Lenchan
In verba
I realize I've completely ignored the ooc chat. Sorry guys =_='''' I will catch up and keep up from here.
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Fantasy The Whisper of Death
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Unknown1
The evil one
Hi lenchan.. I just want to let you all know, i wont be able to respond until thursday night.
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A.I.S.H.A.
Artificial Integrated Social Human Algorithm
Alright so who here that plays League read the Kindred short story?
Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
That really long story of it? Yea.
A.I.S.H.A.
Artificial Integrated Social Human Algorithm
That was a cool thing to read. I'm so psyched for it. Wanna play it so bad...
Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
Yea, I've been waiting for her for awhile, and I've already come to an idea of how I'm going to build her. Because I've read up on all of her abilities and everything and I think the best build path for her is going to be; Sated Devour (Thinking Blue smite), Blade of the Ruined King, Runann's Hurricane, Berserker's Greaves, GA, and then the last item depending on how squishy or tanky the enemy team is: Yuumuu's Ghost Blade If they're squishy, And if they're tanky; Last Whisper.
And sure you might be thinking, "Hey! There's no real damage items here!", Refer to her abilities she is going to be the only League champ that stacks basic attack power. So aa build based on attack speed and then getting that attack damage from the abilities will be what makes her op as crap.
I just all-in-all can't wait for her to come out.
And sure you might be thinking, "Hey! There's no real damage items here!", Refer to her abilities she is going to be the only League champ that stacks basic attack power. So aa build based on attack speed and then getting that attack damage from the abilities will be what makes her op as crap.
I just all-in-all can't wait for her to come out.
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A.I.S.H.A.
Artificial Integrated Social Human Algorithm
Maybe black cleaver?
Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
I guess you could build that as well to make yourself a little tankier and go for helping the rest of your team shred, but if you were to go through yolo que/solo que it'd probably be better for making yourself a huge power and then the later the game gets the more potential you have for 1v5ing and just winning the game.
Now ranked 5v5 teams? Yea, I'd likely go for the Black Cleaver, because that's a very solid choice.
btw what's your summoner name?
@TheWingedCrusader
Now ranked 5v5 teams? Yea, I'd likely go for the Black Cleaver, because that's a very solid choice.
btw what's your summoner name?
@TheWingedCrusader
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theunderwolf
Kangaroo Paladin of Space
theunderwolf6 if anyone wants to play smite some time
A.I.S.H.A.
Artificial Integrated Social Human Algorithm
Don't have space on my computer for other games....
^^^ that's my excuse for "I'm too loyal to league to play other mobas"
^^^ that's my excuse for "I'm too loyal to league to play other mobas"
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Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
Amen, Sir! You just spoke a quote of my entire existence! x'D Hahaha
theunderwolf
Kangaroo Paladin of Space
yeah yeah I'm theunderwolf on league too but hardly ever play
A.I.S.H.A.
Artificial Integrated Social Human Algorithm
[QUOTE="Shade Knight]Amen, Sir! You just spoke a quote of my entire existence! x'D Hahaha
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Lol XDDD
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Lol XDDD
Unknown1
The evil one
It might just be me, but did anyone else feel reminded of organization 13 in that room? xD
Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
Dibs on Roxas! And I will fight you all irl to the death for it!
Don't push me, He is mine!
Don't push me, He is mine!
Ryik
An Immaterial Phantasm Adrift Amidst Annihilation
Just wait until I show a meeting with Trim's "employers".
I'm wondering whether I should just explain every single one of them at once or leave who they are, what they look like, etc. incredibly vague until otherwise necessary.
I'm wondering whether I should just explain every single one of them at once or leave who they are, what they look like, etc. incredibly vague until otherwise necessary.
There will be 29 of them. Think of it as organization 29 with 12 extra Xions.
Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
I never loved them, cried over them! So they can not be Xions! x'(
Shade Knight
Shadow of a Knight
btw @Aquafan spirit guy is @theunderwolf x'D
Ryik
An Immaterial Phantasm Adrift Amidst Annihilation
All thoughts- no quotation marks.
Trim is very quiet.
Trim is very quiet.
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jewelboy
Wielder of the Scarred Keyblade
Even still, you should make it a bit easier and clearer to read. You have thoughts kind of conjoined together making it confusing for people like Antari and I to understand.
If you have specific thoughts, you could put them in italics or quoted with phrases like "I thought" or "she pondered".
We are also a bit confused cause you are using a third person self referal view, so we can't tell if you are thinking of another character when you say things like, "Are you certain you want to give away your guilt a little more?" See you say this and we can't tell if you are referring to Antari or yourself especially if this is all thought based and you refer to yourself throughout the piece. Try first person; easier to use and understand, and if you use third, use your name when talking about yourself.
Just a couple of tips to help make it easier for readers/other players enjoy and not get lost.
If you have specific thoughts, you could put them in italics or quoted with phrases like "I thought" or "she pondered".
We are also a bit confused cause you are using a third person self referal view, so we can't tell if you are thinking of another character when you say things like, "Are you certain you want to give away your guilt a little more?" See you say this and we can't tell if you are referring to Antari or yourself especially if this is all thought based and you refer to yourself throughout the piece. Try first person; easier to use and understand, and if you use third, use your name when talking about yourself.
Just a couple of tips to help make it easier for readers/other players enjoy and not get lost.
Lenchan
In verba
Hey gang! As I informed Wing, I'm retiring Ekko from the RP, at least for a little while. I'll still be lurkin'(>>) ('OoO')
Ryik
An Immaterial Phantasm Adrift Amidst Annihilation
2nd person narrative (asserting that the audience is your character, e.g. "You pick up the ball and toss it") in which the characters thoughts and narration blend pretty fluidly. Just about any statement that isn't in quotations or a direct narration of an action can be posited as thought, and it should usually be clear otherwise.
Narrative
It's what I'm used to and my preferred style of writing. I can try third person for a while if you insist, but I can't say I can do it unscathed.
, etc. It's habitual at this point.
ThoughtRyik said:
Narrative
Switching to 2nd person mid-writing subconsciously and having to go back and fix it, trying to figure out a way to say something in 3rd person that doesn't sound awkward and wishing I could fall back on 2nd person because
Antari said:
To be clear, "guilt" was not meant to refer to foreknowledge of any particular action that already took place but how his visible tenseness implied he had ulterior motives.Ryik said:
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Unknown1
The evil one
A.I.S.H.A.
Artificial Integrated Social Human Algorithm
If it's your preferred writing style it's ok, just try to make it as easy as possible to read for others so that there isn't confusion when they try to respond to your characterRyik said:
