Tohoak
I am the flame in the night, darkness beware.
Hey! We have this on Nanowrimo so I thought I would bribg it over here! Post the last thing(or just somthing) you wrote. It can be a a couple lines or a paragraph, but try to keep it decently short. The next person that post has to say something(hopefully helpful or encourging) about your peice. Then they put their peice. Got it?
I'll start.
Mine:
Kane took a large bite out of his apple. Chewing with a closed mouth, for the sake of decency, he studied Hunter's face.
"Where is Tohoak?" Hunter asked. There was no politeness about his asking. It sounded more like an accusation. Kane shrugged and took another bite from the apple. After swallowing he spoke.
"How should I know? Last time I saw the girl was when I arrived at your camp," he said regarding his apple. It was now only the core; nothing tasteful. He sighed and tossed the core toward Hunter who sidestepped it.
"Your son is missing as well," Hunter said coolly.
I'll start.
Mine:
Kane took a large bite out of his apple. Chewing with a closed mouth, for the sake of decency, he studied Hunter's face.
"Where is Tohoak?" Hunter asked. There was no politeness about his asking. It sounded more like an accusation. Kane shrugged and took another bite from the apple. After swallowing he spoke.
"How should I know? Last time I saw the girl was when I arrived at your camp," he said regarding his apple. It was now only the core; nothing tasteful. He sighed and tossed the core toward Hunter who sidestepped it.
"Your son is missing as well," Hunter said coolly.