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PoeticMind

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Hi there,

I'm new to rp and i've written a scenario for a group session.

English is not my main languange plus i've never written a rp scenario before and i wondered if someone could check it out for me.

Wastelands

2030:
World war III has at last begun. The world was in terror.
At first it seemed like nothing was going to happen, it was awfully quite..

All of a sudden.. the air sirens started, the long howling sound of the air horns echoes through the city’s world wide. Is this it? Is nuclear war gonna end mandkind?

Most country’s had prepared for a disaster like this and had evacuation plans ready for the civillians, but there is not much time.

Within 40 minutes all nuclear bombs were dropped and the world changed forever.


2037:

Only about 20% of humankind is left. The world has changed dramaticlly..
The survivers are scattered around the globe most of them hidden in underground bunkers and now after 7 years humans has started to roam the world again.

Everything looks dead, strange creatures now roam the world, humans fight over every bit of recourse there is.

This world almost ended bacause of humangreed and already humanity starts to divide themselfes again, these are difficult times and everybody is living for their own survival.

Gangs has started to arise.. world war III has never ended.
Humans are more divided then ever, what will happen to mankind?
Are we going to bring ourselfes to extinction or will there be a day when were gonna work together and rebuild this world, time will tell.

Current setting:

16th of August - 2037
LA, California (America)


You were exploring Los Angeles but the wheater has turned on you, a big storm is coming up and you find shelter in a abonded mall.

Introduce yourself: What are you thinking, what do you do?









Choose 3 out of 10 items for your inventory.

Canned food
Purified water
Knife
Bag
Coly M1911 (7 Bullets)
Saw
Hammer
Scanner (helps you detect objects or nearby life forms)
Alcohol
Bandage

Character Sheet


Name:
Gender:
Age:
Appearence:

Bio:
Strongpoint:
Flaws:



Stats (All stats go up to 10, you can spend a total of 20 points)
STRENGHT: 2
DEXTERITY: 2
INTELLIGENCE: 4
WISDOM: 6
CHARISMA: 3
STAMINA: 3


Skills (You can spend a total of 25 lvl points, max lvl is 20)
Chances of succes will be determined by calculating your stats together with your skills.

Crafting lvl
Parkour lvl
Fighting lvl
Scavaging lvl
Shooting lvl
Cooking lvl
Medicine & Bandage lvl
Sneaking lvl

 
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