"Free Me"
For so long
I've been
fighting wrong.
Killing neatly planned,
I'm became a demon.
So shift the shadows,
from my soul.
Shoo away the evil crow.
Take these bloody hands,
Clean and free them.
Make my heart beat
Once or twice more.
Help me withstand the heat.
Bring my...
I also love Scar from Lion King. He is my role modle villain! Lol his character is very funny and just the right amount of evil and smart!
Gaston from Beauty and the Beast is an alll time fav too! He just loves himself so much! It brings me to tears laughing about it!
"Monsters"
A title I hold.
I carry,
I endure.
To be bold,
To be strong,
To be Fearless.
I will not fold.
I dare not give in.
I have to stand tall.
My hands go cold.
My heart starts to slow.
The dark creeps close.
Then I gleam gold.
Fire consumes,
Eyes turn to light...
"Pure"
An angel too pure for this world.
The demons found you and you fell.
They took you away.
Your smile will never bless me.
Your laugh will never warm me.
Your eyes will never see me.
But I will always know your stories.
I will always feel your presence.
I will always feel your loss.
My...
I just can't help myself!! Is there anyone who also just loves villains and their backround! So for all those dirty low down scum we just love to hate I've made a thread. Anything even remotly relating to a villain is welcome. How much you hate them. How much you love them. Why they are just so...
Seldil: Great job! The tension is well spread and placed! I also can already put myself in Kevar and Valen's places. This is good because now I can relate and share a bond with a character! You did well with giving them emotions just by showing their actions and you did well in describing what...
Hey! We have this on Nanowrimo so I thought I would bribg it over here! Post the last thing(or just somthing) you wrote. It can be a a couple lines or a paragraph, but try to keep it decently short. The next person that post has to say something(hopefully helpful or encourging) about your peice...
@Hellfire Ooooohh very interesting. I like the transformation and development. It would make a good song!
Here is mine:
"Angel"
Who were you,
Angel that I know?
Who were you,
Those days long ago?
Why do I shed tears
For you day after day?
Who do I feel the deep connection
Which inside me lay...