Thank you for the tips! I'll be sure to apply them.
As for Xavier, I do want to establish that the myths refer to them as demons even though they're not, so I've just edited it and hopefully it makes more sense now.
Ah, I didn't describe him well enough then, so that's 100% fault on my part. I...
Yeah, I personally can't stand making my forms overly complex/detailed, because then it feels like referring back to a textbook and doing homework every time I make an RP post, just to make sure everything about my character is in order. It's not enjoyable and I like my RPs to be fun.
Thanks...
Wow I actually named my OCs, hell has officially frozen over
Also added a bunch more, organized things a little better, and I'm essentially done except for maybe refining some appearances. That's about it
Makes sense. They're all pretty much done in terms of personality and abilities and weaknesses/strengths, but I am still trying to work out backstories and... of course, appearances and names.
Lol thanks! I just don't play female characters often but I should probably try. Maybe I'll make some female OCs to use in future RPs.
Basically all of them are open?? They're all WIPs to an extent, but I appreciate feedback nonetheless since it can help me in their development. :')
The following are best for: medieval fantasy RPs
Freniar Crow
(pronounced 'fray-near')
23; male
Nickname ... Frey
Race ............... Naimar
Build ............... Standing tall at 6'2, he's wiry and slender.
Skin tone ..... Very pale
Eye color ..... He has heterochromia; his right eye is...
I’m not sure if you want character feedback, bit I’ve got a few suggestions if you’d like?
She sounds like a Mary Sue. She’s good at way too much and doesn’t have enough weaknesses or things she’s bad at. Lines like “Can play piano without ever learning how” and “Sings, beautifully like a sien...
The following are best for: urban fantasy RPs; in which humans don't know about magic or magical beings
Xavier Benson
20; male
Race ............... Elemental
Build ............... Standing at 5'11, Xavier is slender and nimble.
Skin tone ..... Slightly tan
Eye color ..... Blue
Hair color ...
I agree with Randomfella. Maybe flesh out your characters’ weaknesses more; they all seem to be extremely strong and good at combat. What are they bad at in combat? Think of their physical strengths as well as their physical weaknesses to counteract it.
For John, he seems to have no weaknesses...
The following are best for: urban fantasy RPs; in which humans know about magic and magical beings
Eli Brown
18; male
Race ............... Sorcerer
Build ............... A bit short at 5'6, skinny, not very well-built.
Skin tone ..... Fair
Eye color ..... Pale pink
Hair color .... Light...
hey hi
I'm gonna throw some characters in here, but this'll be a WIP for a while. I have a hard time deciding specifics about my characters (especially names ughhh) but I want somewhere I can throw my OCs. I usually put them in the private workshop section, but I'd like to put them here so I can...