I've been watching the entry post and have been brainstorming on how to make my entrance. I should be able to get it taken care of within the next day or two.
I second that notion. It's kind of a whacky bunch, but that's what can make it so great. Looking forward to this adventure we're soon to embark on. Good luck out there everybody
Alrighty. Got around to adding the backstory. Removed those 2 augmentations. I also added a thing to his weaknesses about how he has plateaued strength and combat stagnation. Which is kind of a hint at the partially satirical nature of this character. He's not gonna go around throwing all his...
I can sneak in a quick response.
So I can forgo those 2 augmentations. I threw them in last second, so I don't mind just mutating that away. Without those in consideration, is it sufficient enough of a nerf?
(Finally got around to getting this done. I'm open for any critique or any neccecary changes.)
Name: Polemistis, Tharraleos
Age: 760
Appearance:
While under his human disguise, Tharraleos stands as a 6 foot man with bronze skin and loose curly hair extending just past his shoulders. He...
Well, let's see. Tharraleos is rather simplistic in the grand scheme of things in spite of the wall of text. He's a Tauroid Griffin with no real powers to speak of. In combat,he strictly claws, bites and punches his foes. Decades of battle has brought him to peak mental and physical condition...
Okay. So I basically unmutated Tharr and made him a normal Vardia. He's human shaped now with normal fur and feathers, though he now has access to a form even more fearsome then the Tauroid before. Let me know how it looks.
I bring those mystical cats up because of their nigh impenetrable pelage that sort of negates your previous point about fur lacking the essentials to be fortified. But I digress. I'm assuming I can't have Tharr wear a set of armor over his torso? It'd be rather uncharacteristic for such a wise...
Lore can be subjective, yes. Certain details can be given great merit though. What if this natural defense stems from Nemean Lion ancestry? That's why I state it would be weird if the fur wasn't included. But for simplicity's sake I'll comply and restrict it to the plumage.
Okay. Nixed the IQ, regeneration and the senses tracking thing (meant to remove that part of the ability anyway). The other request I implore we keep the same. This armor like coat is something given through a mutation and meticulously retained through frequent upkeep. I just don't see it making...
That point is irrelevant. You're referring to his average soaring speeds, which I've extensively detailed how crude and awkward of a flier he is. I was more pertaining to movement speed. He's still bound to the laws of physics, so even with how I describe things in his bio, he's not gonna be...
It's always so humorous seeing how exaggerativ people interpret Tharr's abilities. It sounds ultra dramatic in the character profile, but he's actually quite limited. Yeah he's deceptively quick, but even with that and his cognitive analysis, you can only move a body like that so quickly. More...
Full name: Tharraleos Polemistis
Nickname: Tharr (mainly used by allies)
Age: Just under 400 years old
Species: Vardia Griffin (mutated)
Gender: Male
Minor height: 3 feet,4 inches
Minor weight: 260 pounds
Major height: 5 feet, 8 inches
Major length: 12 feet
Major weight: 700 pounds...
Full name: Tharraleos Polemistis
Nickname: Tharr (mainly used by allies)
Age: Just under 400 years old
Species: Aerasginero Griffin (mutated)
Gender: Male
Minor height: 3 feet,4 inches
Minor weight: 260 pounds
Major height: 5 feet, 8 inches
Major length: 12 feet
Major weight: 700...
Guardian of: Mountains
Name Tharraleos
Gender: Male
Weapon/s: His body itself is a weapon. A unique mutation has made his skin hard as stone and his fur/feathers as durable as steel. Other more inherent tools are his horns, beak, teeth, claws, talons, prehensile wings and razored tail...