[Legends of the Modern Age (Scion)] [Legends of the Modern Age (Scion)] Grady O'Maley, Scion of Tyr




  • Name: Grady O'Malley


    Divine Parent: Tyr


    Parent's Pantheon: Aesir


    Calling: SWAT Officer


    Nature: Gallant


    Favored Epic Attributes: Intelligence, Strength


    Favored Abilities: Athletics, Command, Fortitude, Integrity, Investigation, Melee


    Favored Purviews: War, Justice, Guardian


    Physical Description: An Irishman with the sure signs of aging in his tanned, rough looking freckled skin. He has a fairly muscular body though a bit of a beer belly that sticks out. He has dark red hair grown out to medium length and kept in a short ponytail with a scruffy beard on his face to match. When off duty he likes to wear layers with a heavy button up shirt under a sweater under a coat or jacket. He has a few tattoos of Norse runes on his body including uruz, eihwaz, algiz and two teiwaz inked on the back of each hand.


    Age: 35


    Height: 6"4'


    Weight: 255 lbs.


    Background: Born in the heartland of Ireland to a kind but stern mother, Grady spent much of his childhood wasting his time outside until his mother moved the two of them to the United States where they spent a few sparse years in New York state before finding much more success in Chicago. Entering grade school with such a different appearance and accent, it didn't take long for bullies to start picking on the youth and just as quickly stop as he wasn't above picking a fight over these sorts of things, even going out of his way to help others being harassed. This trend continued on through middle school and high school until he graduated with quite a delinquent record despite never believing his actions were unjustified. This drive led him to pursue a profession in criminal justice though that same zeal that caused so much violence before made it so many schools refused to look past his records before rejecting him. He did manage to get into one and despite the expectations of professors and even his own mother he got through with flying colors and joined the Chicago Police Department. A few years of duty caught the attention of the local SWAT and a few months of training forged him into one of their members. It was shortly after joining their ranks that a strange man who seemed to be missing a hand approached him and told Grady of not only his lineage but of the much larger world that lay out there, both good and bad. While not officially off the force, much more of his time is spent fighting his own battles with the Titanspawn and taking care of any other problem of this nature he comes across.


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I noticed that your Legend points are too high. At Legend of 3, you only have 9 points, as it is 3x3, then next you'll have 4x4=16. And your movement is off; with your Dex at 4 and a dot of Epic Dex, you'll have more than a move of 2.
 
<nods> not a problem. Just trying to be helpful.
 
You should have 3 favoured abilities and purviews (2 from your parent and one you choose), not two. You have the same experience to spend as the others and you'll be in the Vegas group
 
[QUOTE="Red Shadow Claws]Your Health levels are off, there's no -3 Health Level.
Also, your Legend points are 9, and not 12.

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I realize the Legend now but are you sure about that first thing? It's copy/pasted from the character app and several other accepted people have exactly what mine says.
 
[QUOTE="Red Shadow Claws]Your Health levels are off, there's no -3 Health Level.
Also, your Legend points are 9, and not 12.

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I realize the Legend now but are you sure about that first thing? It's copy/pasted from the character app and several other accepted people have exactly what mine says.


Edit: Ugh. Double post.
 
Everyone starts with a -0, -1, -1, -2, -2, -4, Inc, and a number of dying health levels equal to your Stamina. if you have Epic Stamina it can change this, but you do not currently have Epic Stamina.
 

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