Characters and Such. New Character: Jooyoung Shin (FEEDBACK NEEDED)

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Name: Samuel Kim


Korean Name (Last Name First): Kim Sook Hyun


Age:
Thirty-two


Gender: Male


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5' 8"


Weight: 167 lbs


Occupation: Sushi Chef





  • Sam has black, soot colored eyes. Eyes that look dirty and unappealing. His eye lids are simple mono-lids, nothing else. His straight and uncured brows are hidden by his hair most of the time. Sam is the typical Korean man if you met him. However, he is from North Korea instead of South. Sam is more than average in height especially after living in North Korea. His long body makes his figure look slender and frail even though he can take punches to the gut and can go through starvation.





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Samuel is supposed to be known as what he is now. When/If he is used, his story will develop more. I'd rather keep his character into making his life have multiple possibilities instead of him looping over again.


I've already posted him but I'm deleting that thread so I can just post my characters all in the same thread. Feel free to criticize. The only thing I would do when reading your criticism is to either clear what is unclear to you or thank you for the criticism.



Samuel is available to be used in a role-play.



 
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Story: Although the history for Sam is nice, there are some things I'd like to point out if I may


1) Sam is from North Korea. From what I saw there was nothing stating him to be a part of a family that had any governmental ties or something else that would lead to his being able to join in with the government. Personally, I doubt that North K.'s government would allow just any commoner to join in with them unless that person were chosen to go to war as a disposable. So, I think that you should give Samuel a family history that was involved with the N. Korean government so that it adds up a little easier in terms of being more realistic.


2) Samuel had a wife. I'm just wondering how he ended up with her. Did he marry her because he loved her or was is because she had money/ was involved with the government through family (if that is the case then using this instead of having Sam's family being involved with the government would work too). But how did she end up meeting him and whatnot if she is involved with the government and thus probably a little more well off than Sam? I also think you should ask yourself why does he need a wife? What significance does she honestly bring and is there a better approach that could lead to the same outcome? There are a lot of available questions and scenarios and I think looking deeper into this could help build Sam's personality and backstory too.


3) Once again, Samuel is from N.K. The environment is not so nice sue to lack of care the government offers to its people. Thus, I really think this should be a huge factor in Sam's personality, reasoning, thoughts, etc. He grew up there since he was a child so maybe make him more selfish or a trickster if he was the type to try and steal any food or money he could find. This could even give him the extreme want to be better and grow beyond what he felt was possible since he's in the 'land of opportunity'; it could lead him to being more brutal or deceitful so he can get things he's never had the opportunity to have and loathe people who try and stop him since he'd been held back since his birth in N.K. He could also become the type that is a push-over and only trying to make their own way, but the more they're pushed the more dangerous they become as well due to pent up anger.


4) You said Sam likes to help women and children because of his dead wife right? Well, being in a country with an extreme amount of poverty and thus selfish people, maybe his idea of 'being kind' is not what the average person would consider to be 'kind'. Perhaps he thinks stealing an apple/orange visibly from a store and giving it to a kid who's saying they're hungry is kind while others find him to be ridiculous. Or maybe he takes his kindness too far and ends up harming others for the sake of someone else because he thinks it's kind.


5) Sam's wife is dead. He was really affected by it. I think that maybe certain women of similar voice, appearance or personality should trigger a PTSD since seeing her die was a major impact. It culd also lead him to draw away from females just so he won't have to experience that/ maybe he blames himself for her death and feels that women should avoid him so they don't get hurt either.


6) Samuel worked in the government. There are a lot of people and a lot of faces, but anyone who was significant he should probably be able to remember. Considering he was brainwashed, perhaps people who remind him of those he used to hunt down for N.K cause him PTSD episode or he ends up running after them to chase them down and 'complete his mission'.


7) Samuel was brainwashed. Being brainwashed is not going to disappear over a year or two; in the case f samuel I think that since he didn't know anything else except N.K. and its habits that they should carry over into his life in America. As of now he doesn't know anything expcept that of North Korea so he honestly wouldn't know that he was brainwashed, he would only know what he was told to believe. I think this is incredibly important with your character so I think you should fix it so that there is a way for him to see and understand that what he was brainwashed to believe is wrong (a very complex and hard task to do that wont ever be 100% effective for him) or change it from being brainwahsed to just feeling the absolute need to complete his tasks to get out of N.K. so he was willing to do about anything. If you decide to keep him brainwashed, than I suggest choosing specifics of what the brainwashing consisted of and how it'd affect his view on everything.


Im too tired in the brain to continue but hope this helps :)
 
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Thank you for the criticism! I will take that all into consideration, add that in, etc. Few things I'd like to clarify.


1) In N.K. you don't really need to have any family ties. It's kind of like being picked into the military, except secretly and you either get picked or you pay to become an agent. Samuel paid because it was a way for freedom. There really is no family history because they aren't important, they were like strangers and it was a 'every man for themselves' mentality.


2) I'll add this but he met her when she was coming back to N.K. she wasn't necessarily an agent but she paid a ton of money to a trusted doctor break out of N.K. and head to S.K! So they finally caught her and brought her back, that's how they met. He married her because he loved her and wanted both of them to be free.


3) At first, Samuel was like that but from the lack of care from his own family, he started to change his mind. Also after meeting his wife, all the things she had told him really changed his thinking. Yes, he'd steal but that was for survival mainly. He became a really brutal person when he became the double agent and started hunting down people.


4) I really agree with you on that one about stealing something so small. However, not the last part though. That's just not him.


5) I kind of talked about this in his personality but didn't go into depth but yea pretty much. I agree with you on that. He completely blames himself. He doesn't wish women would avoid him but he would avoid them. He wouldn't avoid them if they were in trouble though.


6) I understand what you mean but I'm treating Sam like a war veteran where he would really have terrifying memories, visions, etc about what happened in the past. I think if he saw someone that was apart of the mission he once had, he would remember killing them and it would just cause him to break down. Because he was brainwashed to do that. If he had a choice, he would never kill anyone. Remember, him killing everyone led to Hye-Mi's death, well that is what Samuel thinks.


7) You're right, Samuel was brainwashed. (My fault for lack of explanation) His wife had started to unwind him. Especially when he traveled to S.K. himself, he saw how it was night and day in S.K. compared to N.K. He was outraged about how much N.K's Gov. lied to him saying that nothing was better than N.K. itself. Once he met his wife at the age of seventeen. He was with her six years and she told him everything. Then he left her quiet some time.. Then she died and he was in prison for another five years. While being there, he pictured more freedom, talking to inmates, etc. I agree with you for the "absolute need to complete his tasks to get out of N.K. so he was willing to do about anything," part of what you said. However, his wife changed most of it. I should definitely change that part and make it more clearer :o


Anyway, hoped this cleared some of it up, thank you again! :)
 
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Name: Ian Park


Korean Name (Last Name First): Park Gi Joon


Age:
Twenty-six


Gender: Male


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5' 9"


Weight: 152 lbs


Occupation: Pottery Artist/ Killer/ Bounty Hunter





  • Ian Park has brown, russet colored eyes. An eye color like a red apple with reddish-brown skin while having mono-lids. His shiny hair is raven black, in the light it almost looks like you could see blue highlights in his black hair. His eyebrows are groomed that are straight with a very small arch at the end. Seeing Ian from far away is a man who is coltish, strapping and round-shouldered. His legs are thin like a woman's but very strong. He is the normal height for an average Korean man. Ian is from South Korea.








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Ian is supposed to be known as what he is now. When/If he is used, his story and life will develop more. I'd rather keep his character into making his life have multiple possibilities instead of him looping over again.


Ian is available to be used in a role-play but it really depends on the role-play.



All criticism is welcome.



His brother will be posted soon.



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Name: Luke Park


Korean Name (Last Name First): Park Ki Hoon


Age:
Twenty-six


Gender: Male


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5'8"


Weight: 156 lbs


Occupation: Power Plant Worker/ Takes Care of Boss' Dirty Work





  • Luke Park has black, velvety colored eyes. His eyes so soft that they don't look black, more like a pale and grayish black instead of the harsh tone itself while having mono-lids, making his eyes so plain looking. His fluffy and vivacious hair is tinted sable brown, like a wooly mammoth having soft dark fur. His eyebrows are more curved that are thick. From a distance, Luke is a solid and stocky man. His legs are wider than Ian's and strong. He is an average Korean man from South Korea.





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Luke is supposed to be known as what he is now. When/If he is used, his story and life will develop more. I'd rather keep his character into making his life have multiple possibilities instead of him looping over again. He is most likely to be used in the same role-play as his brother but it all depends really.



Luke is available to be used in a role-play but it really depends on the role-play.


All criticism is welcome.


Girls will start to be posted soon.



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Name: Hana Ju (Pronounce her name as in Ha for laughter and Na for another form of saying no.)


Korean Name (Last Name First): Ju Haneul


Age:
Twenty-three


Gender: Female


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5'5"


Weight: 122 lbs


Occupation: Doctor





  • Hana Ju has brown, doe-eyed colored eyes. They look so innocent like a female deer with plain mono-lids. Her thin, chestnut brown hair is short enough to be put up in a small ponytail with her bangs almost covering her eyes. Her eyebrows are very thin and lighter than her hair, that curves slightly but it mostly straight. From afar, Hana is slight and gangly. She looks like a teenager more than adult but is just an average Korean woman.








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This is the first girl I made. It was very difficult for me to make her for various reasons. One was including her backstory. I took a lot of details from a movie based on true events so it was very hard for me to make Hana. However, I'm very happy about the outcome because Hana is a great character.


Hana is available for a role-play but it basically depends on what role-play it is which will probably be a very dramatic one.



. . . I could almost see her being in a role-play with Ian.. Hm, maybe they could be a couple . . .



All criticism is welcome.



More characters will be on the way.







 

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Name: Jenny Song


Korean Name (Last Name First): Song Ju-Ni


Age:
Twenty-one


Gender: Female


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5' 4"


Weight: 128 lbs


Occupation: Produce Seller/ Soon to be shop owner





  • Jenny Song has rich black, ebony colored eyes with plain mono-lids that compliment her eyes and facial features. Her shoulder length hair is a deep mahogany brown color with red tints if you catch it in the right light. Her eyebrows are more round and fade in the beginning, only to grow darker towards the end of the eyebrow. Looking at Jenny's body type can be very deceiving. She may look very slight and awkward looking but really she is coltish-like. She can run very fast and is a bit stronger than how she looks. Overall, she's is a deceiving Korean woman but is average.





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Jenny is available to be role-played with, it can be mostly any role-play and she can be role-play with her sister or the two brothers or any other character I made. So she is very open is any type of role-play except fantasy, futuristic, or medieval ones.



All criticism is welcome~



Her sister will be posted soon. Now we have two pairs of siblings.




 

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Name: Mia Song


Korean Name (Last Name First): Song Yu-Ni


Age:
Eight-teen


Gender: Female


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5' 3"


Weight: 125 lbs


Occupation: N/A/ Soon to be in College





  • Mia Song has dirty, small, brown colored eyes with simple mono-lids that always are covered in black eyeliner. Her bra strap-length hair is a burnt umber color. Her eyebrows are hidden behind her thick, long bangs. Looking at Mia from afar, you can see that she is very feeble and fragile looking. She has long legs but isn't built at all. Unlike her sister, she is very weak. She is an average Korean woman who is weak.








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Mia is available to be role-played with, it can be mostly any role-play and she would most likely will be role-played with her sister or any other characters I have made. She is very open to any type of role-play except fantasy, futuristic, or medieval ones.


All criticism is welcomed and supported~



The two pairs of siblings are complete now. It should be a pattern from boy to girl, etc.







 

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Name: John Hyeon


Korean Name
(Last Name First): Hyeon Yejoon


Age: Thirty


Gender: Male


Sexuality: Straight


Height: 5'7"


Weight: 157 lbs


Occupation: Gambler/Throws Sports Games





  • John has a mixture of a velvety brown and black as his eye color. They are so dark that you would think they look like a muted black but it has a mix of brown in it as well. His eyes are very muted and have more of a soft look to them that compliments his hooded eyelids. His triangle and some-what bushy brows aren't usually seen at the same time. He always has his hair covering one eyebrow than the other. His soft black hair touches lightly on his shoulder. It was long enough to put in a small ponytail. For his bangs, John always shifts them to one side of his forehead. From a distance, John is a lean and trim man. He stands with pride and looks like he can withstand in a fight but definitely can't take on more than two guys at once. John is a man that looks neat and clean even when his hair may be messy or he has a five o'clock shadow coming. He's an average Korean man.








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John is supposed to be known as what he is now. When/If he is used, his story and life will develop more. I'd rather keep his character into making his life have multiple possibilities instead of him looping over again.


John is available to be used in any kind of role-play.



All criticism is welcome. Post here or PM me please.







 

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Name: Jane Kwon


Korean Name(Last Name First): Kwon Jaen


Age:
Thirty-One


Gender: Female


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5'6"


Weight: 132 lbs


Occupation: Accountant





  • Jane has a mixture of black and navy blue eyes. They look like the night sky when you gaze into them, so dark that you think you see a hint of blue in them when the light hits it just right. Her mono-lids easily compliment her dark eyes, especially when she wears makeup. It's so easy to see. Jane has thick, ash brown hair that stops a little over her shoulder. Her eyebrows have a very small arch at the end and are usually groomed. From a distance, she is an up-standing woman who also has long legs.





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Jane is supposed to be know as what she is now. When/If she is used in role-plays, her story/life will develop more. I'd rather keep her character into making her life having multiple possibilities instead of her looping over and over again.


Jane is available for a more realistic role-play.



Two more characters will be posted and then I will announce a surprise.
:)


All criticism is welcome via PM or here.







 

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Name: Jooyoung Shin


Korean Name
(Last Name First): Shin Jooyoung


Age:
Twenty-two


Gender: Male


Sexuality: Bisexual


Height: 5'8"


Weight: 132 lbs


Occupation: Dancer (Ballet/Jazz/Hip-Hop)





  • Jooyoung has bleak, inky longish hair. His hair is unkept and usually put into a bun. His almond shaped eyes are colored milk chocolate but give the effect of gunmetal eyes. Looking at them can make him seem like a warm person, however looking at it in a different perspective can make him seem emotionless. His eyebrows are a bit unkempt but they look clean. They're straight and shaped like a triangle. Looking at him from afar, he's a slender and muscular man.








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Jooyoung is supposed to be known as what he is now. When/If he is used in role-plays, his story/life will develop more. I'd rather keep his character into making his life having multiple possibilities instead of it looping over and over again.


Jooyoung is available for a more realistic role-play. (Pm me if interested).



One more character will be posted and then I will have a surprise (: Sorry for such a long wait. School & stuff
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All criticism is welcome via PM or here.







 

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Name: Samuel Kim


Korean Name (Last Name First): Kim Sook Hyun


Age:
Thirty-two


Gender: Male


Sexuality: Heterosexual


Height: 5' 8"


Weight: 167 lbs


Occupation: Sushi Chef





  • Sam has black, soot colored eyes. Eyes that look dirty and unappealing. His eye lids are simple mono-lids, nothing else. His straight and uncured brows are hidden by his hair most of the time. Sam is the typical Korean man if you met him. However, he is from North Korea instead of South. Sam is more than average in height especially after living in North Korea. His long body makes his figure look slender and frail even though he can take punches to the gut and can go through starvation.





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Samuel is supposed to be known as what he is now. When/If he is used, his story will develop more. I'd rather keep his character into making his life have multiple possibilities instead of him looping over again.


I've already posted him but I'm deleting that thread so I can just post my characters all in the same thread. Feel free to criticize. The only thing I would do when reading your criticism is to either clear what is unclear to you or thank you for the criticism.



Samuel is available to be used in a role-play.






TO THE MOON. I LOVE THAT GAMEE
 

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