Slit

Veltsu VI

Shadowfire
Name: Mina Hilt


Age: 18


Gender: Female


Height:  5'9


Weight:155


Appearance: civil


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Personality: Submissive killer. Does whatever her master orders her to do.


Loves fast cars and loud music.


No remorse. 


Don't have really own choises when killing, if her master hasn't specified targets she kills all who comes her way.


She is sadistic and is jealous to other girls whit King especially to Snipe, King's first girl.


(damn it's hard when you make totally new character, it's like writing my own pros)


Alias: Slit


Equipment/Gadgets/Implants/Etc: custom painted P90


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 2xCombat knife


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Abilities/Skills: medium and close range specialist: Makes every bullet count from her P90 and master whit her knife.


Speed driver: Drives whit car fast as possible.


Weaknesses: Gets exhausted fast if runs long.


If she has specified to kill only certain peoples, doesn't care anyone else. (Makes possible that don't shoot back to polices and civilians if target is only mafia)


No far range weapons; if there is snipers she can't shoot back.


Some weird choise her belly is unarmored.


Bio: Mina was born as gang leader's daughter, where she learned to shoot and use knives. When she was 16, man calling himself as King first tried talk her father knee to him, but as her father said no he talked over leader's daughter who had not let in any heist. After meeting Mina walked to her father and slit his throat. After that she gived leadership to King whit her body. King then named her as Slit.


Occupation: King's killing machine.


Extra: @Broncos


@YoungX
 
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Name: Mina Hilt


[COLOR= rgb(39, 42, 52)]Age: 18[/COLOR]


Gender: Female


Height:  5'9


Weight:155


Appearance: View attachment 243406


Personality: Submissive killer. Does whatever her master orders her to do. Loves fast cars and loud music. No remorse (What kind of personality is this? This makes nearly no sense for an actual human being. You may want to change it, this is way too vague.)
 


Alias: Slit


Equipment/Gadgets/Implants/Etc: custom painted P90 (Okay, I admit I like the colors.)


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 2xCombat knife


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Abilities/Skills: medium and close range specialist: Makes every bullet count from her P90 and master whit her knife.


Speed driver: Drives whit car fast as possible.


Weaknesses: No remorse.


Don't have really own choises when killing, if her master hasn't specified targets she kills all who comes her way. (These aren't real weaknesses. In fact, no remorse could be a strength if it comes down to it. Please write a real exploitable weakness, because right now I'm getting at it she's nearly perfect in every way.)


Bio: 


Occupation: King's lover/killing machine.


Extra: @Broncos


@YoungX



I left notes in red.
 
I will edit personality when i have get in her head and translated.
 
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You're approved for now then. I 

I just skip all pointing out that she's human and can be killed with bullets and knives by to way. It's always feels so stupid when clearly character isn't robot... Not so sure from your Allison. Is she human? 
 
I just skip all pointing out that she's human and can be killed with bullets and knives by to way. It's always feels so stupid when clearly character isn't robot... Not so sure from your Allison. Is she human? 



Lol you really hate her don't you. Is she human, or is she a monster? The world may never know.
 
Yeah, that is to help against snapping neck or back don't stop getting bruises or wounds. 



She still has bruises of course. But then again that's pretty much the joke. If Pandora, a physically normal human, only survived with a cut on her forehead, Alison only got a few bruises. But she isn't a sissy and going to whine about bruises.
 

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