CoolGuy
Half decent.
For some reason, John felt like there were hijinks going on across the phone line. As if Penelope were being tortured but couldn't say anything. He leaned on his wall, and then stood up straight again. A few moments had passed and he hadn't said anything. He coughed, and thought of what to say.
"Yes! I did. I was interested in that. If you're offering, I'd be glad to come over. I've read a few pages of my high school biology textbook, before deciding I needed something even below that. Then, I looked up middle school biology textbooks, which was more my speed." He wanted to confirm that she didn't lie about being the creator of the cure. Technically, even this couldn't prove it, but he'd say it was beyond a reasonable doubt, in the wise words of the American court system.
"Where do-" wait a minute. Her phone number had a 206 area code. She lived in the same city as him. That's the entire reason he picked up the phone. "-uh, where do you live?" he asked anyway. He'd seem creepy if he knew that. "I just need to know if I'll have to book another flight," he said, even though he knew he wouldn't. Unless she were doing something strange and techy he could never hope to understand.
"Yes! I did. I was interested in that. If you're offering, I'd be glad to come over. I've read a few pages of my high school biology textbook, before deciding I needed something even below that. Then, I looked up middle school biology textbooks, which was more my speed." He wanted to confirm that she didn't lie about being the creator of the cure. Technically, even this couldn't prove it, but he'd say it was beyond a reasonable doubt, in the wise words of the American court system.
"Where do-" wait a minute. Her phone number had a 206 area code. She lived in the same city as him. That's the entire reason he picked up the phone. "-uh, where do you live?" he asked anyway. He'd seem creepy if he knew that. "I just need to know if I'll have to book another flight," he said, even though he knew he wouldn't. Unless she were doing something strange and techy he could never hope to understand.