paragraph down their post, the character is talking about another subject and a couple minutes passed between the two chat? Do people just responce to the last talking or do people write to catch up with the rp partner?
1) When I respond to a person's rp, is it better to write my character reacting to the other or should I write the character's verbal responce first? Or does it not matter how I write my post for someone?
2) This is for English in general. When my character is talking, I usually write like
" -character talks-" Character says, or Describes an action that may take couple of sentences.
and
" -character talks-" Character says, or Describes an action that may take couple of sentences. "-lets character says something, udually final thought."
But is it ok to have a dialoge, description, and then dialoge with a short action cutting between the dialoge? Like for an example,
"I already told you," Kris says to the figure in white. The man walks up to the shadow, each steps trailing closer to misery. He stands in front of the person. "We are not," a hand lifts to the person's shoulder, "friends." He shoves his friend out of the window.
Random example, I know, but the dialoge. Can I do that? Of course the talking can be a little more longer, but oh man, writing is hard sometimes.
I tried using novels as examples, but they're not really much help sometimes, especially for rping. So yeah
3) Oh, and how do I handle a responce where their character talks about one subject and couple of paragraph down their post, the character is talking about another subject and a couple minutes passed between the two chat? Do people just responce to the last talking or do people write to catch up with the rp partner?