Aeolus The Hedgehog(Feedback Wanted)

[Riolux]

Aeolus The Hedgehog

Basics

Name: Aeolus The Hedgehog


Series/Fandom: Sonic The Hedgehog


Age: 17


Race/Species: Hedgehog


Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Straight


Occupation: ExtremeGear Rider

• Appearance
• Personality
• History
• Equipment
• Skills
• Read And Review

• Appearance
  
  Height: 5'6"
  
  
  Weight: 120 lbs.
  
  
  Hair: Green
  
  
  Eyes: Dark Blue
  
  
  Body: Has an nimble build
  
  
  Attire: A zip-up vest over a white short-sleeve shirt that has black sleeves and baggy black pants and blue shoes with black soles and straps. Wears grey gloves with blue cuffs and light orange fingers. On the backs of the hands of the gloves are blue stones that are purely decoration.
  
  
  Aeolus has green fur with bangs above his eyes. His arms are devoid of fur like some hedgehogs. Aeolus' Extreme Gear suit consists of black and red goggles, black fingerless gloves, a grey jacket with thin black pants that he can tuck the end of the pant legs into his shoes. His shoes are of a simple black and white design.
  
  
  
• Personality
  
  Aeolus is generally nice and outgoing, if a bit overly confident. On bad days he can be sarcastic and quick to anger, but will usually apologize unless the person really angered him. He becomes fiercely determined in competition, having a love for extreme sports like his friend, Mira the Fox, but doesn't take losing as seriously.
  
  
  
• History
  
  Aeolus has had a fairly normal life. He loves his parents, he went to school until he got his Extreme Gear career off the ground, but never really kept friends for long due to the fact that he grew distant from them when he started seriously competing. While he kept in touch with one or two of them, the rest went their own ways, still being busy with school. One day, however, during a race, he had been in second place, behind a maroon colored fox. Due to this being an amateur event, Aeolus had been fairly confident in his ability to win this race, but this racer had taken the lead from him several times. Slowly Aeolus caught up, and was certain he would pass her. He was just about to pass when his opponent did something unexpected. As they were passing over a pond, the fox raised her altitude slightly before swerving her board to the left, towards Aeolus, and jumping over him. His attention on the Fox, he failed to notice the board before it swept him off his feet, sending him and his board into the water, costing him not just the lead, but the whole race. Outraged that he had been knocked out of the race, he confronted her, calling her a cheater, and was even more infuriated when she merely shrugged and walked off. He raced against her several more times, always falling for a trick that would wipe him out of the race, increasing his dislike for her. So one time, during a race, he waited for her to try something. She tried to do what she did before, jumping over him so that her board swept him off of his. Recognizing the trick, he raised his board above her's, ducking so he didn't get kicked by her, and lowered the moment her board was beneath him, smashing it into the ground. This caused her to fall to the ground, still moving at the speed of her board. Upon landing, she screamed as she skidded on the rocky ground, breaking her arm and rolling twice. Aeolus, hearing this, stopped, feeling horrible for what he'd done, and turned back to help her. He lifted her off the track and forfeited. Letting the medical authorities deal with her injuries, he looked for the next race. They met again a month later, where she thanked him for not leaving her on the track despite what she'd done and he learned her name was Mira.
  
  
  
• Equipment
  
  His only real piece of equipment is his Extreme Gear.
  
  
  
• Skills
  
  Aeolus improvises during fights, having no real training. His reflexes from Extreme Gear aid him greatly though, and he is capable of moving at high speed, further aiding him. His lack of experience is an impediment, however.
  
  
  
• Read And Review
  
  I am hoping for Feedback for both him and Mira. Images will be provided once I use my other computer.
  
  
  

Theme Song

[media]



[/media]
I did not draw this. It was made using a Character Creator made by geN8hedgehog on DeviantArt


Please provide feedback. I will be improving upon my characters and it would also help to know what I to fix as well as what people think of them.