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  1. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    Thank you for the tips! I'll be sure to apply them. As for Xavier, I do want to establish that the myths refer to them as demons even though they're not, so I've just edited it and hopefully it makes more sense now. Ah, I didn't describe him well enough then, so that's 100% fault on my part. I...
  2. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    Yeah, I personally can't stand making my forms overly complex/detailed, because then it feels like referring back to a textbook and doing homework every time I make an RP post, just to make sure everything about my character is in order. It's not enjoyable and I like my RPs to be fun. Thanks...
  3. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    Wow I actually named my OCs, hell has officially frozen over Also added a bunch more, organized things a little better, and I'm essentially done except for maybe refining some appearances. That's about it
  4. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    Makes sense. They're all pretty much done in terms of personality and abilities and weaknesses/strengths, but I am still trying to work out backstories and... of course, appearances and names.
  5. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    Lol thanks! I just don't play female characters often but I should probably try. Maybe I'll make some female OCs to use in future RPs. Basically all of them are open?? They're all WIPs to an extent, but I appreciate feedback nonetheless since it can help me in their development. :')
  6. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    The following are best for: medieval fantasy RPs Freniar Crow (pronounced 'fray-near') 23; male Nickname ... Frey Race ............... Naimar Build ............... Standing tall at 6'2, he's wiry and slender. Skin tone ..... Very pale Eye color ..... He has heterochromia; his right eye is...
  7. PhoenixMire

    Character sheet layout/ Irene Turner

    I’m not sure if you want character feedback, bit I’ve got a few suggestions if you’d like? She sounds like a Mary Sue. She’s good at way too much and doesn’t have enough weaknesses or things she’s bad at. Lines like “Can play piano without ever learning how” and “Sings, beautifully like a sien...
  8. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    The following are best for: urban fantasy RPs; in which humans don't know about magic or magical beings Xavier Benson 20; male Race ............... Elemental Build ............... Standing at 5'11, Xavier is slender and nimble. Skin tone ..... Slightly tan Eye color ..... Blue Hair color ...
  9. PhoenixMire

    I need feedback on my characters

    I agree with Randomfella. Maybe flesh out your characters’ weaknesses more; they all seem to be extremely strong and good at combat. What are they bad at in combat? Think of their physical strengths as well as their physical weaknesses to counteract it. For John, he seems to have no weaknesses...
  10. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    The following are best for: urban fantasy RPs; in which humans know about magic and magical beings Eli Brown 18; male Race ............... Sorcerer Build ............... A bit short at 5'6, skinny, not very well-built. Skin tone ..... Fair Eye color ..... Pale pink Hair color .... Light...
  11. PhoenixMire

    character dump (feedback welcome)

    hey hi I'm gonna throw some characters in here, but this'll be a WIP for a while. I have a hard time deciding specifics about my characters (especially names ughhh) but I want somewhere I can throw my OCs. I usually put them in the private workshop section, but I'd like to put them here so I can...
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